RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.80] [Fujino]

[4-kun]

Seriously, can't people give fujino some slack. It's just few update into part 2! The action will come, and don't know why Inoda becoming close to Asuna is such an issue. Gradual corruption NTR is far better. In part 1 it was more sort of pity fuck, but atleast Inoda is more active agent in part 2 n getting close to Asuna n creating negative image of Kirito. I just hope fujino doesn't give up or make it a fuck fest because this game is one of the best Ntr game out here!

I'm not an expert, but wouldn't that just be considered cheating if Asuna simply falls in love with Inoda, because he's a good guy now, not NTR anymore?

 

[4-kun]

It doesn't backfire at all, though. It's just started yet. If you can't enjoy the build up, better come when actions start. Inoda being flat out character in part 1 where he's just like he was miserable, so Asuna will give him comfort is alright. However, ppl can't seems to get that there'll be repercussions on what Inoda did. And tbh, fujino has deal with it quite well and kept the momentum going.

I disagree on Inoda in part 1; I actually consider him the most interesting and well-developing character there. In my understanding, he played his role as the pitiful guy to gain benefits out of it. As soon as he broke the ice, he started pushing Asuna step by step with cunningness and setups, eventually striking in the stormy night.

 

[saitamaTM]

People are understandable, Fujino listened to the votes too much and overdid it in slowing down and developing Inoda and Asuna's relationship. At the current stage, the game is simply dead as an NTR.

Last update killed the last feel of NTR, made Kirito into a clown, made Inoda into a good guy. Now there's no feeling of Inoda seducing Asuna and no feeling of Asuna loving Kirito with her heart and longing for Inoda with her body. Now it's just an Inoda love story where Asuna will choose Inoda because he's just a cool, nice guy who is superior to Kirito in every way. Inoda is supposed to be a scumbag who is pushing exactly Asuna's sexual feelings, her body's desires. But here we get an emotional connection between them and it immediately kills the whole NTR turning this into a weird love story.

that why i never like voting

 

[saitamaTM]

Dunno about being able to disable comments in Patreon or not, but in Ci-en oof, some chinese comments are rough

china do this again

 

[saitamaTM]

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I'm sorry I have to disable the comment since there still are many friends attacking and insulting each other. If you have something to tell me, please message me. Next update I will try to make contents most people would like to see.
由於發現評論裏還是有很多朋友互相攻擊的情況，還是決定暫時關閉評論，非常抱歉，如果有要反饋和指出的內容，可以通過私信。我會嘗試在即將到來的下壹次更新中加入目前了解到的大家想看到的內容，總結來說，是對之前的粉絲投票選擇的希望慢熱的理解不夠到位，以及個人開發的速度有限，導致了大家的體感不如預期，這裏，再次向各位道歉.

Great! Fans of his who should be supportive and at most give constructive criticism are so busy attacking each other Fuijino is forced to play guard and shield each other. Do they honestly think they are helping Fuijino?

Kinda interesting it is only on Ci-en not Patreon. Is it mostly his foreign supporters doing this or can Patreon not disable comments?

me not think they people support him

 

[pnkrel]

I'm not an expert, but wouldn't that just be considered cheating if Asuna simply falls in love with Inoda, because he's a good guy now, not NTR anymore?

NTR simply means she cheats on her partner. Doesn't matter if she falls for him or whatnot. Just non- consensual isn't only the one way. Falling for dick or person doesn't matter. Main point is she's having affair behind back.

 

[pnkrel]

I disagree on Inoda in part 1; I actually consider him the most interesting and well-developing character there. In my understanding, he played his role as the pitiful guy to gain benefits out of it. As soon as he broke the ice, he started pushing Asuna step by step with cunningness and setups, eventually striking in the stormy night.

That's what I am saying too. 1st part did that. It won't work if fujino did that again. So, he's basically setting up the plot to reach that stage where Asuna will start to feel pity and desires for him again. N that's why all the time he's taking to reach action is pretty great because it isn't rush.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

I disagree on Inoda in part 1; I actually consider him the most interesting and well-developing character there. In my understanding, he played his role as the pitiful guy to gain benefits out of it. As soon as he broke the ice, he started pushing Asuna step by step with cunningness and setups, eventually striking in the stormy night.

