RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.65] [Fujino]

[Yamakasi20]

Considering Fujino has been attacked for everything he does and doesn't do, he has long cultivated a body of steel! "There is too much Asuna corruption. There is not enough" . Always someone has something to complain about.


He has a day job and only works on the game at night and his free time. If you are one of his paid subscribers then go to his sites and complain there so he can hear you.

I still think this is the best game on F95.

So send Fujino some love from me, and if he needs anything we can help with,
like a certain goal which would help him render/work more dilligently,

Please voice it out so we can all work together towards it.

As far as the game story goes,
I will not start advicing the one who made the best game on F95 on how to make games/write story.

 

[SixDates]

As far as the game story goes,
I will not start advicing the one who made the best game on F95 on how to make games/write story.

It´s strange of you to bring this up in this thread, but Nitrolith, the creator of Hero Party Must Fall, is quite receptive to helpful advice and constructive criticism. Hit him up politely about the story if you want.

So send Fujino some love from me, and if he needs anything we can help with,
like a certain goal which would help him render/work more dilligently,

Please voice it out so we can all work together towards it.

There is no reasonable amount of Nipponese dollarinos you or we could give Fujino to smooth the development of the game, as the biggest issue with the development of the game currently is Fujino´s juggling of his actual job and the creation of the updates. And it´s not an issue with his regular income, Fujino must work a proper job in Japan to maintain his work visa. So unless he manages to find another gig with fewer hours, there will not be many changes in the current pace of development.

I'm saying that not Inoda is a smart manipulator, but Asuna was already a fallen whore, but locked deep inside herself.

That's how the plot goes, Inoda thinks he's a manipulator( Sometimes he does and says very stupid things, what a manipulator he is. ) Liz's attitude towards him clearly said that this was not the case.

Here what you are saying is a bit interesting, because while I do agree with parts of it for example the fact that Asuna was already a whore before getting Pigged´ by the Fatso of Inoda.

That being said, I believe that Inoda´s portrayal as an emotional manipulator is pretty good from a realistic perspective. He isn´t an Aizen character who cleverly crafted several devious plans to corrupt Asuna, instead most of the time he keeps getting lucky thanks to coincidences given to him by the author. Yet, his clumsy and pathetic attempts to guilt trip and appeal to the emotions of Asuna is something much more akin to what happens in real life than the depictions of some Hollywood psychopaths who are perfect actors and illogically clever in their every move.

It´s a pretty common story, How many women had boyfriends who threatened to kill themselves if they broke up with them?
More often than not, people who emotionally manipulate others in real life are clumsy doing their best to play the victim, guilt trip others in their favor, and acting not so much different than the Piggy Inoda´s does when he trembles in his fatty boots when faced with consequences.

Now, why does this work with Asuna and not every random girl in the game?

This too works as a very good reflection of real life, emotional manipulators are only able to affect people who are already prone to being taken advantage of in the first place. People with low self-esteem, guilt, passive/doormat personalities, traumatic pasts, no support system by friends and families, etc.


Now, whatever you want to say that the portrayal of Asuna in this game does not fit with the one in the novels/manga/anime, that´s fine but it´s to be expected when we are dealing with porn parody, and one with NTR as the central theme at that.






I ended up yapping way too much about meaningless, non-Suguha topics, which is a shame because there is something that I found very interesting in the last update related to Suguha, something that no one has brought up so far, but haven´t had the chance to talk about it yet. I would it in this post but I don´t want to muddle my beautiful incestual Queen´s discussion with anything related to the fat pig and Slutsuna if I can help it.

 

[throdo]

It´s strange of you to bring this up in this thread, but Nitrolith, the creator of Hero Party Must Fall, is quite receptive to helpful advice and constructive criticism. Hit him up politely about the story if you want.



There is no reasonable amount of Nipponese dollarinos you or we could give Fujino to smooth the development of the game, as the biggest issue with the development of the game currently is Fujino´s juggling of his actual job and the creation of the updates. And it´s not an issue with his regular income, Fujino must work a proper job in Japan to maintain his work visa. So unless he manages to find another gig with fewer hours, there will not be many changes in the current pace of development.





