RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.80] [Fujino]

[AlterInfernalAllius]

Honesty that is probably too late. As soon as v1 of Part 2 and I noticed he got rid of most his OC characters and replaced them with the canon SAO characters, I realized he is changing the game to suit his audience. It is unlikely Klein and Liz was always suppose to appear since there was no mention of them. With the poll asking if we wanted to axe Hebishima, it is more apparent he is willing to changing his game. Hebishima being a major subplot, he can't be fridged so suddenly so hopefully we get a good sendoff if he is axed.

Just not too many sudden changes or everything will be ruined. The game can still be good with the fan-preferred changes but wanting him to follow his own vision is too late.

It's now gone because he had to delete everything from Ci-En and Pixiv when he moved from China, but Alice and Liz showing in Part were indeed actually just because of a poll he made I believe? Klein WAS referenced in Part 1, but he most likely indeed wasn't gonna be an active part of the game until he added Alice and decided to use him for her plot, so yeah, since he finished Part 1 he was already going the way of "listening" to the fans a bit more, it just seems it went a bit too out of his hands because of all the issues that happened (It's very likely that if China had never suddenly taken this insane "Anyone making +18 content of any kind is now considered a criminal"-approach then the game would just have continued however Fujino wanted with the 2 separate subplots outside the main one, but everything else combined made Fujino decide to compromise more).

 

[BleepBloop321]

Fuck that is amazing I would play any game you make or any story you write

Or just physically disabled, and then eventually mentally tortured into insanity from being forced to watch 24/7

Jeez, you must be new here. This guy has pitched this terrible "wheelchair" ending for multiple months now, its an awful idea and at this point about as annoying as the dumbass "preggo" people on vanila threads.

 

[HentaiBaka]

I know it's beating a dead horse, but the only scene I want from V1 of that night with Inoda x Asuna is the early morning where Kirito knocks on Inoda's door to see how he's doing.

I want a scene where Inoda is still going at a semi-unconscious or cum drunk Asuna (doggy), then it ends, with her body slumping down on the bed with her pussy gaping, and Inoda's horse cock drapped across her ass/thigh, her toes curled and pissing herself.

Then I think most people would be happy with that closure.

 

[kinglionheart]

Am I the only one who is excited for liz sex scene??

Yea. No one cares about a third tier jumpoff.

 

[kinglionheart]

I know it's beating a dead horse, but the only scene I want from V1 of that night with Inoda x Asuna is the early morning where Kirito knocks on Inoda's door to see how he's doing.

I want a scene where Inoda is still going at a semi-unconscious or cum drunk Asuna (doggy), then it ends, with her body slumping down on the bed with her pussy gaping, and Inoda's horse cock drapped across her ass/thigh, her toes curled and pissing herself.

Then I think most people would be happy with that closure.

Have some hope bro. We know something will be added to the stormy night next update. So maybe???

 

[jowishg]

I know it's beating a dead horse, but the only scene I want from V1 of that night with Inoda x Asuna is the early morning where Kirito knocks on Inoda's door to see how he's doing.

I want a scene where Inoda is still going at a semi-unconscious or cum drunk Asuna (doggy), then it ends, with her body slumping down on the bed with her pussy gaping, and Inoda's horse cock drapped across her ass/thigh, her toes curled and pissing herself.

Then I think most people would be happy with that closure.

Yeah, rather than adding scenes to the stormy night, it would be better to continue from the last scene from V1 when kirito knocks on the door.
We saw that they were still going at it all morning, so just a few scenes about that morning and we're done. The stormy night was done great imo, no need to alter it.

 

[vanessa's lover]

You don't need anyone else's save. The Save 4 included with the game is the complete recollection room.

