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hey buddy thx for sharing i have a request of you don't mind.. going forward can you use a single mega folder and add to it when you intend to share instead of a new mega link each time so it will be always the same mega link with new pictures added inside the folder ?

also i'm not following the comic you just shared but looking at those 18 pictures if those are "father" and "daughter" please use those words more , it's hotter when she calls him dad in any phrase , same goes for the word "mom" just don't uses them excessively in each phrase
Hey friend, I´ll see what I can do with the folder management ;).

They are brother and sister. I try not to have the saying it excessively since it feels unnatural but if it it

I would loves to see Dylan fuck his Mom in the ass!
There will be an anal scene, at some point ;)
 

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Ok I'll be completely honest, I expected it would be hotter .

As you know I'm a big fan of your work. The dialogues are amazing, sisters are smoking hot, and MC has a schlong to satisfy them! All perfect. Sexual tension between MC and Kleio was palpable, so I was expecting a really hard sex scene. But I don't know exactly why, if the lighting or the positions were not the best, but I definitely know that keeping the big t-shirt on put me off. I mean, it's super sexy to see a woman walking around wearing that. But when it comes to the action, especially after having wait for so long, it was lacking.

The little sister's phone sex for instance was way way hotter, even though her body is not as absurdly attractive as the other, and it was just on the phone.


I just said all these things as a constructive criticism, so that you may take him to consideration in the next chapters (or ignore it if you see fit, I'm just trying to help with my point of view but I'm merely a reader in my opinion isn't necessarily shared with the others no matter how much I think it is).
 
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Ok I'll be completely honest, I expected it would be hotter .

As you know I'm a big fan of your work. The dialogues are amazing, sisters are smoking hot, and MC has a schlong to satisfy them! All perfect. Sexual tension between MC and Kleio was palpable, so I was expecting a really hard sex scene. But I don't know exactly why, if the lighting or the positions were not the best, but I definitely know that keeping the big t-shirt on put me off. I mean, it's super sexy to see a woman walking around wearing that. But when it comes to the action, especially after having wait for so long, it was lacking.

The little sister's phone sex for instance was way way hotter, even though her body is not as absurdly attractive as the other, and it was just on the phone.


I just said all these things as a constructive criticism, so that you may take him to consideration in the next chapters (or ignore it if you see fit, I'm just trying to help with my point of view but I'm merely a reader in my opinion isn't necessarily shared with the others no matter how much I think it is).
Hey friend,
thanks for the feedback. Yeah, I get what you mean and it was kind of a little bit "on purpose" I didn´t want the first sex scene between Kleio and Cedric be just straight up "hard fucking" but rather some sensual love making. Purely because of how their tentative behaviour during the build up. Same pretty much with the shirt, I intentionally left it on so that the next times (when the clothes are completly off / or in something more sexy) feel also like a "new" thing or rather an evolution of the first time. Though I think that was a misstake on my part. Since as you correctly say the first time is something very special and should be a big bang. Part of it why I personally think the scene isn´t as good as it could have been, is because it was also pretty much the first time I´ve modeled people having sex with each other, which in the end is a skill within itself and surely I need to further practise it, to make the scenes look better in the future.
In the end I think however good I would´ve done the scene, it probably would always somewhat dissapoint and not live up to the build over all the chapters beforehand but I´m pretty confident that with the scenes in the following chapter and the first time between Ced and Jane I improved on some of those things. And not only Jane, with the reworked version of Kleio in the next chapter I´m also pretty much confident that her second time with Ced will also be alot better.

Anyway thank you for taking your time, writing the feedback. I genuinely appreciate it ;)
 

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Futa nizzle?? Really???

I know incest is a perverted fantasy that I'm into.

I honestly have no wish to commit it in real life, as a matter of fact, I abhor the idea, but in the fantasy world (and NOT imagining my own relatives), it's a perversion I'm attracted to, so I recognize I'm not in a good place to judge.

And I mean, not condemning, this gen Z's perversion is beyond me. Gay sh*t, futa poop, furry abomination, they give me the creeps and they are almost everywhere nowadays, poisoning the good old proper art porn since a lot of authors cater to such demands
 
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Preview - Forbidden Fruits - Ch. 6
Hi, the next 22 Pages (136 incl Cover) are now on Fanbox and Subscribestar.


Thinking of something fun as a break...
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A pleasure break in between studying...
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This picture!

Maaan that's what I'm talking about.

And that's what I was talking about and I said that I expected hotter sex (which btw came out as "harder sex" but it was a typo) .

U see? This is sexy af, very nice job, sir!

Can't w8 to see Jane meeting her brother and things getting hotter with her as well.
Even though it'll take at least a month because of A Mother's Shame and next chapter will probably be about the trouble of getting to the airport late.

I'd honestly support and see in advance if there were discreet ways to pay like Google pay or something, I'm in a position where I just can't use credit card for this kind of purpose...
 
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This picture!

Maaan that's what I'm talking about.

