I like your game. It's a good start.
One note I would like to see corrected is that there be more distinction between when the text is narration/character's thoughts and when it's speech. Sometimes the thoughts of the characters was in brackets (which does the job) but not others. I would love to see this done consistency.
Edit: I've now played it all the way through and I can see this issue is limited to the very beginning when the MC is providing narration about the other characters.
One note I would like to see corrected is that there be more distinction between when the text is narration/character's thoughts and when it's speech. Sometimes the thoughts of the characters was in brackets (which does the job) but not others. I would love to see this done consistency.
Edit: I've now played it all the way through and I can see this issue is limited to the very beginning when the MC is providing narration about the other characters.
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