Unity Abandoned Tale of the Divine Schlong [Prototype/Early Beta] [HotLewdGuy]

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Overview:
On another languid evening, you return home and spend your time lonely. While surfing the Internet, you come across an interesting advertisement inviting you to plunge into the world of fantasy, love, lust and incredible adventures. Assuming it's just another stupid porn-game, you closed your browser and went to bed. What happened in your dream is a question that you have to answer yourself, but you woke up not at home, but in the middle of the forest, naked and clearly not in our world. The world in which you woke up consists only of girls, there is not a single male person around and no one living in this world knows about such a type of creature as you. Pixies, elves, cat girls, sexy goddesses are waiting for you.​

Thread Updated: 2020-11-08
Release Date: 2020-11-08
Developer: HotLewdGuy F95zone -

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Version: Prototype/Early Beta
OS: Windows
Language: English
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The game is short, as it's a Prototype and the dev is looking for feedbacks. For more Information refer to Developer Notes

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[Ahegao is best]

So,WIN64?

 

[combige]

Usage of 3D looks good.

 

[Screwthename]

A good start ! The images looks really good, as well as the models.
Only remarks I'd make : The text appear too slowly, and it breaks the flow of the dialogues. And the background i written here, but not into the game, so if you don't read the description on f95zone, you won't understand that you're from another world (and why the inkeeper refer to "your world"). But i guess it's just because it's a BETA and you haven't implemented the intro yet.
Anyway, great wotk, will keep an eye on this !

 

[CortoMaltese]

I think this prototype has the potential for a very good continuation of the story. Keep it up!

 

[Deleted member 2730212]

Looks very nice

 

[AAkula]

I agree with the earlier mentioned slow forming dialog, but id also just mention how bad the dialog is on its own... I havent turned a slooty elf off from Dialog before and I shut down the program not that far in. it was just to...I dont even know what to call it. Non realistic? UnImmersive? I dont know, but it was laughable.

 

[HotLewdGuy]

Hey! I am the developer of this prototype.

So,WIN64?

win32 is backward compatible w/ win64 platform, so win32 executables works on win64 platform.

how much content is there for now ?

not much. only about 10 minutes of gameplay

I agree with the earlier mentioned slow forming dialog, but id also just mention how bad the dialog is on its own... I havent turned a slooty elf off from Dialog before and I shut down the program not that far in. it was just to...I dont even know what to call it. Non realistic? UnImmersive? I dont know, but it was laughable.

Current story was written only to visualize progress of game engine. I developed everything from scratches to have full control over the game features and other important things. This is not just another visual novel w/ linear storytelling. Just wait few months, if you like the fantasy setting, I believe you would love the game.


Thank you all for the feedback! I will work much more harder to deliver new features as soon as it would be possible. Join my discord to discuss about the game and to get latest updates asap.

Best regards

 

[Ahegao is best]

Hey! I am the developer of this prototype.


win32 is backward compatible w/ win64 platform, so win32 executables works on win64 platform.


thx for your help!

 

[xmilteach]

Thx

 

[zeraligator]

From the overview and the images it seems like it doesn't take itself too seriously and I hope that assesment is correct.


Edit: Having played the game the writing jumps out as a point to improve on, it's kinda clunky and occasionally long winded for a character who was just a random Joe Schmoe turned hunter. Not exactly the most eloquent of character.

 

[AnnaW]

Curious to see where this'll go!

 

[SvenVlad]

Beautiful renders. Good luck.

 

[HotLewdGuy]

From the overview and the images it seems like it doesn't take itself too seriously and I hope that assesment is correct.


Edit: Having played the game the writing jumps out as a point to improve on, it's kinda clunky and occasionally long winded for a character who was just a random Joe Schmoe turned hunter. Not exactly the most eloquent of character.

As I said before, current storyline isn't represents the final result. The main objective right now to create core features of game engine.

Also about "turned hunter". Actually because of roleplay-part of the game in the final version of the game you can be a hunter. My project not about linear interactive storytelling like in average visual novel. Using the character stat points system you can be a mighty warrior, skillful magician, cunning liar / thief, etc. And your decisions in the game will lead you to different results. It's like a real rpg but a little bit simplified and in 2d w/ adult content

Curious to see where this'll go!

Thank you! I believe you won't get disappointed

Beautiful renders. Good luck.

Glad to hear that! Thank you!

 

[Ali ibn Hassan]

Looks good so far.
We'll see how it goes in the next update.

 

[Dictateur]

Real noob question here, why prefering unity over ren'py ?

 

[HotLewdGuy]

Real noob question here, why prefering unity over ren'py ?

There are several reasons:

1. I am experienced c# developer (software engineer irl) so unity is one of my everyday tools
2. I hate writing scripts like its implemented in renpy so my implementation of storytelling based on graphs (screenshot in attachments)
3. This game isn't just yet another visual novel with linear storytelling. There would be exploration part, dialogues, quests, battles, leveling, spells, relations. These features arent implemented out of box in renpy so I decided to chose the instrument that I know enough to implement it

Renpy good choice if you are planning to create game with features that coming out of box of renpy. If it doesn't fit your needs then the best choice is the best of your tools which is Unity in my case

 

[HansDampf788]

Renpy good choice if you are planning to create game with features that coming out of box of renpy. If it doesn't fit your needs then the best choice is the best of your tools which is Unity in my case

Haven't played you game yet but I want to give you at least my reasons for prefering Ren'Py over every other engine for VN's:
- the ability to save everytime most Unity games I tryed don't have that or are in some way limited
- rollback is in my opinion one a very important feature in VN's and this is not a common feature in Unity based VN's

The images in the op look amazing.

Another thing by the fact that the MC is the only male in the world that it is a harem game?

 

[ARMtheWRAITh]

You need make text faster or i fall sleep while i read

 

[HotLewdGuy]

Haven't played you game yet but I want to give you at least my reasons for prefering Ren'Py over every other engine for VN's:
- the ability to save everytime most Unity games I tryed don't have that or are in some way limited
- rollback is in my opinion one a very important feature in VN's and this is not a common feature in Unity based VN's

The images in the op look amazing.

Another thing by the fact that the MC is the only male in the world that it is a harem game?

The ability to save the game anytime - this is not my case. I understand its important for vns but the dialogues isnt main part of my game. For example in the skyrim you cant save in the middle of dialogue w/ npc cuz dialogues isnt core part of gameplay. same in my project. however later if more ppl will ask me to implement this feature I'll add it so no worries.
Rollback in dialogues is a cool feature and right now I can't say for sure if it will be implemented or not. Im gonna think about it a little bit later when more of the core features of the game will be ready.

Im happy to hear that you enjoy my renders. Yea, main character is the male that somehow appeared in the world where only females are exists. Because of this plot my hands are free to implement some interesting "kinky" things like tricking npcs to force them to suck player's dick (cuz they dont understand what is it), teach them how to fuck, etc

You need make text faster or i fall sleep while i read

I've just added to trello task to implement text rendering speed selector. Thank you for feedback!