RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.80] [Fujino]

[AlterInfernalAllius]

You explained it perfectly. The fact there’s no POV or CG for some scenes takes away development and context. It just comes across as rushed

People has forgotten it, but in the past this happened quite a few times, sometimes Fujino would finish an update without adding the other PoV in the rec. room and only add it to the next one. The times he didn't are, sadly, almost always exclusively reserved for the secondary characters (Like how there was no PoV at all of the like 3 times Suguha first took advantage of Kirito's body by herself despite how they were the turning point of her character arc). So it may still be in the next one :O

 

[jackstinson826]

Asuna pov should have been shown instead of kirito screen in the battle scene

 

[900bs]

I'll be a bore again)

Despite the fact that I liked the update, in my opinion there are fundamental flaws in the scenes with Asuna.

The scene in FOG after Asuna received the clothes from Liz was supposed to be done. Yes, the author is trying to tell us that now for Asuna, sex is in the game, it's like smoking a cigarette and showing all her activity is basically impossible... But in my opinion, this scene is crucial! The bottom line is that when talking to Kirito, Asuna wonders how long it will take for him to appear in the game, and then we find her there with Inoda having sex. That's the most important thing! If earlier they had sex either because of chance encounters in the game (yes, they were all set up by Inoda), or Inoda himself dragged Asuna into the game for sex, now Asuna dragged Inoda into the game for sex with him, because she was not satisfied the previous night. And in this scene, the author could show Asunas acceptance that sex with Kirito IN THE GAME is no longer interesting to her at all, and she wants to fuck exclusively with Inoda. In the dialogue during sex, you could write a couple of phrases like, "Yes, that's what I needed yesterday! ". And in my opinion, Asuna's change should definitely be reflected in a full-fledged scene. BUT maybe the author still plans to do something like this in the future, although there are doubts(

And about the battles. Again, in my opinion, the miasma scene is unnecessary. Yes, the author has already created a scene in the forest with a Asuna in Koikatsu, but he could have made fragments from it for a regular battle. Like that.
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There's a forum member who does them well)))

But, as for me, it would be better if it were like this! As in the first part of the game
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This is for an example. Kirito in the game itself approach the monster and start fighting, and we are shown a screen with Asuna and Inoda and their negotiations with Kirito.
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Why I think their negotiations are fundamental and their absence in the latest update is the author's mistake.

If this was an ordinary campaign against monsters, then Asuna's disregard for combat would be understandable. but! This quest is actually initiated by Asuna. She's the most interested in the outcome of the quest, but in the game it turns out that she doesn't care if they finish this quest or not... "Oh, big deal, they couldn't bring Yui back into the game. But I got fucked!" Seriously?! She can have sex in a game with Inoda any day and in any quantity. Therefore, I think that such a development is rather stupid. Sex is necessary in battles, but Asuna should try to support Kirito at the same time. Inoda build their own dirty tricks)

By type

Asuna - Inoda, let go! I can't see the battle!

Inoda - Relax! I'm in control of everything! Hehe! Kirito-senpai doesn't need any support right now...

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Asuna-Kirito, I'm going to fire a spell now. Move a little bit

Inoda-Senpai, stand still. I'm going to shoot now too! Ha-ha

and so on.

Again, the characters' conversations make the scene much more exciting.

Well, there would be no dissatisfaction that there is no scene of Asuna's POV)

That's how I would change this update. But, there is what there is, and in principle it turned out to be acceptable.

Excellent analysis friend, many think that we are talking about the update badly in general, although we mean only Asuna's scenes in it. In general, the update, although not long, brought us new mechanics and scenes of Sugu, Sinon and Liz, they were all good.

 

[Marphey]

He already does this, in the fog with Liz and Sinon, of course there is an excuse for Sinon, but this is the level when Asuna also justified herself by helping Inoda. And now Suguha is also in irl. Some Chinese fans are even complaining about this - “ Three different female supporting characters were created specifically for Kirito. What, Kirito is a winner in life and Inoda is a shoe picker?”

Can't really blame the chi ese players. The fact that Kirito is still getting all the girls despite this being NTR game is jarring.

It really cheapens the whole thing like he is going to lose Asuna and perhaps even Liz but what is the point if he still has Suguha and Sinon ?

 

[Aniky Light]

He already does this, in the fog with Liz and Sinon, of course there is an excuse for Sinon, but this is the level when Asuna also justified herself by helping Inoda. And now Suguha is also in irl. Some Chinese fans are even complaining about this - “ Three different female supporting characters were created specifically for Kirito. What, Kirito is a winner in life and Inoda is a shoe picker?”

