VN Ren'Py Sweet Home Magic [v0.1a] [FictionStories]

[xXwankerXx]

Don't mean to be that one Debbie Downer ruining everyone's fun, but holy shit, does that MC look disturbingly underage. Not only this, he also looks like he's one dildo away from turning into a girl. What's up with that ??

So, do you play as a kid the whole time? Like, this is the prologue and then quick skip to years later we grow up and are an adult? Or is this whole story us playing some teenage boy?

Seems like it. I know MCs in incest porn games are in the vast majority of cases a bunch of underage-looking horny morons only wanting to molest and fuck their female relatives, but damn... this time, a dev went too far. Ain't no damn way he or she can tell us that pixelated fool is 18+. Nobody believes that.

Couldn't really get into it, as the MC being a kid bugged me. He is perving left and right, and it was just uncomfortable. The basis of the story is interesting though.

Hope this MC grow up. He's a fucking kid..

The big booty milf and those previews of him doing shaolin monk shit or whatever (8 and 12) are the only reasons why I downloaded the game in the first place, but I completely agree. That MC needs an upgraded look asap, sucker's too underage-looking for my and pretty sure a lot of new players and potential new subscribers' tastes.

Dev could use the guy's current looks for flashback scenes tho so they can't say changing MC's appearance is a waste of assets and money.

Either way, not my cup of tea (cause of the kid MC), still wish you the best of luck with this and thanks.

I'll never understand what the appeal is in this almost kiddy type MCs and lolis, when they go disturbingly close into almost textbook pdf stuff territory, but things need to change. Don't know if the dev got the Rule 7 approval from the mods, but making this type of game available on Patreon, of all platforms, is a surefire way to shoot yourself in the foot before even getting your name out there.

Hope the dev does some tweaking to certain parts in the story and MC's character as soon as they can before they get banned. Until then, it's a hard pass from me too, no matter how much I like the milf and the other girl, who's probably MC's not-sister, and how curious I am to find out more about MC's past after reading the overview.

 

[Raduga21217]

Looks pretty good. Good luck with your game and i hope u are not gonna abandon this. Also, please don't change the main character design, there are little games where you actually play as a teen (not a kid as someone said).

 

[TheRetroAiden]

Lovely game sure will play.

 

[maxtern]

Looks nice

 

[P4124v4n]

I'm getting strong True Bond vibes from this... Anyway amazing renders, hope this doesn't get abandoned.

 

[Noxedia]

Man, Ben’s life reads like a checklist of every wild plot twist you’d hope for in a visual novel: plane crash survivor turned elemental magic prodigy who’s also got to keep his family drama simmering while dodging sexy manipulators

 

[Tumai]

First Renpy game I've ever encountered that doesn't run on WIN7. (Just an FYI for anybody who run their AVNs on alt/older machines.)

 

[DoubleXX]

Yo, that Thicc ass mom though. Hey, in the game can you later be able to do something to make the other one grow up to be like the mom. LIke you feed her the right foods, use some magic, and make her dream of getting bigger. Then bam! Two thick characters. Don't have to get as big as milf, but halfway would be amazing.

 

[Jackpots]

The face of the adoptive mother reminds me of Wanda from Ms. Denver...I don't know why, maybe the hair! This is a very good start and if you're reading this DEV, dont trim the bush

 

[Maviarab]

Why would a random legal adult require adopting by anyone that his parent is not marrying nor is he reconnecting to?

These get worse by the week....

 

[anonymousguys]

That Korean girl are damm hot!

 

[Just Jericho]

Milf looks good, but MC is literally a 10 year old... This pedo shit should be banned from the site.

 

[OldBerry77]

Mom looks like Wanda Denvers a bit

 

[XqctaX]

the mc isnt under 18 hes just a short king, stop hating ;-)

 

[Tyrranus]

decent amount of content for an initial drop. frustrating cliffhanger bullshit place to stop that too many devs like.
I like that not everyone is super thin with tiny tits but Im hoping the body diversity expands a bit beyond thicc miilfs and the busty not-sister.

good foundation here, good writing, interesting to see where this goes

 

[IDontGetWomen]

oh yuh I need all of that. They need to just make every game have at least one lady that's built like this on this site

 

[love381]

great body proportions, you rarely see such curvy mommies in games these days, there is no content yet but we hope for the best, thanks for sharing

 

[Peri3481]

His cough cough adoptive mom. So where's the patch, eh?

 

[Blue3252]

Should have just made it shota and incest.

 

[waldo404]

hey, interesting start, thank you.

a bit of constructive criticism...
right out of the zip archive, there is a major problem, hopefully easily fixed: it's the readability of the text. White on grey, (barely) no outline, really? and accessibility options for text disabled?? that's a big no-no for me. I removed the textbox, it improved somewhat...

minor points, but it looks like corporate handler Zara dietary plan is comprised entirely of carrots ; and danielle and rachel sisters... maybe half, sure...