VN Ren'Py Summer Is a Futa [v1.0] [WickedMavis]

[Icarus Media]

Oh shit we're on a game thread, sorry. Will stop derailing now.

 

[WickedMavis]

Futa protagonist, MLP, and Sunset! You have my attention, and I can't wait to see where this goes. Any chance for SciTwi, or just only normal Twi?
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Edit: After playing it, I'm liking it so far, also my earlier question about SciTwi is answered. But I do have some others, do you plan to have choices, like maybe choosing which girl to go for, to be dominant/submissive in scenes (letting Adagio dom you, or try and dom her), plans for a Summer and AJ scene, or is this going to be a kinetic novel with no choices? Also, you might want to add a box for some of the dialogue (like in the stat images) since it is hard to read them all.

Thank you for playing. There will be choices, especially sex scenes. There will be Dominant and Submissive scenes for both Protagonists and their partners. AJ and Summer will each have their own scene with each other. It will feel kinetic for this chapter, but for the next updates, there will be choices that will impact your scenes. Yeah, I'm fixing their personal info next update.

 

[Buddysvata]

I will give it a shot, as I always do, but I must say these character designs really scream lack of focus. This overdesigned approach is more distracting than pleasing to the eye. I get that some of the color palettes reference other media, but I've seen a lot of human MLP designs and they tend to be a lot less... messy.

Oh well, it is a superficial critique. I will have to actually play the game (and see the sex scenes) to make a proper judgement.

 

[Boyim]

The futa is a dom, and the penis is appropriately sized (huge) and looks good.
So this is automatically an 8/10 for making the futaporn correctly.

However I'm a little confused at how the story starts. It seems like it's a group narration of how a couple met eachother overlaid on some key moments in how their romance came to be?

That's sort of fun if it just lasts for a bit. But does it continue the whole time or are we never allowed to actually be 'in' the story instead of hearing about it with live giggling commentary?

Especially considering the characters are immediately shown to be nothing like their text dump descriptions, it seems we are being either spoiled as to how they develop, or are just being given large amounts of false information. This in addition to the lighthearted commentary from narrating spectators/reminiscers ruining what could be incredibly hot scenes by taking us out of the action and lessening their intensity and seriousness.

Also there seems to be no sound or music? Maybe that's just me.

Still hot stuff regardless. But I'd like to actually be IN some of these intense first moments instead of hearing 7 women giggling and making light of them. Hopefully it's just a soft start.

 

[loikl]

This looks great... or it did until I saw the netorare/netorase/netori tag bullshit. This only means one of two things.

1. The best-case scenario is that the dev doesn't know how the tags work and it's more about the MC stealing someone else's girl.

2. This is another piece of crap where they try to combine an MC who's capable of stealing someone else's girl but is illogically a pathetic cuckold...

I'll have to wait and see what happens, although all things considered, it might not even take 5 updates.

 

[Boyim]

MC stealing women is good and correct.

I highly doubt the 13 inch futadom chad who the Dev spent 5 lines describing as innately genetically superior and a blessing to every women they seed, is going to suddenly get cucked.

 

[Hatsuaki11]

gonna try this! still, waiting for be dom or be sub choices for MC

 

[Guyin Cognito]

Was fairly excited to check this out, then I saw the parentheses, and I actually closed the game. Fortunately, I went back to double check that I wasn't misunderstanding anything before posting this, and I HAD in fact misunderstood. So, the clarifying statement at the start was not clear to me. I thought you were going to put the entire game's dialogue in parentheses, and I could not figure out why anyone would do that. Now, I think I understand that it's just the narration.

I know this sounds pedantic and over critical, but I'm trying to be helpful. Seriously, I almost gave up and quit playing because of this. First, those are not brackets, they're parentheses. More importantly, I think I get what you were going for with saying that text is "in the present," but I think it would be much more clear if you just said, (The text in parentheses is narration.)

With that off my mind, I can go back to actually play.