I enjoy seeing them complain xD

As Fujino said, there won't be what people expect for Suguha and so in my opinion he was referring to those who wanted Suguha to end up with Inoda

 

[AnzaiNTRfan]

I don't know if we will see less of fog in the next update due to Asuna's condition having to go without vaginal sex for a week, but this leads us to possible anal sex in fog, of course Asuna will start to fall irl too, it will be interesting, what I most want to see is Inoda making advances while Kirito spies on everything at work, it's going to be a lot of fun. and of course, in this time without virtual sex with Asuna, Liz could become the replacement that will be on the tip of Inoda's dick.

 

[Aegon76]

why you need that ?

because I like netorase games...?

 

[900bs]

Can't really blame the chi ese players. The fact that Kirito is still getting all the girls despite this being NTR game is jarring.

It really cheapens the whole thing like he is going to lose Asuna and perhaps even Liz but what is the point if he still has Suguha and Sinon ?

He started getting all this just recently. And unlike Asuna, Kirito's love meter for her is constantly at 999. As for Sinon, I personally think that she is bored and is just playing with him. When he came to the dungeon, she was just doing her own thing and had no plans for him. Just like in the scene with Suguha in the fog, she then just decided to tease her. Suguha has been trying to get Kirito almost from the very beginning of the second part. And Liz, her fate is decided, she will not play for long and then will become a pig for Inoda.

 

[Aniky Light]

It's clear that this is a different game from Fujino's other games, for sure Fujino wants to please both sides and I like it that way and I don't care if they get pissed off about this xD

 

[VaysBastard]

Hi, can you please help. How can I disable or delete this message bar? pls pls

 

[4-kun]

Excellent analysis friend, many think that we are talking about the update badly in general, although we mean only Asuna's scenes in it. In general, the update, although not long, brought us new mechanics and scenes of Sugu, Sinon and Liz, they were all good.

Too good for Kirito, to be honest, so I expect nothing good for the side characters in the next updates.

 

[Aniky Light]

if Asuna will have swimsuit outfit it means that the future update will take place on the beach, I can already imagine Kirito sunbathing while sleeping while Asuna is fucking with Inoda or Asuna is having fun with Inoda and Kirito thinks they are just playing but in reality they are fucking in the water xD

 

[900bs]

Hi, can you please help. How can I disable or delete this message bar? pls pls

It seems that once upon a time someone posted a file for an old update that would remove this. But that was a long time ago, now it can't be fixed, even though the fps drops, but just wait until the lines of dialogue end and that's it.

Too good for Kirito, to be honest, so I expect nothing good for the side characters in the next few updates.

Maybe Alice and Liz will be there, and Sugu and Sinon will have a break. Alice's scene was hinted at in this update, and Liz because she needs to be given a few scenes before Inoda takes over her

 

[AnzaiNTRfan]

Can't really blame the chi ese players. The fact that Kirito is still getting all the girls despite this being NTR game is jarring.

It really cheapens the whole thing like he is going to lose Asuna and perhaps even Liz but what is the point if he still has Suguha and Sinon ?

I also get angry seeing Kirito having these hot girls for himself (after all, it's NTR, he shouldn't have anything), but it's not something that makes me want to stop playing, the scenes are very good. and after all, the woman he loves most is heading towards corruption and will become completely addicted to Inoda's dick.

 

[Aniky Light]

Too good for Kirito, to be honest, so I expect nothing good for the side characters in the next updates.

they said the similar sentence before and the result was the opposite

 

[AnzaiNTRfan]

I still wonder how Fujino will finish everything in this part, I think it's impossible, I don't know how much is still possible to add, I know that Inoda only needs a few days and Asuna will fall into the hotel and give herself completely, but something in me wanted to see something slower.

 

[kinglionheart]

Everyone is so horny for a long Asuna sex scene that they convicted themselves Asuna is seeking out sex from Inoda herself now. But that already happened last update. Didn't Asuna go to Inoda's tent to get her daily fix? This time it wasn't even her who wanted sex. Inoda got horny seeing Asuna's new IRL clothes and started bothering her. Since Kirito was going be late she decided to sex him in FOG to shut him up. She didn't initiate the sex but people think since she can't get off with Kirito she will jump Inoda now.

That is a lesson for Fujino. If he doesn't end on a banger, literally, people will call him lazy or incompetent. People might still do that with a banger but not as much I hope.

 

[Aniky Light]

I see a lot of people angry about Kirito having Sinon and Suguha, and then what's the problem, they're just training xD

The ending will be a split screen and we'll see two harems (Inoda, Asuna, Liz, Kyouko), (Kirito, Suguha, Sinon, maybe even Alice)
now someone comes to tell me: shut up, Kirito won't have a damn thing, everyone will go to Inoda! do you understand?!!! this NTR, damn!

 

[ilak47]

after the first dungeon of the update the asuna menu got bugged

 

[Aniky Light]

after the first dungeon of the update the asuna menu got bugged
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it happened to me too, I thought it was interference because they were in the cave, but then the problem persisted even after the mission was over