Ren'Py Survival Guide [Day 9 Fix] [RazzyBerry]

[varkatzas666]

great renders dude, waiting for more updates

 

[RazzyBerry]

that is one giant redhead standing in the kitchen lol....

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Why the Fuck do I Look 7 feet tall?!?!?

Looks like I overlooked the scale on some of the renders (119.8 instead of 100, looks like some pose presets messed that up, idk). Will get it fixed in the next version.

 

[RazzyBerry]

Played the game, got some questions and a suggestion.

Questions:
1. Is the tone of this game meant to be really lighthearted? Eva goes out with a baseball bat to bash in some skulls in what amounts to gym clothes. When it's been told that if anything bites you, you turn into a zombie. I don't mind it per se if this will remain a constant and the zombies are just a backdrop to the romance. Just be aware if you go down this route and players get used to it, don't drop zombie rape or things alongside those lines on us. Pick a path and stick to it.
2. Harem tag planned? The MC pretty casually went to bed with a woman he just met while his daughter is not just in the house but has shown the willingness to enter his room. Apparently getting caught by her with another woman while her mother, and his wife, could be dead for all we know, did not bother him. Is he an absolute imbecile or the mood is really that light hearted?

I'm trying to gauge where this game is going and I'd like to see some internal consistency to the plot, porn game or not.

Suggestion:
1. Fix the render in the kitchen scene in MCs first morning in the summer house. You have that render on here as a preview. Eva looks either 7 feet tall or the house is made for hobbits. She is back to normal size when they sit at the table together with the cop lady. Again, consistency. If needed, I can provide screens of what I'm talking about.

Overall, I liked the art. I'm just hesitant to really get into the game because I have no clue what to expect of the game (or developer) in the future.

Answers:
1. They originally did not expect to that they would have to fight a group of zombies. They will discuss it and learn that lesson.
2. Harem is planned, but I will make it optional. The handjob (Hannah) scene is going to be optional in the next version too.

Your suggestions:
1. It is going to be fixed. That was a technical mistake and I simply didn't notice that.

Let me know if there's anything else I missed and apologies for the late reply

 

[save8lot]

Looks like I overlooked the scale on some of the renders (119.8 instead of 100, looks like some pose presets messed that up, idk). Will get it fixed in the next version.
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Yeah, take a look at the scene with the MC and his daughter laying in bed together. In one shot (where you see the daughter from behind) all you can see is the MC's legs and feet and he looks very short compared to her.

Unrelated, but I would also like to say that i really like the look of the daughter. The reason I checked out your game in the first place is because she looked similar to the girl in "Daddy Daughter Love". I am looking forward to your next update.

 

[WLGWLG]

继续前进

 

[varage]

The art style reminds me of disney princesses haha.

 

[RazzyBerry]

Planned tags added under developer notes spoiler

 

[Havik79]

Is bukkake optional?

 

[RazzyBerry]

Is bukkake optional?

Optional. It is really going to realted to female bukkake (squirt). I'm not planning to introduce more male characters yet. I will probably remove this tag from planned tags for now to avoid confustion.

 

[Havik79]

Optional. It is really going to realted to female bukkake (squirt). I'm not planning to introduce more male characters yet. I will probably remove this tag from planned tags for now to avoid confustion.

Just add female squirt bukkake, more people will worry less that way.

 

[Sterkh90]

!OPTIONAL! NTR

I'm not planning to introduce more male characters yet.

I want to clarify. Will MC have female rivals? Or does it mean that NTR events will start in later updates with the arrival of other male characters?

 

[RazzyBerry]

More male characters are going be introduced, but in later versions of the game. I have a quite interesting idea, but can't spoil it yet.

 

[Rabobi]

Male rivals, any NTR interactions will be completely optional & avoidable based on player choice.

Even better, make an option to completely disable them so no accidental outcomes.

Will the lesbian stuff be avoidable? Or is this another open-relationship where the LI's fuck around with each other without the mc masquerading as harem again?

Also RazzyBerry ntr+harme do not mix. I don't know who told you it would work, but they lied to you.