Here what you are saying is a bit interesting, because while I do agree with parts of it for example the fact that Asuna was already a whore before getting Pigged´ by the Fatso of Inoda.

That being said, I believe that Inoda´s portrayal as an emotional manipulator is pretty good from a realistic perspective. He isn´t an Aizen character who cleverly crafted several devious plans to corrupt Asuna, instead most of the time he keeps getting lucky thanks to coincidences given to him by the author. Yet, his clumsy and pathetic attempts to guilt trip and appeal to the emotions of Asuna is something much more akin to what happens in real life than the depictions of some Hollywood psychopaths who are perfect actors and illogically clever in their every move.

It´s a pretty common story, How many women had boyfriends who threatened to kill themselves if they broke up with them?
More often than not, people who emotionally manipulate others in real life are clumsy doing their best to play the victim, guilt trip others in their favor, and acting not so much different than the Piggy Inoda´s does when he trembles in his fatty boots when faced with consequences.

Now, why does this work with Asuna and not every random girl in the game?

This too works as a very good reflection of real life, emotional manipulators are only able to affect people who are already prone to being taken advantage of in the first place. People with low self-esteem, guilt, passive/doormat personalities, traumatic pasts, no support system by friends and families, etc.


Now, whatever you want to say that the portrayal of Asuna in this game does not fit with the one in the novels/manga/anime, that´s fine but it´s to be expected when we are dealing with porn parody, and one with NTR as the central theme at that.



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I ended up yapping way too much about meaningless, non-Suguha topics, which is a shame because there is something that I found very interesting in the last update related to Suguha, something that no one has brought up so far, but haven´t had the chance to talk about it yet. I would it in this post but I don´t want to muddle my beautiful incestual Queen´s discussion with anything related to the fat pig and Slutsuna if I can help it.

Please tell on what happened with Suguha..

 

[Infeno2.0]

If memory fragments with Asuna and Oberon continue to appear in the game and Kirito fully learns what happened to her in captivity, I think it would be nice to do something like a gray (neutral) ending. Where Asuna had already fallen out of love with Kirito and became a sex slave (as with Oberon.) and Kirito don't care about her , he has Suguha or Liz or his right hand... it doesn't matter.

Although what am I talking about? Kirito is so dumb here that he'll just think that someone is playing with his memory and it can't be that Asuna cheated on him.

One thing to, maybe and is a big maybe, validate the neutral ending theory is the fact that Fujino in his reports mentioned several times that he is reanalizing/rethinking the the story. And another thing Fujino keep coming back to SAO Canon every time he hits a bump and this turn his story from parody to a patchwork quilt from canon bringing more SAO fans and they start nitpicking his story.
I think now his moving the story more according to the available maps then anything else, he said himself every time he needs to include a new scene/animation in one of the maps due to overuse of that said map create a mountain of bugs like a domino effect on the entire game old scenes. So he need to keep changing the story on the fly to put a new scene to a less used map, but at the same time he keep adding more stuff.
But the primary reason at least for me, Fujino is not very pleased with his own plot argument due to constant changes, the last update was not very well received, mostly by his fans in China and Japan they found it lacking and complain about it, and you can tell by his message in the report he's not very happy about that because his spend more time than ever doing the update.

 

[SixDates]

Please tell on what happened with Suguha..

That's the thing, while I think this small tidbit might have big implications in the future for Sugu, it wasn’t something that happened in a scene with Suguha.


During the early parts of the last update, when Asuna and Kirito are going out on a date to the cinema there were a lot of stuff that happened that might be foreshadowing for the future.

Amongst those the meeting with Hebishima was interesting, not because anything that happened between those three, but the discussion between Kirito and Asuna afterwards.

Kirito started going on and on about how much of a scumbag Hebishima is, and how he was a bad influence on Suguha due to her changes in speech pattern and way of dressing up.

The joke of the conversation was how Kirito was sure that Sugu wouldn't allow anything to happen, when every player already knows that Suguha was a victim of his and his generic tanned ntr-dick.

What's interesting for Suguha's future is what happened when Asuna hinted at the possibility of Sugu liking Hebishima.

Kirito blew his casket and started going on and on about how he as a big brother wouldn't allow that to happen.

