RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.65] [Fujino]

[mos555]

a long and good NTR story is a thousand times better than a vanilla

Long and good NTR stories are approximately 0.000000001% of the total number of NTR. I don't quite agree with the relative comparison. The usual average kinetic NTR novel is that the husband has gone on a business trip, and the wife who is left without sex is stolen by a neighbor. This is all that is needed for a regular NTR to make a fan of the genre happy. But it is much more difficult to write an average romantic novel with hentai that a fan of the genre will like.

make such stupid decisions in real life

Please note that in fact the whole atmosphere in NTR is only due to the stupidity of the characters. To be honest, I can't remember NTR games in which an adequate husband suspects his wife and tries to track her down, but the neighbor, a former CIA agent, competently hides both his wife and himself from the search for her husband. And then when the husband locks his wife at home, the neighbor calls him and says, "I don't know who you are. I don't know what you want. But if you don't, I will look for your wife, I will find your wife, and I will fuck her."

Sorry, flashbacks. Well, in short, the point is clear - the main pillar of NTR is the stupidity and unrealistic behavior of the characters. Tell me honestly, which is more difficult - to prescribe dumb characters and dumb actions, or to prescribe logical characters and competent romance?

So let's wait for INODA to turn ASUNA into his semen sack.

Make up your mind, are you defending NTR or are you just a fan of Inoda.

 

[oozaru2023]

I mean, that's all well and good for a "good NTR story", but that most definitively doesn't apply here (Nor to like 90% of NTR works, especially those made of actual existing series rather than original content XP). Here, like the great majority of NTR work, it devolves to "Make the MC's dick and sexual capacity negative, make the NTR dude's dick and sexual skills infinite even if they shouldn't realistically have it because they're a fatso/old man, turn the female heroine's sluttiness to infinity, and turn everyone's intelligence into the negatives"...that's what most NTR works of named series end up being, and Fujino's work is no exception, no matter how much longer and complex than the average 15 pages doujin it is, it still works off the same tropes that would never work in any good or realistic story XD

Well that's what the fiction LOL story is about, exaggerating the situations until they are believable, to get the public's attention, with a vanilla you know how it ends while with an NTR you are interested in the process of how she or he becomes corrupted and making the MC as stupid as possible. There is everything, even in games, but Fujino has thought very well about his work, that's why I tell you to build an NTR plot that takes time like Fujino does is not easy at all, it is true that the quality of part 2 has decreased in relation to part one, but that is due to the criticism of his compatriots who eliminated plots from the story.

 

[oozaru2023]

Long and good NTR stories are approximately 0.000000001% of the total number of NTR. I don't quite agree with the relative comparison. The usual average kinetic NTR novel is that the husband has gone on a business trip, and the wife who is left without sex is stolen by a neighbor. This is all that is needed for a regular NTR to make a fan of the genre happy. But it is much more difficult to write an average romantic novel with hentai that a fan of the genre will like.


Please note that in fact the whole atmosphere in NTR is only due to the stupidity of the characters. To be honest, I can't remember NTR games in which an adequate husband suspects his wife and tries to track her down, but the neighbor, a former CIA agent, competently hides both his wife and himself from the search for her husband. And then when the husband locks his wife at home, the neighbor calls him and says, "I don't know who you are. I don't know what you want. But if you don't, I will look for your wife, I will find your wife, and I will fuck her."
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Sorry, flashbacks. Well, in short, the point is clear - the main pillar of NTR is the stupidity and unrealistic behavior of the characters. Tell me honestly, which is more difficult - to prescribe dumb characters and dumb actions, or to prescribe logical characters and competent romance?

Make up your mind, are you defending NTR or are you just a fan of Inoda.

A competent romance or vanilla story is simply that, nice situations, romantic moments, sex and that's it.What really works in a vanilla is the quality of the drawing making the situations as sensual as possible and they are not even 0.000000000001% of authors who do that

 

[mos555]

A competent romance or vanilla story is simply that, nice situations, romantic moments, sex and that's it.What really works in a vanilla is the quality of the drawing making the situations as sensual as possible and they are not even 0.000000000001% of authors who do that

LOL what? Go to the "Clannad" and play, it perfectly shows how graphics are not important at all in a competent romance novel. There's enough text and music to shake your soul out of you. Or "Katawa Shoujo", in which the graphics were drawn in Paint. It's not about the beauty of the graphics. You don't even need a plot to make NTR work. Fujino's previous games show this perfectly.

You wrote:

I consume all kinds of genres, personally I like NTR more because it is more complicated to make than a vanilla or slice life, the author must think of a way to make the girl fall into disgrace, it is true that there are already many generic endings just like everywhere else but a long and good NTR story is a thousand times better than a vanilla

I told you that the NTR game is much easier to make than romance because of the well-defined features of the genre. I didn't write about graphics at all. Graphics are the last thing that really matters in a good story. But here's the funny thing. NTR doesn't need a story at all. And "long and good"(Like a penis of your favorite Inoda, right?)NTR is generally a rarity, just like romance.

