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CrowoftheSun

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Oct 29, 2024
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Overview:
You play as a lonely man, weighed down by guilt and stuck in the past.
Until one day, your childhood best friend appears at your doorstep after years of separation changing your life forever.​


Thread Updated: 2024-10-30
Release Date: 2024-10-30
Developer: CrowoftheSun -
Censored: No
Version: Final
OS: Windows, Linux
Language: English
Genre:
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Extras: Italian Translation*
* This unofficial port/version is not released by developer, download at your own risk.
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CrowoftheSun

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Game Developer
Oct 29, 2024
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Hey everyone. Tandem Hearts was a small project, a way for me to dip my toes into visual novel development and complete something from start to finish. My next project will be longer. Anyway, thank you for trying it out.
 

skwada

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Feb 13, 2020
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Hey everyone. Tandem Hearts was a small project, a way for me to dip my toes into visual novel development and complete something from start to finish. My next project will be longer. Anyway, thank you for trying it out.
feedback:
  • some of the renders were quite nice
    • the animation was generic
  • pacing was poor - I realize the game is meant to be a demo so this isn't particularly meaningful but you should flesh out everything a lot more in your next project. The jump to the girl sucking MC's dick was too sudden and random
    • the emotional "climax" of the girl relieving MC of his blame was not built up to
    • the characters were not developed at all
  • show rather than tell - instead of having characters blatantly stating X, imply X via their actions, expressions, and unsaid thoughts and let the audience figure out the rest. that approach is much more satisfying and feels less contrived
you clearly put effort into it and your grammar and english are decent so it's already a step above the usual :p i shall play your next game too

this is very much down to personal pref but maybe consider using DAZ or HS2 for higher quality graphics if your pc can handle it
 

Prince Vevit

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Jul 5, 2021
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Lonely, weighed down by guilt and stuck in the past? Just like me fr.
I guess I'll just wait around playing games I find on F95 while I wait for my own childhood best friend to show up..?

They will show up right?

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Yo wait, can we talk about how good this guy has it?
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CrowoftheSun

New Member
Game Developer
Oct 29, 2024
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feedback:
  • some of the renders were quite nice
    • the animation was generic
  • pacing was poor - I realize the game is meant to be a demo so this isn't particularly meaningful but you should flesh out everything a lot more in your next project. The jump to the girl sucking MC's dick was too sudden and random
    • the emotional "climax" of the girl relieving MC of his blame was not built up to
    • the characters were not developed at all
  • show rather than tell - instead of having characters blatantly stating X, imply X via their actions, expressions, and unsaid thoughts and let the audience figure out the rest. that approach is much more satisfying and feels less contrived
you clearly put effort into it and your grammar and english are decent so it's already a step above the usual :p i shall play your next game too

this is very much down to personal pref but maybe consider using DAZ or HS2 for higher quality graphics if your pc can handle it
Thank you. Constructive criticism like this really helps. I appreciate it.
 
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