A normal statement right? After all, no one would like their friend or family to be involved with a scumbag like Hebishima. But, what's truly interesting is Asuna's reaction to that comment from Kirito.

She was silent, but perturbed by that comment. Like Kirito was being weird, or too possessive of his sister in an abnormal way.


Throughout the update Asuna had made similar pauses and reactions whenever something hinted at Kirito cheating, but this was different. It was solely focused on the idea of Kirito being too attached to Suguha.

I believe this is a hint of a possible path that Fujino decided to laid out now, either with Suguha ending up getting NTR'ed once again to trample over Kirito's feelings of protectiveness, or the much better outcome for me, the possibility that Kirito has a subconscious attraction and possessive tendencies towards Suguha after spending so much time together in part 2.




Am I losing my mind after inhaling unhealthy amounts of Sugu's copium ? Probably, but just like I believed in Satoru Gojo's comeback until the last chapter of JJK, I will believe in a happy ending for Suguha until the day Fujino finishes this game.

 

[4-kun]

That's the thing, while I think this small tidbit might have big implications in the future for Sugu, it wasn’t something that happened in a scene with Suguha.


During the early parts of the last update, when Asuna and Kirito are going out on a date to the cinema there were a lot of stuff that happened that might be foreshadowing for the future.

Amongst those the meeting with Hebishima was interesting, not because anything that happened between those three, but the discussion between Kirito and Asuna afterwards.

Kirito started going on and on about how much of a scumbag Hebishima is, and how he was a bad influence on Suguha due to her changes in speech pattern and way of dressing up.

The joke of the conversation was how Kirito was sure that Sugu wouldn't allow anything to happen, when every player already knows that Suguha was a victim of his and his generic tanned ntr-dick.

What's interesting for Suguha's future is what happened when Asuna hinted at the possibility of Sugu liking Hebishima.

Kirito blew his casket and started going on and on about how he as a big brother wouldn't allow that to happen.

A normal statement right? After all, no one would like their friend or family to be involved with a scumbag like Hebishima. But, what's truly interesting is Asuna's reaction to that comment from Kirito.

She was silent, but perturbed by that comment. Like Kirito was being weird, or too possessive of his sister in an abnormal way.


Throughout the update Asuna had made similar pauses and reactions whenever something hinted at Kirito cheating, but this was different. It was solely focused on the idea of Kirito being too attached to Suguha.

I believe this is a hint of a possible path that Fujino decided to laid out now, either with Suguha ending up getting NTR'ed once again to trample over Kirito's feelings of protectiveness, or the much better outcome for me, the possibility that Kirito has a subconscious attraction and possessive tendencies towards Suguha after spending so much time together in part 2.

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Am I losing my mind after inhaling unhealthy amounts of Sugu's copium ? Probably, but just like I believed in Satoru Gojo's comeback until the last chapter of JJK, I will believe in a happy ending for Suguha until the day Fujino finishes this game.

Yeah, these little situations also made me wonder what purpose they actually serve. For one, they might be setting up some doubts in Asuna's mind about Kirito, or perhaps showing us how Kirito sees Suguha in a more attractive light. Considering previous updates, the peeking scene could amplify this change. While I don't dismiss the possibility of Fujino turning her into an NTR victim again for some nonsensical reason, given her character, it doesn't make sense, tbh. So, I’m leaning toward the idea that he may actually be more open toward her as his corruption progresses.

 

[throdo]

That's the thing, while I think this small tidbit might have big implications in the future for Sugu, it wasn’t something that happened in a scene with Suguha.


During the early parts of the last update, when Asuna and Kirito are going out on a date to the cinema there were a lot of stuff that happened that might be foreshadowing for the future.

Amongst those the meeting with Hebishima was interesting, not because anything that happened between those three, but the discussion between Kirito and Asuna afterwards.

Kirito started going on and on about how much of a scumbag Hebishima is, and how he was a bad influence on Suguha due to her changes in speech pattern and way of dressing up.

The joke of the conversation was how Kirito was sure that Sugu wouldn't allow anything to happen, when every player already knows that Suguha was a victim of his and his generic tanned ntr-dick.

What's interesting for Suguha's future is what happened when Asuna hinted at the possibility of Sugu liking Hebishima.

