RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.701] [Fujino]

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I also liked the confident and knowing what she wants Liz in this update. Of course, the fact that she behaved very calmly in the dialogue when they were in the group in this update looked strange, but this can at least be explained by the fact that she had already decided how she would act in the future and that her plan with the equipment worked. That's why she was so confident, and she decided to take it out on Inoda like a sadist.
By the way, I liked how Fujino decided to make her fall on Inoda's dick. Ordinary corruption doesn't suit her, she doesn't even consider Inoda a person, and there is no time for it. But the equipment that will give him the opportunity to play with her with his magic dick until her mind breaks is a good idea. Considering that it is unlikely that she will be at the helm for long, maximum 1-2 updates, and then in the same amount of time he will make her his pet
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You described it beautifully! I subscribe to every word!)
I'll add about Liz). The author could have done a few more Inoda-dominated scenes for her, and even though Liz has masochistic tendencies, she would have survived them and stayed with Kirito. This would perfectly show the hypocrisy of Asuna, who is all about herself - I love Kirito, I can't live without Kirito, but for the sake of a dick I quickly switched to Inoda. And Liz didn't use loud words, but sex with Inoda don't ruined her, because (as you said) she doesn't consider this a person and she's really in love with Kirito.. At the same time, she would do her best to bring Asuna and inode together, and could even dominate them. And in the end, it's like fire - Asuna stays with Inoda and talks. Well Kirito, we all (Asuna, Liz, Inoda) stay in Japan, and you do what you want. And then Liz is like, what do you mean we're staying?! I'm going to America with Kirito!!! I would laugh at this ending))) It would make a great character.
 
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I knew most people would complain
What did you expect, Fujino decided to do this and doesn't take orders from anyone, take Inoda's ass with just one ball xD (32).jpg
 
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In any case, even before the release of the update, people here already understood that it would be transitional between fog and irl. So the next one will already have irl scenes. Asuna is forbidden sex, and the last test will be on Saturday, and after that I think there will be sex with a condom in irl.
 
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karlA29 said:
I didn't really expect anything from this update, so it suited me perfectly. I especially liked both scenes with Liz on the last day, when it was already clear that there would be nothing special in this update. In fact, it's a pity that Liz will end up on Inoda's team. A hot girl. It would be better if she played for at least 2 teams. And even more fun, if she were in a relationship with Kirito, she taunted Asuna by sending her various things to corrupt her and mock Inoda))) And this is not because I sympathize with Kirito, but just to diversify what is happening in the game. Sugu and Sinon would have lengthened Kirito's cock and his stamina, and Liz would have taken advantage of all this for free. And in the end, she would have laughed at Asuna)))
Damn, she could be the perfect version of the main character's girlfriend from the Promise game! (who is blonde)
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I kind of think Liz gets too much attention, to be honest. She was introduced in Part Two and now has way more and better CGs than Suguha, who was originally the second FMC of the game. This is really disappointing because Liz is a far less interesting character. I hope the next update gives us either a really big event for Suguha or Sinon...
 
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I kind of think Liz gets too much attention, to be honest. She was introduced in Part Two and now has way more and better CGs than Suguha, who was originally the second FMC of the game. This is really disappointing because Liz is a far less interesting character. I hope the next update gives us either a really big event for Suguha or Sinon...
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I think the most disgusting thing that can happen to characters happened to Suguha and Sinon. The author of a work should never listen to strangers. He almost certainly had a full-fledged branch for Suguha. But he destroyed it, even though he asked the subscribers for their opinions, and now he doesn't really know what to do. Yes, it's relatively clear with Suguha, you need to weave the love line of a brother and sister. But it all looks like it was invented along the way. While Liz has a branch in the game written from the very beginning and it is clear to the author himself how to develop it.
On the other hand, for the remaining 6 updates, it is quite possible to make Suguha a favorite of Kirito's girls.
 
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4-kun said:
I kind of think Liz gets too much attention, to be honest. She was introduced in Part Two and now has way more and better CGs than Suguha, who was originally the second FMC of the game. This is really disappointing because Liz is a far less interesting character. I hope the next update gives us either a really big event for Suguha or Sinon...
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Don't worry now that Suguha can act more openly she will have more screen time. But first there will be service from Alice. Considering that the next update will most likely also have 3 days. And will end on Friday before Saturday. We may well get another Suguha scene during this time.
 
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I don't know what to add in this scene, Asuna already voiced all her thoughts quietly, and there weren't many of them, and after that she just fucked.
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I think we should have gotten POV of the utility room sex at least, and also the irl one but we may still see that next update not sure
 
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NozomiTohsaka said:
I think we should have gotten POV of the utility room sex at least, and also the irl one but we may still see that next update not sure
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Unfortunately, both options are unlikely, sex in the back room is already a past stage and Fujino didn’t even make graphics for it. And sex in irl is definitely not the next update, trivial due to the requirement for completing the challenge:whistle:
 
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