RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [verβ3.1] [Fujino]

[AlterInfernalAllius]

However, what happened to Asuna in 0.85 and what happened to Liz in the last update does not guarantee that Suguha or Sinon are protected from Inode. Fujino can get up in the morning and, at the behest of his left foot, come up with another hypnosis (costume, elixir, skill) that will send any character he sees to Inoda's penis (even Kirito is in danger ) . The fact that Fujino "respects" his narrative is no reason at all to hope for a fair treatment of any character's plotline. And I'm not sure that at the level of disregard for the overall harmony of the narrative of his own game, Fujino generally worries about respecting any event in the plot. A bigger hole, a smaller hole. What's the difference.

That he has actually invested in writing Suguha's plot for like half of the game now, really XD Mind you, there IS still a chance, of course, that he could throw all the writing and character development to the trash at the very end, but at this point it's very unlikely. At best I feel he may do that in one of the endings but not as part of the main plot, like, we KNOW there is unrealistic brainwashing and at this point it is the only narrative way of making Sinon or Suguha submit to Inoda, so i wouldn't be surprised if one of the endings had that happening, but with the final arc already underway it feels like it's too late for it to happen in the main plot :O

the opening said this is part 2, so where is part 1

As someone literally just a few posts above yours said, check 'Saikey Translation' on the first post.

Speaking of, anyone else thinks the main post is a bit awkwardly made? Aside from how Part 1 is specifically under Saikey's translation and there is no indication to specify Part 2 is the one you're mainly downloading (Or that there are even 2 parts in the first place), the screenshots also feel very unfitting, they only reflect Part 1 despite being much smaller by now, and even then there isn't even a single one showing H-scenes of Suguha who was actually the only big secondary plot in Part 1, even Shino, who literally was less than a background character in Part 1, has more screenshots than her there XP

 

[Aniky Light]

the opening said this is part 2, so where is part 1

you have to go to the first page and click on SPOILER: Saikey Translation and there you will find part 1

 

[Edelvays]

this is crazy, this is almost going for 40,000 comments lmao

Yep. Every big update I come here, and every time there are like 250 more pages of comments. A ton of them are straight-up novels with how many words people are putting into them. Like, it's an NTR game-how deep can it really be?

 

[gaka200]

Yep. Every big update I come here, and every time there are like 250 more pages of comments. A ton of them are straight-up novels with how many words people are putting into them. Like, it's an NTR game-how deep can it really be?

Just a lot of people arguing and just saying what they liked or didn't like. I guess the other stuff people be talking about is what they're hoping the next game is going to be like, or what the next updates will be like. Basically semi-bored people rofl.

 

[mos555]

this is crazy, this is almost going for 40,000 comments lmao

Come on, brothers, we need that number - 40,000! For the Emperor!

 

[mos555]

Lol, someone decided to make a game based on the manga "Rent a Girlfriend", while demo version. Now Fujino will either have to exclude this title from the list, or show something better. It's fun to make an NTR game using manga that literally screams about NTR. It's probably much easier than in SAO, because you don't have to distort the characters too much.

 

[Aniky Light]

Forza, fratelli, ci serve quel numero: 40.000! Per l'Imperatore!
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[edem1978]

I'm playing the game for the first time. Which chapter is the first one that starts at the beginning of the game?

 

[Aniky Light]

I'm playing the game for the first time. Which chapter is the first one that starts at the beginning of the game?

Go to the first page and click on the Spoiler: Saikey Translation button, inside you will find part 1

 

[xibxiprect]

Tell me if this is a bad suggestion, but what if the game ends with Asuna actually falling into Inoda’s hands, and at the end Kirito finally finds out and completely breaks down. Then Fujino gives two choices: accept defeat and make peace with the situation, or choose revenge. And if we choose revenge, we’ll be taken into a fast-paced game phase where Kirito destroys Inoda in every aspect to vent our emotions, with Kirito turning into a madman.

 

[saitamaTM]

it not gonna happen fujino already talk about thing like kirito not know or enjoy become cuck

 

[timurotbasaroglu]

Tell me if this is a bad suggestion, but what if the game ends with Asuna actually falling into Inoda’s hands, and at the end Kirito finally finds out and completely breaks down. Then Fujino gives two choices: accept defeat and make peace with the situation, or choose revenge. And if we choose revenge, we’ll be taken into a fast-paced game phase where Kirito destroys Inoda in every aspect to vent our emotions, with Kirito turning into a madman.

