RPGM - Completed - TakenoteR [v1.0] [HNStudy]

This is a lovely corruption-based game by HNStudy, with a number of flaws preventing it from all that it could be.

The writing is great and very arousing, with a focus on corruption and (increasingly as the game goes on) cuckolding. The progression is not the exact same as every other NTR game out there, with an off-beat pacing to it, but it's still appropriate and comes with a porn-typical absurdity to the scenarios that keeps things still a bit light-hearted.

Unfortunately the MTL could be better, as it's at the level of getting the pronouns wrong all the time still.

The art is similar: highly competent in most things, but the women's faces are quite goofy at times, and not necessarily in a hot way.

There is a gallery system, accessible from a PC you eventually unlock, but at certain points in the game (such as right before the end of this version, 0.9) it isn't accessible from your current save.

Scenes you already viewed are also only unlocked by using up "notes" you discover in the game, some seemingly missable. Many are unlockable in a sequence only, so saving up for your favorites doesn't always work either. The whole thing is done to boost immersion, which I appreciate, but in practice it gets more in the way of the faps than it helps.

The bugs can be bad, with the game freezing at several points during scenes. A particularly egregious one this version softlocks you right away if you visit the nudist beach during the exploration scene right after the intro.

All in all very promising, but it won't be the 5-star it could become without many more scenes and some significant polishing before the final version.

Thankfully, saves starting from the most recent update seem to be included, so even in its current state, this is an easy recommend for any NTR fan out there, even those with doubts about RPGM as there isn't that much walking and no grinding. A surprisingly charming and immersive experience for the engine and a solid addition to the NTRPG genre.

this game is so good I really wish the dev would post updates more often and had more games like this one.

please support this dev they're doing awesome work!

It's really really really really good. I'm just writing more stuff here to get to the 200 characters minimum required to post a review. 5/5 stars. it's worth it, i can't be any more specific than this, just try the game you will enjoy it!

I've been following and playing the game since it first came out, and I'll get to a few things I agreed with and liked from previous reviews.

The lack of combat mechanics that are used in every game made with RPGMaker, whether they are included in the flow or not, is a big plus. This makes for a simple interface.

The lack of unused locations that crowds and stretches the map makes for a more linear and enjoyable game. The fact that there is only one progressible location makes it more enjoyable to play.

The illustrations and our main character are really beautiful. The story is not bad. Agreeing with previous reviews, I think the NTR part is a bit fast. It should have been more heavily corrupted.

We use almost every location in the game. I would have liked some parts to be more, for example; some events in the pool of the hotel where we stay. Spying on people having sex at the end of the beach. We used the BAR in the last updates but I wish there were more of it.

At some points of the story, the night flow could have been nice.

I think this is the end of the game. I'm looking forward to your new projects. You should definitely continue with this kind of artwork, expand your own style (Fantasy Valley is one of my favorite examples).

Finally, the fact that it's animated makes the game even better. It would be nice to have more animated scenes in new games.

10/9

The game has a decent story, it is fairly fast paced and yet not quite as rushed as most games like this usually are. The gameplay is basic, mostly just moving to different locations and finding people. But there's no grind which is a positive. It's simple but effective so I like that part of it.

As for the artwork and renders, unfortunately I don't like it at all. And all the d*cks are abnormally big considering how rare it is to have a 12 inch ding dong. This makes it unrealistic, and after a while boring during the scenes (Which feel repetitive after a while too)

Overall I'd only give this 3/5, and I think that's fair. It could be a higher rating in the future, but for now it's average.

Another hidden Gem !

This is definitely the kind of games that stays !
It is simple, based on a simple and "funny" story, not too much dialogues, enough not to skip them. And it does the job, following the story makes it really exciting, the scenes are hot, simple but kinky drawings and animations places the mood just right it should be !

Can't wait for it to be finished, and for other games like that !

Well although I love the renders, I think that the wife didn't get the corruption properly. She went straight ahead with the NTR. Don't get me wrong, I'm a NTR fan all the way but I much prefer the slow road. We went from simply bjs to anal in a split of a second.

bar none the hottest anal scene out of any game you will play.
This game is hotter in thirty minutes than treasures of nadia + lust epidemic.
Unique art style to boot. what more do i have to say. the author should do some fetish stuff.