 

[Rabobi]

I know that NTR is a toxic tag. The script is currently not focused on NTR, but I thought that it could work in some point. That's why I have it in planned tags. I'm generally open to suggestions and strongly rely on feedback from my player base.

Please be open about you suggestions and I will definitely consider them. I'm learning as I go since that is my first game and still trying to adapt it to make the majority happy. Just talk to me, I'm here to listen and improve.

My advice would be make what you want first and foremost, even if that means making something some one will hate. No matter what you do, you'll get haters.

As you put it, ntr is a toxic tag, at least in the sense it's very divisive. The majority of Harem fans hate it. Like truly hate it, it goes against everything they love or "stand for". Ntr lovers will hate it if it's not enough and it never will be when you try mix two genre's. If you are doing the game in the hopes of funding, you'll only really attract one side, because again harem lovers hate it and won't fund or support a game that makes content they don't like. They won't fund the enemy.

There is probably only one game that has been really successful in having both, but it has them spilt into two completely separate stories. You have to choose which you want and once you're on that path you're locked into it with no possible way to get the other content without a restart. The stories are also completely different and for all intents and purposes is two separate games with an alternating update dedicated to each story.

Most other games that have tried to mix the two end up being abandoned because of lack of funding or the dev can't take the bitching from both sides anymore.

Personally I'd love to see the ntr dropped completely and the les stuff being optional, but as I said at the start make the game you want first. If you try do everyone's ideas you'll end up with a pile of turd that has no direction and makes no sense because everyone wants something different. I realize that might sound like conflicting advice, make what you want, but don't mix them, but it's more like make what you want but realize mixing them won't work.

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

I agree mostly with what Raboobie says. Definitely stick with what you want to do especially if you feel it benefits the story.

The NTR thing is incredibly divisive, particularly because a lot of people don't know the different definitions of it and see any guy who's not MC with a girl and they lose their shit.

Netorare - cheating, cuckolding, MC can ultimately lose the woman/women
Netorase - sharing/swinging
Netori - Like the above two, only that MC is the one who's getting other people's women.

What I don't agree on is that NTR + harem don't mix. It just really depends on the storytelling and how it all fits together. Lewd Town Adventures seems to handle it well.

Anyway, if you go down this route, it's probably best to have a toggle switch at the very beginning to enable/disable NTR so that the people who hate it don't even get exposed to it or anything that sounds like it's leading up to it. They are a really sensitive bunch.

 

[zandalari]

I know that NTR is a toxic tag. The script is currently not focused on NTR, but I thought that it could work in some point. That's why I have it in planned tags. I'm generally open to suggestions and strongly rely on feedback from my player base.

I hope your bravery stands the test of time. I sincerely recommend putting a NTR switch at the beginning of the game to turn it on or off. That way you can still make the game you want and save some of your sanity.

 

[Osamabeenfappin]

See's monster tag, See's romance tag.........giggles.

Need to stop playing those damn Japanese RPGM'S

 

[R2k22]

Very short demo, but pictures looks sooo good,that is har to resist playing. I like the pixar feeling xD I hope to see more i neear future with much longer content. Finger crossed. All the best!

 

[RazzyBerry]

Just a quick update. NTR is gone from planned tags based on your feedback.

P.S. Thanks for ruining my rating on itch.io for something that wasn't even added to the game. I really try hard to improve and allocate more time working on the game (even got a new 800$ GPU just to speed up the renders). And it's often hard considering the fact that I'm a student with two jobs (thanks to mild COVID I caught, now I'm self-isolating and it gave me plenty of time for the game). I'm not mad, just disappointed how some people treat somebody else's work.

 

[Havik79]

I'm sorry dude but come on, if you have spent 5 minutes on any fap game site like this, even the slightest hint of NTR causes mass outrage and abuse to devs, it should have been abundantly clear before even starting, either don't do NTR, or be prepared for the shit people say and do, it's 2022, every fucker has to make sure the whole fucking world knows what they are butthurt over.