RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.79] [Fujino]

[Rhi1234]

Is there any liz content

 

[gaka200]

Is there any liz content

Not this time.

 

[kinglionheart]

It did surprise me, but I was confused as to what Inoda was going to even attempt to do IRL. Since I think most of the progress needs to be done in FOG before it starts translating back into IRL. At least it has to be like that because of how Part 2 did the soft reset on Inoda and Asuna's relationship. But yeah this update was the one that more or less lets the floodgates out and everything is probably free game at this point.

Basically if things go IRL next update I'm kind of fine with it. I don't think IRL is next update just yet, but since Asuna is now broken in FOG, it's all up in the air now.

It seems most of this update's time and effort went to setting up the story and maybe the maze. Almost everything that happened surprised me except Asuna's complete willingness in FOG. Though the details of how that happened still surprised me. On the sex scene part, Asuna's were all hot. The other characters not so much.

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[albakr0ss]

Is anyone amused as I am that the Monday IRL Asuna was with Kirito! not Inoda? Everyone thought it will be Inoda making Asuna do something to make up for killing him but no. Nothing happened. We really overthinking on that one!

OH definitely me. I'm pretty sure I made a whole post about monday was going to be Asuna making it up to Inoda so genuinely color me surprised that had absolutely nothing to do with anything. Hey King, i've a question though the at some point during the testing with Liz and Kirito there's a status that pops up and say something like Spearhead acquisition or something like that text? It's not in the perks but it's definitely there you have any idea what that could be?

 

[xJuma]

They write that the update is bad and dissatisfied, so here it is
1. Don't forget that in August the author left on business, so we don't take August into account
2. He made a bonus game, although it didn't come out. But it is more likely not a cancellation, but will be later, maybe in the new year
3. He also probably thought over the plot, development, now from the update it is clear that progress has been made, maybe in the fall this will be the last update before the third part, or maybe not
4. The animation of sex has become better, in fact, they have become more interesting.

In the end, I liked the update, although short, but there is progress.

Oh yeah, I forgot, you play for free, I also play for free, but I don't scold, right?

You're completely right. It's not even bad, lots of player prolly just skip through everything, only see that there are 2 new Asuna scenes in the gallery and then come here to complain.

The last scene had by far the most variations of all until now I think and scales the corruption in FGO for the future extremely. Just look at the valuation of Kirito - he lost 98 points, he's "only" at 900 now. biggest tank by far.

I look incredibly forward to the next update. Praise Fujino.

 

[xJuma]

OH definitely me. I'm pretty sure I made a whole post about monday was going to be Asuna making it up to Inoda so genuinely color me surprised that had absolutely nothing to do with anything. Hey King, i've a question though the at some point during the testing with Liz and Kirito there's a status that pops up and say something like Spearhead acquisition or something like that text? It's not in the perks but it's definitely there you have any idea what that could be?

Someone already reported that bug on patreon, apparently the perks didnt really update at the end.

 

[oohprettyflowers]

I really think he needs to get someone to help write dialogue, especially Asuna's. Her dirty talk was all over the place, even accounting for her being nervous and ashamed doing it in the first place. I guess he's using MTL for the english? Lots of errors when it comes to names and stilted writing all over.

 

[gaka200]

It seems most of this update's time and effort went to setting up the story and maybe the maze. Almost everything that happened surprised me except Asuna's complete willingness in FOG. Though the details of how that happened still surprised me. On the sex scene part, Asuna's were all hot. The other characters not so much.

Yeah the Alice and Leafa ones were kind of disappointing. I sure hope the Leafa one doesn't mean the old middle manager is going to gun for Suguha. Cause Suguha still doing crazy shit to Kirito is still probably one of the more interesting parts.

I imagine Alice will just have sex scenes every now and then, but not as much major story progression. By the way, the mind inprint thing has a bunch of things on it now. They don't seem to do anything, and might just be flavor text as to what she's currently being hypnotized under.

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[cloudconnected]

It was ok. Asuna did say she found a way to relieve the stress, I hope in the few coming updates this method of stress relief will come to real life.
Alice's scenes were ok, but didn't really care for her.
Shame there was no Suguha POV of what she did to Kirito at his apartment, as well as shame there was no x-ray of the climax at the end there... would have went well with those Asuna's eyes.

Update felt lacking, sure, but there was lots of plot so to say, if you don't just skip everything, that is.

 

[gaka200]

I really think he needs to get someone to help write dialogue, especially Asuna's. Her dirty talk was all over the place, even accounting for her being nervous and ashamed doing it in the first place. I guess he's using MTL for the english? Lots of errors when it comes to names and stilted writing all over.