This game is an example of how writing is a major part to porno games and it drastically sets games like this aside from others in the space.

This review is also a response to a previous review calling anyone highly rating this game "friends or forced". No, the game is simply good.

The premise of the game is simple. You play as the wife in a typical relationship. You are on a vacation and a part of that vacation is to find inspiration. Inspiration for what you may ask? An erotic novel. The wife is a writer and specializes in such novels. Think 50 shades of grey. As the game progresses you get more and more inspiration for the novel as you get more and more corrupted.

The art style is good. As much as people will rag on it, having an actual 2D style that sets you aside from generic styles and AI garbage really sets the game above many. It reminds me of old Newgrounds styles which overall isn't bad. Some people may just be too used to the high quality and 3D styles we have today. But this is nothing to scoff at either. Animations are just 1 - 3 still images looped. Nothing huge in the animation department.

The gameplay is normal RPGM gameplay without any battles. And its very easy to tell what to do next if you.... read the story... It truly makes me ponder how many people skip the story in games and just skip to the sex scenes and then wonder what they have to do next. The game will literally tell you where to go next. Its very simple. You don't need a quest tracker if the game itself will tell you outright where to go next. Read.

Now on to the meat of the review. And the main reason why I gave it a 5 star. The story. You see just being an erotic novel writer isn't everything. The story moves on and the wife during the beginning of the trip becomes disgruntled with her husband. This is because he isn't satisfying her sexually and ignoring her a lot. This grounds the story in something real because funny enough, not sexually satisfying your partner is a huge component to why people cheat. I'm not saying its justified, but it makes more sense than other stories on here where for no reason a character turns cock hungry.

And the story progresses at a pace that makes sense. Slowly the wife gets into situations where she can say no but the sexual urges and the justification she gives in her head for the novel spurs the story on for her to become corrupted by those thoughts. It truly is something when I come across corruption stories that actually make sense and are paced well like this. Some scenes are silly like a guy saying his balls hurt and that leads to a scene. But the wife is the one filling the justification in her head because of her sexual urges and the monologues of the character do alleviate the silly scenes and make them more than just some naive bimbo like other games write.

Yes this means there are no real choices in this game. The entire game is on rails and is a corruption NTR story. There's no way to avoid that. And if thats not for you, then don't play the game. Everything is an illusion of choice, not actual choice.

Overall this game deserves its ratings. It shows how you can have an uncommon artstyle but still put out a banger game because you understand how to write a good story. Yeah sex scenes are nice, but story is truly what makes games like these stand aside. When the content being presented makes sense and is formed well, it becomes a more comprehensive whole. Lots of games can learn from this game on how narrative is key. Otherwise if we wanted to just jack it to sex scenes, many other mediums are better for that.

5/5

I loved the game, it has a great feel, good story and animation.
The NTR was just right and didn't play into the Wife humiliation route.

I I love RPG styles games and while the NTR games are not my favorite I like this game's playability and straight forward approach.
No Grind, No mini-games. I rarely give 5 stars, but this one gets it

Sorry for the one, but.... I really think most of the reviews are forced/friends and so....

The game is okay, and the art "interesting". But that's it.

You start and get a really nice interesting idea, then you get the typically idiot/jerk boyfriend who's gay and stupid. But this is no problem.

As some other mentioned, the lack of a quest tracker makes everything harder. But this isn't a'problem'....

What's my main problem with this "game"?

There's no choice, not for real.... you get forced to accept everything that happens, it's super normal for a girl to almost get anal fingered by some random dude she just met?
Is okay.... But then, you get choices....
Some random dude ask for help, he ask for you to fake being his girlfriend...
You get a choice... Yes or not... well, no, no matter what you pick, you end up doing it... then you go jerk him off because you dropped coffee on him after he kissed you.

Then you get the choice not to jerk him off... but no, you do it anyway....

Then you get the sauna even, another choice, another same result.

Then you get that pumpkin search event....
You have to search for pumpkins just to show your body to a child....??

FMC way of thinking:
FMC - "I'll never cheat my husband"
Random dude she just met -"Because of me your testicles hurt?
FMD - is that possible? I better do this before I get in trouble."

""

If you're not giving anything different, don't offer a fake choice.

Great lite NTR game.

