VN Ren'Py Summer Haze 1 [v1.10 Ch.1] [JDseal -DSS-]

[ArturiousDesign]

It's a very good looking game and the story of a mom horny for her son is a welcome change. but the way the dialogue just flows into the next sentence without a break after each sentence is very distracting. I had to stop kuz that was giving me a headache.

Dev I would suggest redoing your script so when you press the space bar/enter it displays the next sentence not half a sentence. It would make the game flow better and not break up the pacing every half sentence ...

 

[SpecterX]

I guess he'll add more chapters later
The art looks so much like In-Case's work

 

[biggusdickusfab]

Guide start:

1. Left Click

Guide end.

let me know if you need other guides

the guide is one of his comics

 

[kullbibi]

good luck
JDseal

 

[WadeWilsoon]

Such a good art getting spoiled like this.. Not cool man.

 

[feeling_blue]

Looks familiar. Is it from some comics?

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

Looks familiar. Is it from some comics?

Read OP, Bro

 

[elmicho]

BRUH! THIS NEEDS TO BE A FULL GAME!

 

[Valronn]

Summer Haze 1 [v1.10 Chp.1] Unofficial Android Port

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My Android Ports have a 2nd Persistent save location. So, even if you uninstall the game, the saves will remain Intact.

Saves location: Storage/0011/Game-name


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[Valronn]

I usually get this from your ports and I don't know why, 2 different phones and different browsers comes to the same thing.

 

[Studio Kami]

Poor porn Fathers... If they're not killed by the devs, they are cucked by their own children...

Dad: "I'll handle this summer vacations just fine."

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Love you

 

[IncGamer]

Love your comics, we need more games!!!

 

[JDseal]

Hello!
I want to thank everyone for their kind words and I'm glad some of you enjoyed it! I do plan on porting all future chapters of this story into Ren'py so if you can I would appreciate the support!
Now to address some of the criticism:

Gameplay is lacking: yes
"Game" is too short: yes
Story is badly written: yes
Graphic tiles overlap: yes
Sentences are cut off mid-text: Well, while everything was made by choice (except the bad writing, that's just a skill problem which I can hopefully improve with time) this one was a problem I knew of but it was too late in the process to fix. I had the art ported before I thought about the text. Longer text blocks would have covered much of the art, so I just went with it as is. I will fix this problem for the next ports.

Cheers!

 

[JDseal]

You all really need to start adding pubic hair options for Milfs. There are an abundance of games with Milfs but no pubes, it's disheartening. Other than that, the art is great, keep it up.

You're right and I will add it for the next port!

 

[JDseal]

Some errors here and there (mostly missing spaces), and the paragraphs are horrible to read as they are cut of mid-sentence every single time (see screenshots), but the art is selling it. Calling two images an animation is also very far streched. Nevertheless, can't wait for more, maybe even more than the current slideshow.

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Yeah. I don't plan on changing much for the next ports. Except for how the paragraphs are shown, that will get fixed.

EDIT: hoe to how, *though I prefer hoe

 

[JDseal]

JD can draw really hot stuff but as he's not much of a writer.

Right where it hurts.... but true

 

[EroticRoundhouse]

Game won't start.

 

[Otaku2018]

Thank you for putting this art into Ren'Py.

 

[bykerz2019]

very good

 

[Zolkane]

we need more teasing, sex is too fast