Well, the teachers' stories and Roxxy's were damn good. But...
Diane's pure crap and Jenny's full of shit: the "wrestling scene" in the comic shop is really awful and a very bad idea (it isn't funny at all). The dialogue between Mr Bubbles (is it his name?) and Kassie and the comic shop girl (the worst character in SS by far!) is the worst thing in the whole game.
I think that anything related to the pregnancy stuff and the monster girls (Aqua, the cow) is crap.
Most people keep telling "DC should hire another artist". Well, I think he should hire a writer, instead: a pro who's going to help him with dialogues and script.
My 2 cents, of course.
the asian teacher is by far my favorite story. even if its a bit rushed in some sort .. i mean, we just build the fucking glasses and instantly she want to touch MC dick with an excuse of "being abnormal of standard" (thing like that)
its fun with char that MC is already friend, like Mia, his mom and sis etc ...
but alots of chars, poping out of nowhere have this... like the hospital old lady (i dont hate her at all, she is nice, but the fuck is way fast and should build a little more)
lots of chars are like this, last add stories feel a bit rushed to me. i would prefer a bit more ... complexity, if i can say.
i mean.. roxxy... just turn crazy with Mc just like that ? wtf seriously ? and all girls feel like this. at beginning the game got a slow peace wich fit it better imho.
