Good Points
+ Art style looks good and MC's (step) sister looks hot.
+ We have animations for sex scenes and they look good, The sex scene with MC's (step) sister had only one position, but we had tons of different angle, and speed versions, which is pretty good, adding a couple more positions along with angles could be pretty good as well.
Bad Points & Suggestions
- UI/HUD doesn't look good, it can use a lot of change, for example, why do we have big ass two icons at the top right of the HUD for the main menu and settings? It looks weird. They should appear on the save screen, the screen we saw when we press the ESC/left mouse button, at least the ESC/left mouse is bound to the save screen, so we don't waste time on going settings first with ESC/left mouse and go saves from there.
- The prologue and MC's backstory about his father can use more details and pictures, etc.
- The game can use some songs and background sounds for the scenes, there are countless of Non-Copyright songs/sounds out there to be used, shouldn't be that big a problem.
- Some character models can use some changes, like Rose, her face, especially her jaw, and chin is too pointy it looks weird and even unattractive in most cases, like when she opens her mouth, etc. A better design than the current one is needed. https://prnt.sc/sP_P28knUW8o
- Facial expressions need some work, especially when characters are talking with their mouth open pictures on the screen, they look quite weird.
- I have read DEV is thinking add certain fetishes, so my suggestion would be to make them completely avoidable, that way this game can have good content for each side.
- Translation is not good, I saw worse ones, but still, the game can use better translation and proofreading.
- The game gives you choices, but you are forced to choose one of them because another one always gives game over screen where you just die and see some text, which is obviously a bad point, DEV either should add real choices or should remove those choices since they don't matter at all.
- Things progressed too fast for no reason with MC and his (step) sister, even with some real reason it would be a little bit weird probably, but seeing how things progressed like that for no reason wasn't good. My suggestion would be to make the sex scene between MC and (step) sister happen along with their practice for the gaming show, every practice they might progress a little bit more, and then sex happens, that would make more sense.
- Having at least a main purpose or something could be good since currently, we have no main story at all.
For The End
Since this is just a demo, I'm going to give 4 stars rate, but I will edit my review right after the first version release, and if things stay the same I can't see any reason to give more than 2 stars with the current state of the game. I hope DEV will do a good job and fix problems, add features needed, etc, and release a better first version.
+ Art style looks good and MC's (step) sister looks hot.
+ We have animations for sex scenes and they look good, The sex scene with MC's (step) sister had only one position, but we had tons of different angle, and speed versions, which is pretty good, adding a couple more positions along with angles could be pretty good as well.
Bad Points & Suggestions
- UI/HUD doesn't look good, it can use a lot of change, for example, why do we have big ass two icons at the top right of the HUD for the main menu and settings? It looks weird. They should appear on the save screen, the screen we saw when we press the ESC/left mouse button, at least the ESC/left mouse is bound to the save screen, so we don't waste time on going settings first with ESC/left mouse and go saves from there.
- The prologue and MC's backstory about his father can use more details and pictures, etc.
- The game can use some songs and background sounds for the scenes, there are countless of Non-Copyright songs/sounds out there to be used, shouldn't be that big a problem.
- Some character models can use some changes, like Rose, her face, especially her jaw, and chin is too pointy it looks weird and even unattractive in most cases, like when she opens her mouth, etc. A better design than the current one is needed. https://prnt.sc/sP_P28knUW8o
- Facial expressions need some work, especially when characters are talking with their mouth open pictures on the screen, they look quite weird.
- I have read DEV is thinking add certain fetishes, so my suggestion would be to make them completely avoidable, that way this game can have good content for each side.
- Translation is not good, I saw worse ones, but still, the game can use better translation and proofreading.
- The game gives you choices, but you are forced to choose one of them because another one always gives game over screen where you just die and see some text, which is obviously a bad point, DEV either should add real choices or should remove those choices since they don't matter at all.
- Things progressed too fast for no reason with MC and his (step) sister, even with some real reason it would be a little bit weird probably, but seeing how things progressed like that for no reason wasn't good. My suggestion would be to make the sex scene between MC and (step) sister happen along with their practice for the gaming show, every practice they might progress a little bit more, and then sex happens, that would make more sense.
- Having at least a main purpose or something could be good since currently, we have no main story at all.
For The End
Since this is just a demo, I'm going to give 4 stars rate, but I will edit my review right after the first version release, and if things stay the same I can't see any reason to give more than 2 stars with the current state of the game. I hope DEV will do a good job and fix problems, add features needed, etc, and release a better first version.