I mean, to be fair, Inoda IS still a piece of shit, not only by his actions but under the surface, we get several scenes of him insulting Liz and wishing horrible death on Kirito within his mind, even more so in his blog, the thing that I guess most people dislike is that Fujino put extra-emphasis on his 'facade' because he thought it was something more people wanted: Inoda is going extra-hard on his good guy act with Asuna because he now feels that's the only way to get her to himself, but the thing is that this development may lead too hard to Asuna preferring him over Kirito emotionally on top of sexually, which is what most people DON'T want because, as you said, at that point is not NTR anymore XD

As someone just here originally for the Hentai, I don't care much, but I also find it kinda hilarious, especially because SAO is usually one of the biggest double-standard NTR series when it comes to its Hentai, so this situation is weirdly funny to me of people seething because Fujino wrote Inoda as trying too hard to win over Asuna by pretending to be a nice guy instead of her just completely losing her mind and will over his Super NTR God Dick XP

 

[4-kun]

NTR simply means she cheats on her partner. Doesn't matter if she falls for him or whatnot. Just non- consensual isn't only the one way. Falling for dick or person doesn't matter. Main point is she's having affair behind back.

My understanding of NTR in this particular story. Isn't it about the thrilling realization that a scumbag outplays a seemingly perfect couple with his wits and cunningness? If he's just a guy you would fall in love with anyway, then it's just a melodrama with elements of cheating.

It's my assumption that fans of NTR see it this way as well, but I may be wrong.

 

[icyair]

I'm not an expert, but wouldn't that just be considered cheating if Asuna simply falls in love with Inoda, because he's a good guy now, not NTR anymore?

I don't know what kind of build up and development between Asuna and Inoda people are talking about. With the last update, NTR just died. There's no more suspense, mystery and seduction. The game is already hours long and it's a dark realm of flashbacks and text. An emotional connection between Inoda and Asuna is now beginning to develop, it's no longer NTR, it's just a love story where Asuna will choose the more suitable partner out of the two.
And the scene with Kirito and penis enlargement breaks all hentai logic. if we are going for such realism, details and attempts to justify everything logically, let's make Asuna send Inoda away from the beginning and live happily with Kirito, because in reality it happens like that.

 

[pnkrel]

My understanding of NTR in this particular story. Isn't it about the thrilling realization that a scumbag outplays a seemingly perfect couple with his wits and cunningness? If he's just a guy you would fall in love with anyway, then it's just a melodrama with elements of cheating.

It's my assumption that fans of NTR see it this way as well, but I may be wrong.

I will dislike it too if Asuna just fall for him n Inoda is pure hearted n all. He's a scum who wants to steal away Asuna by any means. My point is after the rainy day incident; he needs to earn her trust. She isn't just going to hop on his dick after what happened. So, we have to wait.

 

[Lambda777777]

Sorry for posting again but i would really like an answer even if it's no, is there any way to change the name of Inoda or is that impossible ?

 

[icyair]

I will dislike it too if Asuna just fall for him n Inoda is pure hearted n all. He's a scum who wants to steal away Asuna by any means. My point is after the rainy day incident; he needs to earn her trust. She isn't just going to hop on his dick after what happened. So, we have to wait.

What kind of trust he has to earn, what kind of NTR is this, with the appearance of emotional connection all NTR disappears, and the heroine just can not decide which partner she likes more, as in romantic nonsense.

To be honest, Fujino should have launched normal sexual events in FOG and other lewd actions in battle in the second part. instead of this whole sheet of text with attempts to justify something logically and slowing it on. In his previous games there are no such sheets of text with explanations and justifications.
I have not seen such explanations in any NTR game at all. It's a nightmare of text, all the magic of NTR is gone.
Point your finger at any NTR, it's primarily about sexual desire, body pleasure. The feeling of the bastard taking the heroine away, and her heart struggling between love for the protagonist and the desire of her body for the scumbag.

but after last update it's just is starting to become a love story with some elements of cheating, in which the heroine just can't tell one partner that she likes the other one more.
and with this I can understand why he closed the comments and why the Chinese got their asses in fire.

