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SpicyHornyBadger

New Member
Dec 11, 2022
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I cannot, for the life of me, find the second watermelon that's supposed to be in the camp.
Edit: Nevermind, found it. It's in the cart by the stall.
 
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Amakuo

Newbie
Jun 17, 2021
50
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Cella34 I just stumbled upon your game on Itch yesterday and I was so impressed to find a genuinely good point and click adventure in the adult games section! It didn't feel like a side-scroller with extra steps or a visual novel with basic item interactions thrown in, but like a proper P&C experience, with tons of personality and a pleasant amount of brain teasing. Well done! If you would like me to proofread it for you, I would be happy to support development that way until it becomes available for purchase :)

A couple suggestions/impressions:
  • I have mixed feelings about character movement without clicking. Convenient at times, but there were several instances, especially with sex scenes that happen near screen edges, where it made me change locations without wanting to. One time, it made me miss a line of dialogue by triggering a capture scene (the futa orc by the well, and the elf hiding behind the tree who says something when you approach) because I didn't stop walking quickly enough. Maybe leaving a scene should require a click?
  • As far as puzzles go, the part where you need to scare the couple away from under the tree felt a bit like a dead end. I didn't know what to do with them and the lack of any sort of dialogue or interaction made it feel like it was broken or I was missing an item. It might be worth adding a short conversation, maybe something like the MC asking them to move, getting frustrated, and one of them replying that "she doesn't scare them". That would nudge the player toward finding something scary.
  • I think it would be lovely if you could interact more with the elf that gets stuck trying to get in the tavern's back room :) Maybe giving her a few lines and facial reactions when seen from inside.
  • It has been SO nice to see NPCs move around and do different things as the main quest progresses. From the couple continuing their business in the bushes to the orcs making more and more victims closer to the inner city or even just the elf going to take a nap in the background near the tavern, it has made the world feel so alive. Thank you for taking the time!
 

galindae

Member
Apr 24, 2018
189
55
this is how new druid didnt even spared her virgin body to protect her homeland from naughty orc invaders.
 
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