I don't get any other saves only one and five and they are broken or the game is broken I don't get save 3 or 4 so if you have can you share

 

[oozaru2023]

Jeez, you must be new here. This guy has pitched this terrible "wheelchair" ending for multiple months now, its an awful idea and at this point about as annoying as the dumbass "preggo" people on vanila threads.

and why don't you like an extreme NTR ending where it makes you feel real hatred towards inoda ahah so weak people have become these days xd it would still become canon alicization and it wouldn't be bad.

 

[LordFrz]

How many people like AsunaxKirito's canon pairings and like Kirito's character? How many people like Asuna ntr as fantasies?
I wrote about this once. I like Asuna ntr as fantasy and I like AsunaxKirito pairings canonically. I'm reading the LN, and I'm a fan of the AsunaxKirito couple, I'm waiting for the author to write a wedding about Asuna and Kirito.
I'm not interested in haters/trolls and I ignore them, except for the couple's fans

Porn and non porn are completely separate for me. Porn I want hard core complete degeneracy. Nonporn stuff that I actually gett invested in I want fairytale happiness.

 

[BleepBloop321]

and why don't you like an extreme NTR ending where it makes you feel real hatred towards inoda ahah so weak people have become these days xd it would still become canon alicization and it wouldn't be bad.

Im fine with an extrem NTR ending but they way you pitched it is super unrefined and at most a bare concept.
Just the idea "Kirito should be in a wheelchair whiles Asuna and Indoa have sex" is just a scene and not an acutal story idea.
Lets take the one time you actually made this idea a bit more realized.

I expect a despicable ending such as cuckito ending up in a wheelchair because of problems with the server and asuna being destroyed by inoda in front of him.and inoda saying don't worry sempai we will take good care of you.

Kirito ending up in a wheelchair because of a server problem means that it would be just dumb luck and not even Inodas doing, meaning some of the crulty is lost.
Inoda showing any signs of sympathy by saying things like "we will take good care of you" is also a bizzarly backwards thing of him to do.
It also completely neglects any concept for FOG by having the only cruel thing be something that happens in the real world.

They are all in school together, they already spend most of their time in close proximity to eachother. Inoda lives literally next door to Kirito, it would be so easy to just have him be tourmented every night by always hearing Asuna the next room over and maybe constantly sending messages to Kiritos or have Kirito check Inodas blog with videos of them fucking.

 

[oozaru2023]

Im fine with an extrem NTR ending but they way you pitched it is super unrefined and at most a bare concept.
Just the idea "Kirito should be in a wheelchair whiles Asuna and Indoa have sex" is just a scene and not an acutal story idea.
Lets take the one time you actually made this idea a bit more realized.



Kirito ending up in a wheelchair because of a server problem means that it would be just dumb luck and not even Inodas doing, meaning some of the crulty is lost.
Inoda showing any signs of sympathy by saying things like "we will take good care of you" is also a bizzarly backwards thing of him to do.
It also completely neglects any concept for FOG by having the only cruel thing be something that happens in the real world.

They are all in school together, they already spend most of their time in close proximity to eachother. Inoda lives literally next door to Kirito, it would be so easy to just have him be tourmented every night by always hearing Asuna the next room over and maybe constantly sending messages to Kiritos or have Kirito check Inodas blog with videos of them fucking.

your idea is good but what I say more like a really bad ending or a really bad closing since according to fujino's plans it seems that it will have more than one ending.

 

[BleepBloop321]

your idea is good but what I say more like a really bad ending or a really bad closing since according to fujino's plans it seems that it will have more than one ending.

I mean what i was trying to get at wasn't an "idea" perse, more just a statement on what the setting of the game is.
I do think there should be a really bad ending aswell, but it should happen due to Inodas influence and manipulation rather than it just happening by chance. A more forced approach like Asuna tricking Kirito into BDSM play and tying Kirito to a chair and then just fucking Inoda infront of him or something, sorta like the Secazz "the legend of zelda" animation.
Again, im not saying that is 100% what it should be 1/1 just that it should happen due to Inodas influence. Hell if you want the "wheelchair" ending so bad it should be because Asuna "accidentally" breaks Kiritos hip or something.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

your idea is good but what I say more like a really bad ending or a really bad closing since according to fujino's plans it seems that it will have more than one ending.

