It hasn't been updated for 7 months! the producer of the game made a short show on a whim and it's gone! I don't think it will come back again! He must have realized that this is not an easy task!
He did a very simple and negative job, both hasty and very short!
won't be back so I guess most people know about it!
If it were me, I would build it on different stories! different characters, different places, different times, each independent of the other!
The first release is very important to leave a mark and you should do the best!
Voice-over narration with the taste of a visual novel should be in the right decision to show every detail when you read and watch it, neither too hasty nor too long to wait! If I were you, I would start with 3 different stories in different cities for the first release. Of course, with a very good narration and fiction, without any rush! The producer of the game is very clear amateur! straight to the stage! Insufficient narration, insufficient description, no fiction whatsoever! I'm familiar with pictures from the internet! you wanted to see what he did because i know, but he still managed the animations more or less, but his literary language and expression is very bad if he will continue
1-Don't skip the details, for example, there is no map in this story! home town, no roads, no funerals, etc. The sadness and inner worlds of the mother and son at all! everything happens at once! very clumsy!
2-The person who made this project has no talent for this job, he must have had a lot of difficulty and gave up quickly, I think if he said final, at least he would have satisfied himself!
3- What if you got into this business, get help from a few people
-good script
- a good friend who knows this business and will arrange their bed
-wide perspective
pictures 7 out of 10
but the project is 4 out of 10
note: no one should wait, this project is finished before it starts!