You can decide if you're playing SAO Trap because of NTR or because of the graphics.

UPD

author must think of a way to make the girl fall into disgrace,

LOL what? x2 Why would the author come up with a way for a girl to fall into disgrace? NTR is the sexual theft of a partner. The author needs to figure out how a neighbor steals a wife from a husband who has gone on a business trip. Do you understand anything about NTR at all? I can just see how Fujino is sitting and figuring out how Asuna will fall into disgrace. Although stupid Kirito wouldn't understand anything anyway.

 

[dayumsonwhereyafindthat]

Any posts regarding ntr vs vanilla is automatically a mosaic to my eyes like dem japanese av. I jus want my update man

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

Any posts regarding ntr vs vanilla is automatically a mosaic to my eyes like dem japanese av. I jus want my update man

Just like 10 more days or 2 weeks at worst XP!

 

[chronoTrigg]

Some bros just demand too much from small companies making segg games. They are not AAA games.
Of course I would enjoy a good story but common, that's not the main reason we are here

 

[mos555]

Any posts regarding ntr vs vanilla is automatically a mosaic to my eyes like dem japanese av. I jus want my update man

Just like 10 more days or 2 weeks at worst XP!

It seems to me that the withdrawal syndrome has already begun. My hands are shaking, my vision is blurry, and only a fresh dose from the new update can improve my health.

 

[seifukulover]

I've derailed the thread again... I guess I just won't talk about Kirito's happiness anymore

 

[The Jailer]

For the mental health of this forum i hope fujino NEVER takes a 3 month break

 

[kinglionheart]

Or Administrator forbid, go to another country again!

 

[yonyon03]

so when is the update????

 

[DicksInSpace]

so when is the update????

a week or two

 

[Aniky Light]

anyway I never talked about a good ending or harem, also because I'm not completely convinced, who knows what's going through Fujino's head.
why did the fans ask him to remove Suguha from Hebishima? to put her on Inoda's dick?, but at this point Alice also had to end and Sinon too, but I don't see why Fujino should force himself to send them to Inoda, unless Inoda doesn't have a spell where everyone falls in love with his dick without thinking about how to progress with the story, more than anything people are interested in Asuna being fucked by Inoda. I just hope that Fujino thought with his own head the plot for Suguha and not that the others asked him
I don't like it when people tell him what he has to do, who did you take him for, for your butler? do you want cookies filled with ntr? what are you attracting him with your useless desires, let him work, or rather, live and let live, what are you complaining about? the game is his and he can do what he wants. One day he might wake up and decide to make SAO ntr where the playable character is Asuna and Suguha is the bastard who tries to steal Kirito xD

Wait are you still reading?

I'm done

seriously

I swear I'm done

enough, there's nothing left to read, so start scrolling down the page xD

 

[unclover]

I have a question. I've been in multiple scenes where there is an option to use the puridince value to do something different than standard like when kirito interacts with liz. I have the amount it needed 10 but it still says I dont have enough puridience value. However, when I replay the scene in the viewroom the choice I couldnt make occurs when I press "key events only". Is the puridience stuff going to be implemented later still or is it a glitch?

 

[k1r1to]

I COME HERE TO DEFEND NTR, here are my reasons:

I consume all kinds of genres, personally I like NTR more because it is more complicated to make than a vanilla or slice life, the author must think of a way to make the girl fall into disgrace, it is true that there are already many generic endings just like everywhere else but a long and good NTR story is a thousand times better than a vanilla, it leaves you with the desire to hit the author or complaining about why he made that decision and that is where the other point comes in, which is dividing between what is real and what is fiction, since therefore you know that it is fictional, that it is almost impossible for someone to really make such stupid decisions in real life or that the MC has neglected his marriage or dating relationship so much since having sex is an important and essential part. So let's wait for INODA to turn ASUNA into his semen sack.
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it's crazy how vanilla fans have lost their minds now lol. that cringe ass vanilla trope between suguha and kirito ain't gonna last forever xD. can't wait to see them all sad when inoda makes suguha fall for his dick too

 

[900bs]

I have a question. I've been in multiple scenes where there is an option to use the puridince value to do something different than standard like when kirito interacts with liz. I have the amount it needed 10 but it still says I dont have enough puridience value. However, when I replay the scene in the viewroom the choice I couldnt make occurs when I press "key events only". Is the puridience stuff going to be implemented later still or is it a glitch?

If this is the first massage from Liz, then there really is a bug and although it says 10 values of lust are needed, in reality you need 20.

 

[k1r1to]

visual representation of the ending