Nice storyline, nice art, great cast, there is not much to hate about this game. Only con is it's very short, less than 2 hours, but apart from that it's really good with nice content and artwork.

8.5/10

Don't get fooled by simple looking art, this game is fucking hoooot and has a lot of potencial to be even better. I really don't appreciate netorare content when you play the cheated MC, but when MC is the cheater, is a lot more interesting.

One thing that I liked: Elika development into a bitchy wife is beautifully done, and her growing frustation from not having sex is a masterpiece in porn games storytelling.

One thing that needs to get better: The second interaction in the beach is pretty much equal the first one, but she already know the staff guy´s intention, should react in a less naive way.

0.7 review
this is like a jab comic in a rpgm format and I like it
so far pretty solid scenes but there is still room left for the further downfall of the protagonist
looking forward to future, hopefully frequent, updates

Reviewed on v0.6

It's a really fun little game that explores a wife slowly beginning to cheat on her husband with various men while the two of them are on vacation. The wife keeps finding herself going along with sexual situations under the pretense that she's just taking notes for the next erotic novel she's going to write. It's fun to see her clearly lying to herself in the heat of the moment, and offers a fun (if not a little silly) justification to her slow moral degeneration. While she does grapple with feelings of guilt at her actions, the game never dwells on them for so long that it brings down the mood; this is a fun romp that doesnt stray from being light hearted.

As many people in the thread have mentioned, the art is great, and stands out particularly against the normal backdrop of anime on this website. It's a very distinct style. And I would know, I first started jerking off to the artist that this games art was traced from like 16 years ago. It's a rip off of JAB from Jab-Comix. I'm not giving any moral repudiations to it, at the end of the day, talking about tracing art while on a website that hosts largely stolen porn games is a bit of the pot calling the kettle black - but it was interesting enough that I felt it needed mentioning.

Also, gonna bandwagon on Every1sGrudge's comment and petition for the title to be changed to NoteTakeR to slip NTR into the title lol.

Looking forward to future updates.

I really like the simplicity of the story and the gameplay. No grinding, no quests, no combat, no points gathering. Keep it that way. The art is unique but it could be a little bit better, but it is still good.

really great for what it is. hope it becomes less linear as it gets further into development. some of the art could use some touching up but overall i really like the art style. The build up and scenes is really good even if the English isn't always perfect but these are very very minor gripes.

The built of the character is slow and nice, in spite of we kwow at certain point she will become en in a sizequeen anal slut, the corruption of a wife it's always exiting to see, the dev should find his own way to tell this common history and I think, he's in the rigth way, anyway, I would aprecitate less clifhangers

Absolutely fantastic job with the game so far. As a player, I must admit that I'm eagerly waiting in anticipation to see what direction you're planning to take this game in the future. Your vision is truly commendable, and it keeps me constantly on the edge of my seat, curious about the upcoming developments.

Furthermore, one of the aspects I thoroughly appreciate in your game is the rich roster of secondary characters that you've thoughtfully created. These characters not only add depth to the overall gameplay experience but also provide a diverse narrative landscape, making the game significantly more engaging. Their presence offers a dynamic, nuanced environment, one which I am sure will unfurl even more complexity as the game evolves.

I am particularly excited about the potential interactions with these secondary characters in future updates. The opportunity for players to delve deeper into the game world through interactions with these characters, I believe, will only enhance the game's appeal. This potential for deeper engagement adds a layer of richness and depth to the gaming experience that many players, including myself, find absolutely thrilling.

Please, keep up the great work. Your efforts to refine and further develop this game are not going unnoticed. On the contrary, they are amplifying the anticipation and excitement among players. We are all looking forward to the next steps in this gaming journey.

Excellent game and totally unique. A master piece in its gender, very original. Deserves a better place and more donations!!! Can't wait for the continuations and missed options (scenes). Continue with the grat job!

Review is for v0.5
A game with a lot of promise.
It's got a unique art style that's not great, but still pretty dang good. Characters are interesting enough and the story is passable.

Really my only complaint is that there isn't that much content right now, and some of the bigger scenes aren't completed which left me feeling unfulfilled. It's also apparent that the creators first language is not English because there are a plethora of grammatical errors and sentences that only half makes sense.
All in all though, a couple really big updates and this game is going places.