And that's what I was talking about and I said that I expected hotter sex (which btw came out as "harder sex" but it was a typo) .

U see? This is sexy af, very nice job, sir!

Can't w8 to see Jane meeting her brother and things getting hotter with her as well.
Even though it'll take at least a month because of A Mother's Shame and next chapter will probably be about the trouble of getting to the airport late.

I'd honestly support and see in advance if there were discreet ways to pay like Google pay or something, I'm in a position where I just can't use credit card for this kind of purpose...
Hey friend,
I´m glad that you enjoy the pic. I took the feedback to heart and the sex scenes in chapter six of ff and chapter four of AMS are more explicit than the first one between Kleio and Ced. So that the penetration is more visible and feels less like softcore porn.

Thank you so much for considering supporting me. I think on Subscribestar it unfortunately is only possible to pay via credit card or debit credit card. Fanbox has the option to support via Paypal but I´m not sure about google pay. Maybe I should look into Patreon or Boosty so that this way I can "broaden" the amount of payment options this way. Though I fear that my account wouldn´t stay long on Patreon due to their restrictions. And adding another site for my content also means that I also have to put in the time and manage it, which doesn´t sound like much and also takes up a lot of time, but it is still taking away time from the little amount of time I´ve for the stories each week. But I´ll see that maybe the next time I´ve some days of I look into setting up another site.
 
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Hey friend,
I´m glad that you enjoy the pic. I took the feedback to heart and the sex scenes in chapter six of ff and chapter four of AMS are more explicit than the first one between Kleio and Ced. So that the penetration is more visible and feels less like softcore porn.
Kleio, in my opinion, is by far your most attractive character. Don't get me wrong, Isabella has a gorgeous design and her MILF appeal is off the charts, but Kleio is just... And unlike many 3D artists, you design characters whose proportions are "realistic" for lack of a better term. I liked the scene of Kleio and Ced first having sex, and I like that she kept his shirt on--it gives off the impression of spontaneity and comfort. With that said, I do hope that we get a scene (soon?) between Ced and Kleio where they go "all-out" so to speak, you know cheeks clapping, breasts swinging, the works, haha! Congratulations on both your works, Tal3s. You're not only a great 3D artist, you're a fantastic storyteller as well.
 
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Kleio, in my opinion, is by far your most attractive character. Don't get me wrong, Isabella has a gorgeous design and her MILF appeal is off the charts, but Kleio is just... And unlike many 3D artists, you design characters whose proportions are "realistic" for lack of a better term. I liked the scene of Kleio and Ced first having sex, and I like that she kept his shirt on--it gives off the impression of spontaneity and comfort. With that said, I do hope that we get a scene (soon?) between Ced and Kleio where they go "all-out" so to speak, you know cheeks clapping, breasts swinging, the works, haha! Congratulations on both your works, Tal3s. You're not only a great 3D artist, you're a fantastic storyteller as well.
Hey friend,
Thank you for your kind words. Happy to hear that you enjoy both stories and also the story aspects of it and regarding Kleio... if you like her now, wait till you see her in chapter six ;). Since I had many problems with her skin tone which oddly seemed green in some lighting situations, I had updated her skin in chapter six. And believe me, it took her visuals onto a whole nother level. I'll see that I post the comparison between the old version of her and the new one on here in the coming days, so you can see what I mean. In chapter six there will also be such a raunchy sex scene like you imaging between her and Cedric ;) but a bit later in the chapter. First its time for Jane and Ced to have their first time together.

Btw Isabella also had a little visual update in chapter four although way less extensive than Kleios update ;)
 
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Hey friend,
Thank you for your kind words. Happy to hear that you enjoy both stories and also the story aspects of it and regarding Kleio... if you like her now, wait till you see her in chapter six ;). Since I had many problems with her skin tone which oddly seemed green in some lighting situations, I had updated her skin in chapter six. And believe me, it took her visuals onto a whole nother level. I'll see that I post the comparison between the old version of her and the new one on here in the coming days, so you can see what I mean. In chapter six there will also be such a raunchy sex scene like you imaging between her and Cedric ;) but a bit later in the chapter. First its time for Jane and Ced to have their first time together.

Btw Isabella also had a little visual update in chapter four although way less extensive than Kleios update ;)
I'm on the edge of my seat, :love:.
 
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I'm on the edge of my seat, :love:.
And here is the picture I was talking about with the comparisson. Option C is the new Kleio Variant with chapter six going forward. Of course not only is the skin tone looking different but I also did some tweaks to her navel, eye brows, eyes, areola/nipples. I also did some tweaks to her pussy and pubic hair, which aren´t in effect yet in this comparisson pic. With the new skin it now also allows me to make her completly without make up, as shown in the comparisson. Since I had a problem with her old model which would only let me change some make up aspects but never make her completly make up less. Hence her face looks even more different in this comparisson. But I think make up less Kleio is very cute and apparently my subscribers thought the same, since it was pretty much a landslide win for this version.

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