You've done good work
WeirdWorld . I've really been enjoying the game so far. The scene with Jake, that some are understandably upset about, gave me a good chuckle. Characters and plot have been a lot more fun and engaging than I initially thought they'd be.
I find it funny how arrogant Ella is with regards to Jake. He has a lifetime of grievances with the world and could so easily turn against everyone if he becomes too arrogant/selfconfidant, even staying 'good' he is liable to turn against her because of her coaching methods and manipulative behaviour. His powers also have obscene amounts of potential (I think it is better out of the hands/reach of the MC for the sake of narrative), imagine if he turned feral and suped up. She isn't playing with fire, she is playing with a sun.
As rushed, and perhaps narratively bad, as it would have been, I am still a little disappointed that we didn't give Jess the banging of her life in the TV-studio bathroom. She was hot in that dress.
Keep up the good work, WierdWorld.