No I think he was after Netorare, I think he was just expecting something better than this generic "women are insipid weaklings without the MC" bullshit.
It seemed like he's a netori type guy from his description of how he likes his NTR.
Besides that, I do agree with his points that it does seem a bit rushed.
Becca's NTR I like and was probably the best part of the entire update in my opinion, still it could have been sharpened up in a few areas.
Mary's NTR plot is a weird approach. Idk not a huge fan of the direction since Mary's acting a bit too out of character here and it's a bit too similar to Becca's.
My original post I talked about the remote control plot and go more in detail and all with everything, personally I felt that was a better direction for this route with Mary.
I'm still saddened we never saw that full gym scene man.

It was so well set up too and that dialogue leading to it was so sexy, maybe one day.
I am a bit disappointed and Uber bit off a bit more then he could chew with doing a mega update instead of just doing an NTR route. Still liked it though.
Hbu? How'd you feel about the update kind sir?