whosthatguy
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- Feb 25, 2018
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In terms of the story concepts, in terms of the character arcs of Roxxy, Becca and Missy (sadly, Dexter and Crystal don't exactly change...) it's great, even though I'd have liked more explanation on why Becca remained a holdout in changing her opinion of MC.Who ever wrote Roxxy story isa fucking legand who deserves a medal
However.
They seriously need a proofreader, or at least someone on staff who knows the difference between "your" and "you're." With a game this dialogue heavy, it's becoming increasingly important to clean up the spelling and grammar errors.