Ren'Py - Abandoned - Supervillainy [v0.4.1] [Pupsi]

For now 4/5 for the concept alone, absolutely love the idea of mind breaking superheroes.

I hope the MC doesnt end up being some kind of Antihero taking down "The Boys" style superheroines who are really "evil". I kinda like the idea of being the baddie

People saying there isnt much to do and all you can do is cum in a milk bottle are wrong

The problem is that the game doesnt give very good hints on what to do. there is indeed little content, but you can capture your first hero and convert her, but that is the current end of the questline

Overall this looks very promising if it doesnt end up super grindy

[v0.2] review
Good:
Very nice renders and environments.

Bad:
Nonsensical story.
Open-world map layout but the gameplay is 100 % linear. You spend most of your time looking for event triggers in the many locations.
MC goes from lovable idiot to kidnapper and rapist REAL fucking fast. It's a bit jarring.

Overall it's kinda meh.

Reviewing ver0.2
It's a good start.
I'm waiting to discover the futur usage of the labs and how the author will develop the scenario with the different powers / knowledge to acquire to be able to beat these heroins.
But so far so good !

Reviewing V0.2

This is a fairly normal renpy VN style game. The story isn't bad or too contrived to be unbelievable (given the nature of the superhero genre).

The Good
The Renders are good quality, and I encountered no crashes or bugs in my play through. There is a good 30 minutes of content or so without too much painful grinding.

The Bad
While there isn't too much grinding, there is a lot of blind flailing around trying to figure out how to progress. It appears that improvements on that front are likely in future releases however.

The Ugly
Well not too much ugly about this one so far. Some people thing the MC appears too young looking but he didn't really bother me. Some of the writing is a bit cringworthy for how rediculously stupid the supersmart MC acts. Also he seems to lack much imagination until a problem drops on his lap. But those are really just story nit-picks.

All in all, if you like mind control corruption super hero games this is probably one to keep your eyes on.

Solid demo, hopefully this one doesn't get abandoned like his other game (also very solid). Renders are good, no dialogue issues (kinda getting tired of games with engrish, glad to see its not a problem here.) EDIT: Am I a prophet or something... I must have jinxed this game.

Definately a great start. I disagree with reviewers that arent able to suspend belief for a while. Honestly, it's a PORN GAME with SUPERHEROES. So what if he would have to rob fort know to pay for that apartment? Dev makes it fun. Once you get used to the mechanics (not too hard to figure out, just not intuitive) game goes pretty smooth. Easy enough where you dont need a walkthrough. Cant wait for updates

Reviewing the Demo, at this time no further releases have been made.

Right now the demo is pretty limited, which is fine but I can already tell this is not something I would enjoy.

The MC is an idiot, which is intentional and done for comedic effect. The problem is, I did not find it funny. So rather than being a comedy/parody of supers being captured/dominated it reads like a bad porno.

The game mechanics are currently limited, with room for growth. With what is currently implemented, once finished, the game will still be limited.

The game feels like an early 2000s flash game.

Overall, I don't think the game is terrible, but I don't really see anything special at this point.

Great start and a promising story. typos are a bit annoying, but understandable and easily fixed. All in all, it's an exciting but brief demo, so keep up the good work my man. I'm watching this thread and await the new update.

A game with tremendous power, I will follow it with great care, I also like the attitude of the creator, as long as it continues to update and there is nothing strange, it will probably be one of the best games of corruption

Looking forward to future releases. Can't rly say much about the demo.
The setting is excellent. Like that the villain is goofy, who would suspect him to be the one who beats everyone and control them in secret. Cg is very nice, and started out 'strong' on Stardust which I always like, why make an adult game without any content in it.

Like the images and the corruption & rape combination. Keep it comming. Maybe be a traitor to catwoman? Might be nice...

Please also make multiple options / choices on how to treat people Please also make multiple options / choices on how to treat people

Great Fantasy and Good Renders but still a lot of work to be done


Now this Game has some really great potential. I love the Story as it is one of the few ideas that I actually haven't seen here. So that's a clear A on originality.
The renders are good quality DAZ renders, they are good and above average but not (yet) truly amazing.
The gameplay to my noticeable disappointment sandbox. And yes sometimes sandbox games work out very well. But sadly, more often then not they are and stay grindy and somewhat annoying compared to classic honest VNs. There is a reason that the majority of top rated and liked Games here are VNs and not Sandbox. Right now this Sandbox version is error-free, which is already rare with these, but at the moment you still struggle to see the necessity for sandbox here, so I hope this will somewhat improve with more versions. The writing is average so far, the idea is great, I love the fact that the player gets to be the bad guy finally, lots of games are so scared of making the MC an evil character and instead they try to create some harem holding 'good guy' who ends up being unbelievable, this game embraces the 'evilness' of the MC which gives it so incredibly much potential but this is so far not built on at all, there is incredibly little story development, until the player can truly identify with the MC we are missing about 30 Minutes to an hour of written Story development.
So in conclusion, this is an awesome game idea. But an awesome idea that is still lacking an awesome execution. It could go both ways at this point, so I'll start with a 4 star to reward the great potential and up- or downgrade based on development.

Gameplay: 2/5 | Renders: 4/5 | Story: 5/5 | Writing: 2/5
GRADE: 3.7/B-

Not a bad start to the game. Pretty basic and too early to say where it will end up. Hopefully it will be fleshed out more but I can't help but feel I played something similar to it before with the same concept. But that is not a bad thing if it manages to make its own path. A promising start that has potential to get better with time.

Wow. What a good start. Corrupting Stardust by making her silly using some machines. Nice fantasy
And there are so much superheroines left . . .

Just add some sound to the game and there will be 5 stars

The renders and the concept is amazing. There's a pretty big potential in this game. Being a super villain takes the Corruption concept to another level and I'm a sucker for MCU and DC comics. Just keep up the good work and I wish we get a harem later in the game. A harem full of superheroes will be crazy.