You'll just have to wait for whenever Part 2 is done and it goes to Saikey I guess. Since that seems to be the way you'll get a better translation and maybe writing on how it's done. But the MTL is pretty good for what it's worth.

 

[gaka200]

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ngl it cracked me up rofl.

 

[kinglionheart]

Yeah the Alice and Leafa ones were kind of disappointing. I sure hope the Leafa one doesn't mean the old middle manager is going to gun for Suguha. Cause Suguha still doing crazy shit to Kirito is still probably one of the more interesting parts.

I imagine Alice will just have sex scenes every now and then, but not as much major story progression. By the way, the mind inprint thing has a bunch of things on it now. They don't seem to do anything, and might just be flavor text as to what she's currently being hypnotized under.

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I guess another we were wrong about is this is the end of Alice's story.

ngl it cracked me up rofl.

She came in like horror movie villain!

 

[albakr0ss]

I really think he needs to get someone to help write dialogue, especially Asuna's. Her dirty talk was all over the place, even accounting for her being nervous and ashamed doing it in the first place. I guess he's using MTL for the english? Lots of errors when it comes to names and stilted writing all over.

Oh agree for this one. Going by the perk this is the first level of dirty talk but she seems to have quite literally gone all in basically on the dirty talk. Doesn't seem like there was any inhibition anymore she went from a slight freudian slip to actual just whore play which was kind of weird. Definitely must be a translation that Saikey will clean up later on.

 

[Desgarraador]

need more IRL scenes , asuna anal training and more corrupted asuna .. buuuut eh mister fujino doing well . slow cooking vs player desires thats why some of us are not happy enought

I'm not interested in anal, I just want it to slowly get corrupted in real life. (In my opinion anal is either end of the line or never)

 

[Desgarraador]

They write that the update is bad and dissatisfied, so here it is
1. Don't forget that in August the author left on business, so we don't take August into account
2. He made a bonus game, although it didn't come out. But it is more likely not a cancellation, but will be later, maybe in the new year
3. He also probably thought over the plot, development, now from the update it is clear that progress has been made, maybe in the fall this will be the last update before the third part, or maybe not
4. The animation of sex has become better, in fact, they have become more interesting.

In the end, I liked the update, although short, but there is progress.

Oh yeah, I forgot, you play for free, I also play for free, but I don't scold, right?

Everyone who asks for content quickly must be premature ejaculators.

Learn to take it easy, as I know the author is someone who has another job, so if any of you work you should know that time is shorter for these things.

The important thing is that it is clear that he is working on the game and is not neglecting it. I like slow but well-done work rather than rushed work.

 

[lev123456]

̶G̶O̶D̶ GATSU?

 

[gaka200]

Oh agree for this one. Going by the perk this is the first level of dirty talk but she seems to have quite literally gone all in basically on the dirty talk. Doesn't seem like there was any inhibition anymore she went from a slight freudian slip to actual just whore play which was kind of weird. Definitely must be a translation that Saikey will clean up later on.

Maybe lvl 3 is pet names and calling Inoda master or something. Like she went into whore play, but there's probably still more excessive form of this kind of talk.

OH definitely me. I'm pretty sure I made a whole post about monday was going to be Asuna making it up to Inoda so genuinely color me surprised that had absolutely nothing to do with anything. Hey King, i've a question though the at some point during the testing with Liz and Kirito there's a status that pops up and say something like Spearhead acquisition or something like that text? It's not in the perks but it's definitely there you have any idea what that could be?

My guess would be that spearhead is just a bad MTL translation for "being on top". Or spearhead just referring to Inoda pounding her harder and her accepting it. But yeah I don't recall Asuna actively doing a cowgirl position herself yet.

 

[MMJunko12345]

In fact, if the game is purchased, just because it is downloaded pirated does not mean that it is officially free.

 

[Lazym3]

I was quite disappointed by the irl scenes, here I thought it would be Indo, but it's Kirito!

Anyway, this is probably the last time Kirito will have a sex scene with Asuna because frankly Asuna is now deeply corrupted it won't be long till Indo could fuck her irl.

Either way while the main heroine sex scenes are very disappointing this update, the MVP right now is definitely Alice.

I really like the scene, especially when you could make choices and actually has a different scenario first time for this game.

Overall, it's a decent update.

I only play this for free, so I wouldn't really complain beggars can't be choosers after all.

 

[Animefan_09]

Just finished downloading, now the real question is if i should just play it today or wait 1 or 2 days for the inevitable bugfix update xD