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it's all cause of those ci-en fans that fujino sensei rushed the game. they literally forced him to give them irl scenes asap. if fujino sensei just went the way he originally planned, building everything bit by bit with proper character development, the writing would've been so much better. the last update was easily the worst, the writing felt straight up trash. asuna kept repeating the same thing the whole time, and it didn’t hit at all compared to the rainy night or treehouse scene. i just hope he takes his time now (like at least 4 months) and brings the story back to what it was in part 1 and the first half of part 2
it is no longer possible to return the story to a normal course, namely the relationship between Asuna and Inoda, since the most important events in their relationship have already passed
 
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it's all cause of those ci-en fans that fujino sensei rushed the game. they literally forced him to give them irl scenes asap. if fujino sensei just went the way he originally planned, building everything bit by bit with proper character development, the writing would've been so much better. the last update was easily the worst, the writing felt straight up trash. asuna kept repeating the same thing the whole time, and it didn’t hit at all compared to the rainy night or treehouse scene. i just hope he takes his time now (like at least 4 months) and brings the story back to what it was in part 1 and the first half of part 2
I mean, the writing has been bad for a while now, yeah—but I was at least expecting a somewhat creative scene, which is usually Fujino's strong side. Instead, we just see them drink wine and talk… then cut, and they already fuck... :LOL:
 
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I mean, the writing has been bad for a while now, yeah—but I was at least expecting a somewhat creative scene, which is usually Fujino's strong side. Instead, we just see them drink wine and talk… then cut, and they already fuck... :LOL:
and after a fuck, they drink more wine
But wasn't Asuna half drunk after drinking the wine? :LOL:
 
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I hope that what Fujino had at the end of the update under very important events or update is the development of the rest of the stories and characters, and Asuna and Inoda will just fuck in the background
 
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I hope that what Fujino had at the end of the update under very important events or update is the development of the rest of the stories and characters, and Asuna and Inoda will just fuck in the background
Right, also because we know what Inoda and Asuna will do and therefore it's useless to focus on those two
 

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But we kept up with the series for so long that it would be a waste not to finish the game. :cry:
Classic sunk cost fallacy.
Yeah, they'll have to wait for the end of the game anyway, if only to close the gestalt and forget about this game as a terrible dream. It seems to me that this game has a bad effect on me. I even forbade my daughter to sleep with Asuna's dakimakura because Asuna is a bad girl. :ROFLMAO:
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I mean, the writing has been bad for a while now, yeah—but I was at least expecting a somewhat creative scene, which is usually Fujino's strong side. Instead, we just see them drink wine and talk… then cut, and they already fuck... :LOL:
Congrats, the story now has finally reached the same point all other Fujino games do during the first or second sex scene XD Honestly, I knew it was gonna get there from the beginning, Fujino just tried to drag it out and as expected he's not exactly a master of it, so the only way he can do things is to finally move on to what he probably was dying inside to do from the get go and holding back from doing for so long, LOL, there has been SO many Asuna/Inoda sex scenes where you would have expected she to have already fallen and become Inoda's sex slave because Fujino only really knows how to write girls being insta-corrupted through sex for his H-scenes, so I'm not really surprised those who really were taking this is a 'well-developed story' are disappointed by the inevitable change XP

At least we got Suguha's plot out of it so it was a good exchange :p
 
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Congrats, the story now has finally reached the same point all other Fujino games do during the first or second sex scene XD Honestly, I knew it was gonna get there from the beginning, Fujino just tried to drag it out and as expected he's not exactly a master of it, so the only way he can do things is to finally move on to what he probably was dying inside to do from the get go and holding back from doing for so long, LOL, there has been SO many Asuna/Inoda sex scenes where you would have expected she to have already fallen and become Inoda's sex slave because Fujino only really knows how to write girls being insta-corrupted through sex for his H-scenes, so I'm not really surprised those who really were taking this is a 'well-developed story' are disappointed by the inevitable change XP

At least we got Suguha's plot out of it so it was a good exchange :p
I don't think anyone considered it as a 'well-developed story', it's just that many wanted it to be a 'well-developed story', it's just that in some updates he seemed to be laying down some ideas that this is not a classic NTR doujinshi, but something more developed in terms of plot, or I'm just crazy and want to see something that hasn't been, isn't and won't be
 

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if the game has to end like all Fijino games, then it can't be called a great project otherwise, where's the novelty? Where's the innovation? Where's the immersive plot? Fujino first keeps us on tenterhooks and then goes back to his old method just because it's the easy way out of the hole he dug during the development of this game
Suguha's plot comes out and one thinks "wow this thing is interesting" after a few updates it hasn't been heard anymore, so let's leave those two alone and focus on the other characters, there's very little of ntr anyway and frankly Asuna and Inoda have bored me, I'd rather see Kirito jerking off without hands xD
 

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I agree with the majority's sentiment that the last updates were way below par in terms of plot and story-telling. Felt that he was rushed to complete certain milestones and thus strayed away from his usual intentions. 1 update every month is absolutely insane work that he has kept up for the last 2 years. We need to just give Fujino sensei some space and also encourage him to deliver what he intends to deliver.

I implore someone on this thread that has some form of contact with Fujino sensei to let him know our thoughts on this and ask him to ease his mind on rushing the game..

We don't even need CG's for the situation to be erotic & hot. Proper build-up and conversations are the backbone of this NTR story and I hope Fujino sensei can find that path in the next updates!
 

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Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.80] [Fujino]

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If you guys want Fujino to dish out updates more frequently or updates with more content every month then support her, she will spend more time on the game and less time looking for another source of income.
 
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