@SLim_Games
As a soft reboot of sorts, I think referring to the previous version as the prologue is a little wonky. I would reconsider the exposition for that part of the story, maybe even rebuild it to fit the new version. I could understand it not being rebuilt for the new version though because people will probably want new content, but the occasional flashback or something could be used instead. The health checkup would be a good opportunity for a flashback to MC's hospital experiences if the nurse relationship is still to be used etc.
Some previous interactions could even be ditched and approached freshly. For example, I don't feel like having forced Linda to let you at her boobs is important, maybe just some exposition about finding out she has a job when the school rules forbid it would be enough since it gets you closer to her so you can manipulate her or whatever later.
We could do with at least 1 extra text character during setting a custom relationship for those that want incest lite, it's currently limited to 9 characters and Stepmother and Stepsister don't fit. (Although Stepmom and Stepsis are okay I guess.)
Default names for nameable characters would be nice. You can currently proceed without inserting any name at all. It isn't too much of a problem since you graciously gave us the option to rename those characters and reassign their relationship at any time once the free roaming section opens up, that's a nice feature.
I love the renders, but be careful with camera movement during animated sequences. They can be a little jarring, especially during a loop or boomerang video loop. I'm mainly talking about what I think was the first animation, I could be wrong, the rest had much more subtle camera movements that worked great.
I assume the voice actresses helped make their lines more fluid, but sometimes the MC's lines are kind of clunky. Certainly not as bad as many other games that were developed by people that have English as a second language, but they could do with a little polish.
I normally dislike voice acting in these kinds of games, so I'm happy that I can turn it off. However, that fairy voice is pretty damn good. I actually didn't mind the indifference of Linda's voice in school, it felt right to me. She didn't sound as annoyed as she maybe was intended to when you arrive to help late but the girls you live with having little to no emotion in their confrontation when you first return home also felt flat to me. But since the blonde did so well with the Fairy voice maybe they just need some more direction?
You could maybe voice Will yourself. I can understand that female voices would be a priority but other than the MC I feel like everyone should be voiced if you're going to have any voices. I've heard you on your YoutTube and an accent would work still I think, it seems that with the Mail girl the city is a multicultural place.
By the way, if we don't get more of that Mail girl I say we riot.
This is currently one of my favorite titles to follow the progress for so I'm excited to see where all this goes.
Enjoy your break.