Azraelith
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Is it not gonna be a shota protag anymore? That's a shameHi!! As we keep on working on the Substar page we wanted to tell you that we continue moving on with the next update. Next update will open a new place, the City Hall and add new characters. If we don't encounter any bug we should release it next week. We also worked on replacing our MC looks. It's an idea we had long ago and with the first release we received the insight we needed to carry on with that decision. Thanks to those who are interested in our game.
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NEW UPDATE 0.24:
Hello!! We bring you the new update. Plenty of changes and new content for this one, there's the detailed changelog.
Thanks for the support, ideas and feedbacks for our initial release. Update 0.25 coming next week for patreons and a few days later I'll post it here.
Rework for MC, Kayla, Giovana, Sprites.
Some CG with previous MC were changed to the new ones, others were removed waiting for rework.
Changes to intro, added 2 CG.
New Location "City hall" Including new characters. 5 CG.
0.25 Giovana and diving school storyline.
Next Update:
City hall focus.
New events for Shipyard. Tammy and Tanya storyline.
Minigame and stats progression. To be checked
Thanks!!
Hello!! We bring you the new update. Plenty of changes and new content for this one, there's the detailed changelog.
Thanks for the support, ideas and feedbacks for our initial release. Update 0.25 coming next week for patreons and a few days later I'll post it here.
Rework for MC, Kayla, Giovana, Sprites.
Some CG with previous MC were changed to the new ones, others were removed waiting for rework.
Changes to intro, added 2 CG.
New Location "City hall" Including new characters. 5 CG.
0.25 Giovana and diving school storyline.
Next Update:
City hall focus.
New events for Shipyard. Tammy and Tanya storyline.
Minigame and stats progression. To be checked
Thanks!!
I would love to have the option to make text boxes see-through, almost every scene is covered in a big way by the text box and having to hide it every time is somewhat annoying. Great stuff otherwise, keep it up!
Christ P Bacon
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MilesKiyaAnny
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Noice art style. I glad dev choose this sooo game can stand out more and with simple game about loving family at that
Horny Little Brother
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Hasn't MC grown too fast
I can't support someone who can't even design the main character in the game you made.
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Archbishop401
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dewrules
I want to point out an inconsistency in the review.
From review:
Writing: 5/5
If you mean writing as in story, it's typical for this type of game, but the are numerous misspellings and poor grammar.
So the immersion is broken with these issues, thus the writing is not 5/5, IMO.
The review is pretty generic, IMO.
The game is okay, not a 5 with the current issues I mentioned. The use of sprites is always a letdown for me.
I want to point out an inconsistency in the review.
From review:
Writing: 5/5
If you mean writing as in story, it's typical for this type of game, but the are numerous misspellings and poor grammar.
So the immersion is broken with these issues, thus the writing is not 5/5, IMO.
The review is pretty generic, IMO.
The game is okay, not a 5 with the current issues I mentioned. The use of sprites is always a letdown for me.
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nighthawk1275
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Appreciate you fixing the consistency with characters appearances.
Anyway, I was kind of on the fence about something in the first release, I thought maybe the island was actually some kind of militarily controlled town which is why the word "major" kept being used to describe the person in charge. But now that there is a city hall, and the we've seen the person in charge, mentions of elections, etc... That doesn't seem to be the case. So, I'm pretty sure the word you are looking for is "mayor" not "major". Major is a military rank when it refers to a person, mayor is an elected official who serves at city hall and runs the town more or less. You actually even used the right word a couple times but it's used significantly less than the wrong word which is distracting...
Anyway, I was kind of on the fence about something in the first release, I thought maybe the island was actually some kind of militarily controlled town which is why the word "major" kept being used to describe the person in charge. But now that there is a city hall, and the we've seen the person in charge, mentions of elections, etc... That doesn't seem to be the case. So, I'm pretty sure the word you are looking for is "mayor" not "major". Major is a military rank when it refers to a person, mayor is an elected official who serves at city hall and runs the town more or less. You actually even used the right word a couple times but it's used significantly less than the wrong word which is distracting...
CutieLvr
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Loving the game DatNG, but brother, you have to increase the size of the font. Can barely read the story.
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Noted!!
Thanks for all the feedbacks and opinions, this is our second update and we're aware that there's a lot to improve. English isn't my first language and even when I'm careful when I write I'll probably never reach a native level. About the consistency in the art, I'm comfortable with my current style, at some point I'll go and check older cgs and improve them. I've been working in some animations but I still need tons of hours practicing to show something. Again thanks for the positive feedbacks and allow me to learn from the negative ones. Peace!!
Thanks for all the feedbacks and opinions, this is our second update and we're aware that there's a lot to improve. English isn't my first language and even when I'm careful when I write I'll probably never reach a native level. About the consistency in the art, I'm comfortable with my current style, at some point I'll go and check older cgs and improve them. I've been working in some animations but I still need tons of hours practicing to show something. Again thanks for the positive feedbacks and allow me to learn from the negative ones. Peace!!