Lol I don't think players would be able to understand that reference even thought he meant it literally, I'm halfway through and I have no idea how is that gonna happen but we shall see.
Yes I agree with a lot of your points in terms her manipulation and corruption/brainwashing. HOWEVER,
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Even with my issues above, I was still hooked to the story as the premise set up by the author is so tense and thrilling that I want to know what happens next. 5.5/10 NTR Logic but 10/10 NTR HOTNESS!
Yes I agree, nothing comes close yet. But this has a much more interesting NTR story than Dark Hero Party.
All in all, I think this game in terms of its character choices and NTR tropes, is pretty similar to NTR Online (SAO). The author should collaborate with Fujino sensei for the ultimate NTR game.
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just to clarify since like im the guy who wrote all that stuff but also please keep ntr logic in mind that characters have to be somewhat ntr logified but here's some sort of realism explanation that went into it. Honestly, this is less of a rebuttal than to let u in what i was thinking. Like 90% of ntr logic won't exactly fly anyway but I try.
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I appreciate your explanation of the logic behind the characters decision. Yes I believe you tried your hardest to make it as believable as possible to the audience, I am speaking with the power of hindsight here after playing your vision of the story.
It was just frustrating as hell (maybe that was the emotion you wanted to evoke in your audience) to see unreasonable decisions made throughout the RV section of the game. The writing before the RV was very good as I can see how tediously you crafted the breaking down of Shion and the decisions the characters make in the game. It's just small nitpicks on my end where you could have probably written the RV NTR events a little better (in terms of nonsensical plot devices).
Regardless, a very job well done on the game so far. Scenes are loooong as hell (might be the longest I've encountered with the slow text reveals to build emotion) but they are necessary in my opinion. Hope you can add a proper skip-text function for QOL. You definitely have a top 3 NTR RPGM game here if you can polish up on your NTR writing and plot devices.
Onwards and upwards!
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He is usually in his office which is next to the shopping mall. If not, then you might have to provide more details like what is the quest asking currently.
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Does anyone have that save? Please, it's many hours of progress.Does anyone have a save after the city sale events? I lost my saves
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I have the same question, how do I invite Masaru for a drink? This reply does not make any sense to me unfortunately.
edit: nevermind, I figured it out
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And by the way, I'm already at the 21st of July in game, will the game just end when I reach the end of the month? I'm no where near completing the route but there's no way a game with these kinds of quests and "exploration" and where time keeps ticking all the time would have such a deadline?
zmfinga
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AFAIK the money deadline was just the foundation to build upon to the routes since there was no total amount of money stated by the dev that was required at the end of summer, but if you did reach that point let me know too
.If you have not used it yet, Zellemate's guide is really good to help work through the routes if you need any guidance.
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I thought Earl was a title like Duke or Baron and Timothy was that guys name
, if it's not correct then can you remind me what the quest is asking? Like find this Tim dude to start the RV quest?
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I talked with otto about the rv, got everything ready it says go get the rv ready and talk to Tim but i never met Tim beforeI thought Earl was a title like Duke or Baron and Timothy was that guys name
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I think what gives the impression of the text being long is the fact that it displays in a slow way, sometimes there are intentional time breaks in the display of text to give focus on the words being said. for example instead of saying.
"why did you do it.... you MONSTER!" it goes like "why did you do it. (set game to wait 1000ms) you MONSTER!" I personally much rather have the three dots signifying a pause than have the game make me wait 1000ms. so in this game you end up pressing enter several times before the paragraph displays entirely and that contributes a ton towards making the text feel hard to read. I never liked games that do not display the text instantly. because I read quite fast. I read in my life more than I speak. so when I get these baby reading speeds i get pissed. but well we cant have the perfect game can we.
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I cannot remember for the life of me who is Tim outside of him being the Earl, so talk to the Earl in his office, if that does not work let me know. The dialogue must be from Erica/Masaru since they've known each other, hence on a first name basis rather than the title.
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Also one more question, the game is time limited?
Like when you reach that august date, will the game just end it self on auto?
Like when you reach that august date, will the game just end it self on auto?
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It was the earl, lol i never heared anyone call him tim before, i was so confused thanks for the help
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I don't think so, but I haven't went past the time limit in my runs. The main debt quest I believe is just to serve the introduction to the routes, and it will matter much less later on in the route. But if you happen to get to that point, you can correct me.