I'm pretty sure the 'more than one ending' thing is just because Fujino decided to implement the "Kirito likes being cucked" route, not that he will make a bunch of very different endings, so depending on the bars we will get either the unaware normal NTR ending or one where Kirito is aware of it but gets off it.

 

[BleepBloop321]

I'm pretty sure the 'more than one ending' thing is just because Fujino decided to implement the "Kirito likes being cucked" route, not that he will make a bunch of very different endings, so depending on the bars we will get either the unaware normal NTR ending or one where Kirito is aware of it but gets off it.

I actually think that there might be a third ending because of the different meters. One where Kirito stays ignorant, one where Kirito finds out and hates it and one where it becomes netorase.
Thats just a feeling tho and not based on anything Fujino has said, so it might aswell not be true at all.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

I actually think that there might be a third ending because of the different meters. One where Kirito stays ignorant, one where Kirito finds out and hates it and one where it becomes netorase.
Thats just a feeling tho and not based on anything Fujino has said, so it might aswell not be true at all.

I mean, it COULD be, but as mentioned there is nothing either in the game or from Fujino suggesting it (Plus, the fact he has been constantly tying up Kirito suddenly starting to suspect with moments he gets hard from it, like the 'nightmare', seem as if he was already implying it). Also I wouldn't want people to start thinking they can ask for Fujino to make a bunch of different endings, he already has a track record of not finishing games, is having a lot of issues in his life to continue this one already and is more susceptive to pressure from the fans...

 

[BleepBloop321]

I mean, it COULD be, but as mentioned there is nothing either in the game or from Fujino suggesting it (Plus, the fact he has been constantly tying up Kirito suddenly starting to suspect with moments he gets hard from it, like the 'nightmare', seem as if he was already implying it). Also I wouldn't want people to start thinking they can ask for Fujino to make a bunch of different endings, he already has a track record of not finishing games, is having a lot of issues in his life to continue this one already and is more susceptive to pressure from the fans...

I wasn't really trying to pitch an ending, just trying to highlight how bad his pitch for an ending really is.
Maybe it would finally make him stop posting about it.

I just got a bit agitated when there was a newcomer here and said to his idea. "Fuck that is amazing I would play any game you make or any story you write."
I don't want there to be a church of people that think this idea is great and annoy Fujino about it.

 

[Rokin]

Maybe there are new pictures of the upcoming update?

 

[Kazuto123]

Nie wiem, człowieku. Ci ludzie muszą dotknąć trawy. Są tak zafiksowani na czymś, co powinno naśladować rzeczywistość i zdrowy rozsądek w grze porno.

Po pierwsze, nie chcę ich w prawdziwym życiu. Dlaczego miałbym traktować to ze zdrowym rozsądkiem, skoro w ogóle nie jest to realne.
[/CYTAT]

I don't know man. These people needs to touch grass. They're so fixated in something that should emulate reality and common sense on a porn game.

I for one dont want these in real life. Why would I treat it with common sense when it's not real in the first place.

I think people watch too much hentai ntr over and over again that they can't tell the difference between fiction and reality. In my opinion, such people should not read ntr doujinshi/manga and watch ntr movies.
I can distinguish fiction from reality, I write generally.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

I wasn't really trying to pitch an ending, just trying to highlight how bad his pitch for an ending really is.
Maybe it would finally make him stop posting about it.

I just got a bit agitated when there was a newcomer here and said to his idea. "Fuck that is amazing I would play any game you make or any story you write."
I don't want there to be a church of people that think this idea is great and annoy Fujino about it.

Yeah, same here, I wasn't talking about you specifically more other people in general.

 

[Animefan_09]

Yea. No one cares about a third tier jumpoff.

I actually am excited to see her, since she obviously is crucial tot he main plot with Asuna