Someone just posted in Uberpie's discord a 10-12 page essay/manifesto (8.5"x11", 1" margins, 12 pt Times New Roman, double-spaced) on the current state of affairs in Taffy Town and its citizenry. Nearly 3,000 words. Just in case it gets deleted for spamming/text walling/whatever. I thought it would be interesting to memorialize it for posterity.
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paperrater(dot)com grades it a "D" (63%), but your mileage may vary.
I think the guy does misinterpret that this NTR path specifically is netorare.
From his description of liking NTR games, he's more a netori type of guy which is a lot less controversial.
I can't through everything there, but I do agree that Mary's NTR route was a bit rushed or just an odd angle for it.
He is right that even if Mary hasn't gotten any proper male attention in months, she would still be pretty loyal to Peter and stay away from Darnell. Also not a big fan of it being very similar to Becca's route in some ways, that'll probably change with progression though.
That's why I wished they kept the remote control path with her. Clearly she's not under any trance there, but Peter doesn't know that and if Darnell finds out he'll expose the truth so she'll want to prevent that since in her head it might harm her relationship with Peter.
I liked the idea that after a couple of sessions where Mary pretends she's under trance with Darnell while he does his "things" with her that she'd eventually start falling for him naturally.
For Becca's route, it's fine right now in my opinion.
She is always been gullible and Darnell along Dr. Beatrix take advantage of it makes sense and isn't too far fetched. Too be honest her scenes with Darnell are my favorite part of this update.
Probably gonna get some people who disagree, but I really wished this update stayed focused on just the NTR path like it was originally intended to.
It's been delayed for so long and felt in needed the team's full attention to get it a proper introduction.