No, in my opinion revenge (especially in NTR games) routes are (mostly) fantastic. But I don't think Fujino can write an ending like that. Kirito crushing Inoda in every aspect and Asuna regretting that now she is with Inoda would be nice, but... Fujino is not that guy and he can't write a story like that. (+ do not forget that Kirito & Asuna love is a really weak one, so Kirito turning into a mad man for Asuna also doesn't make any sense)

 

[mos555]

Tell me if this is a bad suggestion, but what if the game ends with Asuna actually falling into Inoda’s hands, and at the end Kirito finally finds out and completely breaks down. Then Fujino gives two choices: accept defeat and make peace with the situation, or choose revenge. And if we choose revenge, we’ll be taken into a fast-paced game phase where Kirito destroys Inoda in every aspect to vent our emotions, with Kirito turning into a madman.

It's a good idea, provided that Fujino wants to leave something memorable, something that the player will remember after the end of the game as an example of a rare, one might even say, unique kind of ending for an NTR game. But the question is, does Fujino need such a headache, or would it be easier to end the game with 2-3 cliched endings (especially since he is so eager to finish the game)? As I wrote earlier, this can only happen if some sheikh throws a wad of dollars at Fujino and orders, "I want Kirito to destroy everyone!"

 

[Mr Technician]

Asuna-biatch is only the sex partner for Rapist Inoda. But, she has got just and only two perks which boost Golden Boy in sex. I don't see how the author will unentangle himself from that, and easily...

But moreover - she turned to be biatch for Male cocks in general. If that was intendent, the genius plan worked. However she will become lost talent for the male cocks. Because she is fucking just one of them.

Real Sow would rather actively searching all Male cocks, that also could lead to real NTR - when she cheats both of idiots: Rapist Inoda and CucKirito. In all around places. And that is not what she is doing. So, in that territory - this story failed for me. And Rapist Inoda also failed his mission to make her a Sow.

 

[saitamaTM]

thing is me not see fujino as super good writer but he not bad writing just don't expectations so much and get disappointing

 

[Arya12345]

I think what some of us NTR fans were visioning was gonna happen over the past few updates just didn't happen and its taking a different path with the memory rewriting, end of quarantine turning more into a loving than lustful ending (Inoda playing with Yui as if it was father daughter and Asuna kinda treating it that way)

 

[Mr Technician]

thing is me not see fujino as super good writer but he not bad writing just don't expectations so much and get disappointing

The problem with this, is that the story turned to Love Story. Between Rapist Inoda and Asuna-biatch. Ok, let we say somehow that's true. People are not bored yet of sex scenes between them... But they eventually get bored anyway. She will stay one-cock only slave, or two-cock slave (if CucKirito will manage somehow to have normal sex with her again).

That's all folks. How many sex scenes you could possibly invent more with that... which we haven't seen also in other games?
Author increases the pace, new chapters adds some new sex scenes, started with groping, then jerkoffs, blowjobs ... vaginal and anal scenes... but there is a lack of more holes in this biatch. What i am saying - you cannot invent a wheel yet again.

Very soon it will be very boring to watch the sex scenes. I hope i am not right on this one.

Edit: so, i am waiting to see Corruption. Love, sex, physical, mental - whatever corruption that be. This is much more interesting than just stick the single cock in her every single time, and pretend she is turning to a Sow just by that.

 

[saitamaTM]

as for me the scene need more because it kinda feel lacking now

 

[Arya12345]

as for me the scene need more because it kinda feel lacking now

Think we really needed that raw sex creampie last day of the hotel. To me kinda weird how we didn't get it here but we will get it outside of the apartment next update. Like it would make more sense if we just continued Inoda's pursuit for raw sex than to just randomly give us it like this

 

[Aniky Light]

it not gonna happen fujino already talk about thing like kirito not know or enjoy become cuck

Fujino only says things he wants, not what other people want, and not all of us have the same desires. For example, my desire is for Kirito to smash that son of a bitch's face in. That's a real twist, not for Inoda to screw everyone and everything, that fucking lunatic. Who does he think he is, Zeno, the master of all the universes? Sometimes I wonder why Fujino is so obsessed with adding more powers to Inoda. The more he adds, the more it seems to me like it's not enough.

If Fujino keeps ruining the plot like this, well, I can't consider it a game, just content to jerk off to, and that's it.

He could have put a warning: don't try to play or understand, this game makes no sense, just watch it xD