Kirito blew his casket and started going on and on about how he as a big brother wouldn't allow that to happen.

A normal statement right? After all, no one would like their friend or family to be involved with a scumbag like Hebishima. But, what's truly interesting is Asuna's reaction to that comment from Kirito.

She was silent, but perturbed by that comment. Like Kirito was being weird, or too possessive of his sister in an abnormal way.


Throughout the update Asuna had made similar pauses and reactions whenever something hinted at Kirito cheating, but this was different. It was solely focused on the idea of Kirito being too attached to Suguha.

I believe this is a hint of a possible path that Fujino decided to laid out now, either with Suguha ending up getting NTR'ed once again to trample over Kirito's feelings of protectiveness, or the much better outcome for me, the possibility that Kirito has a subconscious attraction and possessive tendencies towards Suguha after spending so much time together in part 2.

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Am I losing my mind after inhaling unhealthy amounts of Sugu's copium ? Probably, but just like I believed in Satoru Gojo's comeback until the last chapter of JJK, I will believe in a happy ending for Suguha until the day Fujino finishes this game.

I also hope Kirito has some bittersweet ending with Suguha or Liz. Considering Suguha has been draining his nut every weekend, I think the odds are pretty good since Fujino could have had Suguha stay with Hebishima and get even more degraded. But that’s not the case; she is interacting with Kirito more and more often and becoming even more desperate. Also what was the green spray that she put on Kirito? Was that to keep him erect or asleep? I don’t think there is enough bandwidth to show Suguha reverse her feelings towards Kirito.

Also do you have any of your favorite Sugu works you want to share?

 

[mos555]

I also hope Kirito has some bittersweet ending with Suguha or Liz. Considering Suguha has been draining his nut every weekend, I think the odds are pretty good since Fujino could have had Suguha stay with Hebishima and get even more degraded. But that’s not the case; she is interacting with Kirito more and more often and becoming even more desperate. Also what was the green spray that she put on Kirito? Was that to keep him erect or asleep? I don’t think there is enough bandwidth to show Suguha reverse her feelings towards Kirito.

Also do you have any of your favorite Sugu works you want to share?

Well, if Fujino decided to make a yandere type out of Suguha, then such an ending could be even worse. Yandere perceive relationships differently. Suguha most likely wants Kirito to belong only to her, but she herself has no such restrictions. So this could be the ending, where Kirito is chained to a pipe with a collar, and Suguha is having a threesome in the next room.

Take it with humor. Honestly, I also see Suguha as a hope for Kirito.

 

[hui13594]

Leafa CG and more Alice & Leafa outfits??? Nooooooooooooooo

I kinda feel they have more outfits than Asuna now, Asuna cant get a drip. And love she deserves

 

[kinglionheart]

I kinda feel they have more outfits than Asuna now, Asuna cant get a drip. And love she deserves

Maybe they have more outfits together than Asuna but Asuna still have more outfits than them. No matter how much people like Suguha or Alice, they are still not the main girl.

 

[Eikunobaka]

The funny thing is that he is a paid subscriber and I saw the same comment on Patreon

But Fujino hardly responds to comments at all. Only if there is something about bugs or errors.

He used to respond to DMs, but as he has been suffering a lot with the comments from the Chinese, he interacts less and less with the public, avoiding exchanging many messages.

 

[4-kun]

Maybe they have more outfits together than Asuna but Asuna still have more outfits than them. No matter how much people like Suguha or Alice, they are still not the main girl.

I mean, outfits are fine if they underline the story or corruption progression, which is why Asuna will have more of them, as she has many more stages to go through. Otherwise, I personally don't care; the characters are naked or half naked in scenes anyway.

 

[hui13594]

Maybe they have more outfits together than Asuna but Asuna still have more outfits than them. No matter how much people like Suguha or Alice, they are still not the main girl.

I think Asuna needed some new clothes for a while now, but she's been neglected in this department. Hope she'll get updated wardrope soon.

 

[kinglionheart]

I mean, outfits are fine if they underline the story or corruption progression, which is why Asuna will have more of them, as she has many more stages to go through. Otherwise, I personally don't care; the characters are naked or half naked in scenes anyway.

