As you can probably guess from the two-star rating, this review is going to be harsh. Really harsh. While I think the criticisms are deserved, I want to point out that I finished the current game (Chapter 4 at time or writing) and it wasn’t a wholly unpleasant experience. The spelling, grammar, and prose are all high quality even if the substance is problematic. So let’s get to it! I normally go with an essay form, but for the TL
R crowd, here is a short pro/con list.
Pros:
It's fascinating as a story because it’s so far removed from the goal of an Adult Visual novel which involves the reader not wearing pants. The author is upfront at the start: There’s no sex yet. Totally gonna add it later, but we’re four lengthy chapters in and the best we’ve got is naked hot tub time with multiple gorgeously rendered women while the MC keeps threatening to leave when they try to talk about or engage in anything sexual, like he just can’t wait to replay Skyrim when it gets home and these clingy whores are screwing up his schedule.
I don’t get it. The women are your typical male fantasies. Skimpy clothing, Double D breasts, nice hourglass shape, good faces. They love video games, anime, playing tabletop roleplaying games, and spend a significant amount of their screen time seductively staring at the MC who has less than zero interest in them. This game could almost pass as a deconstruction of the Adult Visual Novel genre.
Among the other visual novels on F95, it is unique, but that’s not always a good thing and this is especially true here. Since there’s no sex and timeline for when it will be added, you’ve really only got the story, and while it’s intriguing, a good story is not the main reason we’re here. As a philosopher might say, it is a necessary but not sufficient reason to play an AVN.
We’re promised a slow burn but instead we’re given an MC who aggressively and gleefully stamps out the embers. Perhaps we might see a hand job six years from now in Chapter 17. Who here is willing to wait around for that?
Pros:
- Gorgeous renders. Some of the breasts are a bit over-the-top, but over all the women are breathtakingly beautiful and easy to distinguish from one another.
- Spelling, grammar, and prose are all top notch. The author could easily switch to writing classic novels.
- If you consider the story as a tragedy about how the loss of one’s first love gave the MC multiple mental disorders that ruined his life, it’s engrossing.
- If you consider the story as an Adult Visual novel, it is an abject failure. After four lengthy chapters there is no sex and no timeline for when sex will finally be added. The author is upfront about this but that doesn’t make it any better.
- The MC is aggressively anti-sex. The mere mention of it will have him trying to leave the room. He thinks nothing of pushing and shoving women away if they dare try anything sexy.
- The MC is both physically and verbally aggressive with the women that surround him. His way of helping a woman deal with her anger issues is to shove her to the ground and scream at her till she’s crying. He threatens women frequently for their transgressions against him or his friends. He is seriously damaged and not in a way that endears you to him.
It's fascinating as a story because it’s so far removed from the goal of an Adult Visual novel which involves the reader not wearing pants. The author is upfront at the start: There’s no sex yet. Totally gonna add it later, but we’re four lengthy chapters in and the best we’ve got is naked hot tub time with multiple gorgeously rendered women while the MC keeps threatening to leave when they try to talk about or engage in anything sexual, like he just can’t wait to replay Skyrim when it gets home and these clingy whores are screwing up his schedule.
I don’t get it. The women are your typical male fantasies. Skimpy clothing, Double D breasts, nice hourglass shape, good faces. They love video games, anime, playing tabletop roleplaying games, and spend a significant amount of their screen time seductively staring at the MC who has less than zero interest in them. This game could almost pass as a deconstruction of the Adult Visual Novel genre.
Among the other visual novels on F95, it is unique, but that’s not always a good thing and this is especially true here. Since there’s no sex and timeline for when it will be added, you’ve really only got the story, and while it’s intriguing, a good story is not the main reason we’re here. As a philosopher might say, it is a necessary but not sufficient reason to play an AVN.
We’re promised a slow burn but instead we’re given an MC who aggressively and gleefully stamps out the embers. Perhaps we might see a hand job six years from now in Chapter 17. Who here is willing to wait around for that?