Very nice update for 0.12.
The dialogue modifications does smooth out the narrative a bit more if the lesbian path is chosen, making it better known that Summer has always been only into girls but has had trouble fully realizing and accepting it, and it now ready to dive head first into it!
I did notice it in how the dialogue with Cynthia goes as well with the middle options. I appreciate getting down to all the little details!
My second time through also made me really solidify that this group of characters are overall highly enjoyable, and that Lilly is one of my favourite characters in any VN I have played.
She's the perfect combination of goofy, naughty, cute, foul mouthed, sweet, adorable, etc. that makes a very likeable character.
Summer is also very enjoyable as a main character for much the same reasons.
I love the relationship between the two of them in all its aspects and am hungry for more.
Special mention to Yun too, very cute and I like her and Summer together a lot, especially in the role playing.
If you ever decide to open a funding method, I'm there.