Yes at least the real world outfits seems have to have a purpose like showing level of corruption. The FOG outfits are mainly just sex bait.

I think Asuna needed some new clothes for a while now, but she's been neglected in this department. Hope she'll get updated wardrope soon.

She did just get a new battle outfit so she is good for now. Next outfit if not for sex scene will be probably in the real world. She really needs a new date outfit, not another causal outfit.

 

[throdo]

He used to respond to DMs, but as he has been suffering a lot with the comments from the Chinese, he interacts less and less with the public, avoiding exchanging many messages.

What is the context of this?

 

[hui13594]

I mean, outfits are fine if they underline the story or corruption progression, which is why Asuna will have more of them, as she has many more stages to go through. Otherwise, I personally don't care; the characters are naked or half naked in scenes anyway.

I mean, yeah. But it's great to see main girl have a wide range of outfits bc it's nice to look at and girls usualy like to dress differently, so.. Maybe it's just me having a weird take on porn games

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

That's the thing, while I think this small tidbit might have big implications in the future for Sugu, it wasn’t something that happened in a scene with Suguha.


During the early parts of the last update, when Asuna and Kirito are going out on a date to the cinema there were a lot of stuff that happened that might be foreshadowing for the future.

Amongst those the meeting with Hebishima was interesting, not because anything that happened between those three, but the discussion between Kirito and Asuna afterwards.

Kirito started going on and on about how much of a scumbag Hebishima is, and how he was a bad influence on Suguha due to her changes in speech pattern and way of dressing up.

The joke of the conversation was how Kirito was sure that Sugu wouldn't allow anything to happen, when every player already knows that Suguha was a victim of his and his generic tanned ntr-dick.

What's interesting for Suguha's future is what happened when Asuna hinted at the possibility of Sugu liking Hebishima.

Kirito blew his casket and started going on and on about how he as a big brother wouldn't allow that to happen.

A normal statement right? After all, no one would like their friend or family to be involved with a scumbag like Hebishima. But, what's truly interesting is Asuna's reaction to that comment from Kirito.

She was silent, but perturbed by that comment. Like Kirito was being weird, or too possessive of his sister in an abnormal way.


Throughout the update Asuna had made similar pauses and reactions whenever something hinted at Kirito cheating, but this was different. It was solely focused on the idea of Kirito being too attached to Suguha.

I believe this is a hint of a possible path that Fujino decided to laid out now, either with Suguha ending up getting NTR'ed once again to trample over Kirito's feelings of protectiveness, or the much better outcome for me, the possibility that Kirito has a subconscious attraction and possessive tendencies towards Suguha after spending so much time together in part 2.

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Am I losing my mind after inhaling unhealthy amounts of Sugu's copium ? Probably, but just like I believed in Satoru Gojo's comeback until the last chapter of JJK, I will believe in a happy ending for Suguha until the day Fujino finishes this game.

While I think those moments were just exclusively to keep seeding doubt on Asuna which honestly seemed to be the main focus of the update...keep cooking man, the Sugu-copium will never die XP!

 

[Aniky Light]

Kirito got tired of all this SAO and changed his job, now he connects to the horror world

 

[kutazz4]

I see fujino focus now on leafa and alice. Time to stop supporting him on his patreon... I dont care at all about those characters... Like ok make plot with them but focus on making sex scenes with asuna... I can be strict with him cuz i was paying him, not anymore, or at least not this month. Ill be waiting to pirate new update

 

[4-kun]

I see fujino focus now on leafa and alice. Time to stop supporting him on his patreon... I dont care at all about those characters... Like ok make plot with them but focus on making sex scenes with asuna... I can be strict with him cuz i was paying him, not anymore, or at least not this month. Ill be waiting to pirate new update

I mean, it's your money, but I don't get the complaint. From what we know, Alice just gets a new outfit. Also, without Suguha, there wouldn't have been any progression in Asuna's story. And to be honest, Suguha is still lacking decent events. Yeah, on paper she got two "events," but in reality, it was just two repeating CGs without any variety. In fact, the second "event" wasn't even her event but was meant to progress Asuna's story.

It's just the first update report, with only one scene confirmed so far. I'm pretty sure by the end of the month, we'll probably get 5+ CGs for Asuna.