And so another game has made people divided yet again. While some people write a pure loving review, others write with a bit more criticism, and so begins a divide, for you may not have an opinion if others disagree.
Yep that entire first part is stupid, no I do not care. If a person wants to say any game, this one included, is great or whatever go ahead, if you feel to include parts that can HELP the dev then do so, if you feel a person is being OVERLY HARSH in their review (unless it is a legit flaming review just saying the person is a shit person or worse) then get over it. Disliking a review doesn't help anyone, especially any devs on here. Having a dumb argument helps less. Wanna argue, do it through PMs instead of in the review section (though its hypocritical since im leaving this here also).
Point is, if its a valid review (that isn't nothing but insults to the game dev for their hard work) then carry on. No ones perfect, everyone makes mistakes. A dev can not improve if no one points out mistakes, same as they cannot improve through pure insults.
That being said, the review.
Now the game isn't terrible nor is it perfect. The characters do have times were they communicate in a more robotic style and times were its much smoother. The grammar isn't perfect and dips in and out, specifically when a character miss uses a name or gender for someone. The fact she is an erotic writer but with a naïve view on sex makes it hard to believe. You could either have the husband be more prudish or have it where she is branching out into Erotica writing and needs help creating new stories, you don't need to do either just an idea of what could help it feel more believable.
Her "corruption" seems a bit forced if not sped up. She goes from a loving wife to a unsatisfied woman in what feels like one or two outside interactions. Maybe have a day/night time implemented so it feels like time actually passes between events as apposed to it being all day yet no indication of time passing. Being the husband in more interactions looking for his wife would also help since it would give us his perspective on events and the passing of time. Maybe a few events were you get a side pic of what you wife is getting up to while you search for her or while you recover in bed. The biggest take is to implement an actual time indicator so we can tell how and why she is getting corrupted so fast. It only shows one bed time scene and yet we know they have been there longer than a single day.
Don't take my words as a disliking because I did enjoy the game. It is original in story and I hope to see future updates and improvements. 6/10