 

[4-kun]

I will dislike it too if Asuna just fall for him n Inoda is pure hearted n all. He's a scum who wants to steal away Asuna by any means. My point is after the rainy day incident; he needs to earn her trust. She isn't just going to hop on his dick after what happened. So, we have to wait.

I have a feeling that Fujino might be overthinking and overdoing it a bit. There's already so much buildup – Liz, Sugu, the mom, constant disappointment in Kirito's performance (when was the last time Asuna wasn't cringed by Kirito's behavior, wasn't it somewhere in mid-part 1?). We are now 1/4 into part 2. It's also not represented in her stats at all; Kirito has literally lost 1 point since the start of the game. Maybe that's also a factor that is confusing, and perhaps a few sentences about her feelings would have been better than numbers.

That's how I read it. I was never sold on the main story to begin with, mainly due to the lack of chemistry between Asuna and Kirito, and their somewhat brainless personalities. So, my take might be very different from people who enjoyed the overall story

 

[renjen]

Sorry for posting again but i would really like an answer even if it's no, is there any way to change the name of Inoda or is that impossible ?

Being an RPGMaker game, I assume you can crack the data files and rename him through all the code and scripts. Never tried it before, but from a programming pov its possible.

 

[pnkrel]

What kind of trust he has to earn, what kind of NTR is this, with the appearance of emotional connection all NTR disappears, and the heroine just can not decide which partner she likes more, as in romantic nonsense.

To be honest, Fujino should have launched normal sexual events in FOG and other lewd actions in battle in the second part. instead of this whole sheet of text with attempts to justify something logically and slowing it on. In his previous games there are no such sheets of text with explanations and justifications.
I have not seen such explanations in any NTR game at all. It's a nightmare of text, all the magic of NTR is gone.
Point your finger at any NTR, it's primarily about sexual desire, body pleasure. The feeling of the bastard taking the heroine away, and her heart struggling between love for the protagonist and the desire of her body for the scumbag.

but after last update it's just is starting to become a love story with some elements of cheating, in which the heroine just can't tell one partner that she likes the other one more.
and with this I can understand why he closed the comments and why the Chinese got their asses in fire.

The point is how do you expect him to do that. Asuna just mastrubate one day and can't take it, so she calls Inoda n get a good dicking. That's what happened with Ntrman, and his story is getting crappier and crappier. Atleast, fujino is making Asuna opening up to her desire more n more. If it becomes romance, I will hate it too. I enjoy Inoda being more cunning and manipulative in part 2, actually. You all are just stating like she hated Kirito and wants to fall in love with Inoda and all. Just give fujino sometime to cook, he's basically setting up the pieces and making Asuna trust inoda more.

 

[4-kun]

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Next update I will try to make contents most people would like to see.

Does someone know what that means? Perhaps from prior experience?

 

[pnkrel]

I have a feeling that Fujino might be overthinking and overdoing it a bit. There's already so much buildup – Liz, Sugu, the mom, constant disappointment in Kirito's performance (when was the last time Asuna wasn't cringed by Kirito's behavior, wasn't it somewhere in mid-part 1?). We are now 1/4 into part 2. It's also not represented in her stats at all; Kirito has literally lost 1 point since the start of the game. Maybe that's also a factor that is confusing, and perhaps a few sentences about her feelings would have been better than numbers.

That's how I read it. I was never sold on the main story to begin with, mainly due to the lack of chemistry between Asuna and Kirito, and their somewhat brainless personalities. So, my take might be very different from people who enjoyed the overall story

Well, as the number are getting higher for Inoda, she's opening up to him more. Someone mentioned before that she's in part 2 mainly just loving Kirito more just to hide the pleasure she felt on rainy day. So, that 999 will come crashing down soon. Can't you all just enjoy the slow ride of corruption XD I personally want this game to stretch as much fujino want, so he can tell the story as he likes.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

Does someone know what that means? Perhaps from prior experience?

I just took it literally, like, more Inoda/Asuna content than anything else I guess, which is what most people want to see.

 

[4-kun]

I just took it literally, like, more Inoda/Asuna content than anything else I guess, which is what most people want to see.

Oh well, I guess next update will be forced content then. Poor Fujino