[Rev @v0.3.2]
Like the art. Models are good (hair's a bit wonky, normal for 3d), animations in both sex scenes and day-to-day GUI are very nice.
Writing voice is good. The plot layout needs polish; the different girls' routes seem to gate each other in weird and unintuitive ways and clash with the sandbox-y presentation of the game over all. Don't know if it's a nod to the Patreon rules but there's a 4th-wall lecture very early on that made me gnash my teeth a bit. I couldn't tell if it was tongue-in-cheek, just there for Teh Rulez, or what but anything that can even vaguely be interpreted as preachy or kinkshaming in a porn game is doubleplus ungood. Also the prologue still existing as a separate entity needing player confirmation is jarring.
I didn't run into any porn content that squicked me, and enjoyed what I found. Some of the secret bonus pictures are very intriguing and the hints at NTR are encouraging (as an NTR fan; reader results may vary).
Lots of potential, hope ya keep up the great work.
Like the art. Models are good (hair's a bit wonky, normal for 3d), animations in both sex scenes and day-to-day GUI are very nice.
Writing voice is good. The plot layout needs polish; the different girls' routes seem to gate each other in weird and unintuitive ways and clash with the sandbox-y presentation of the game over all. Don't know if it's a nod to the Patreon rules but there's a 4th-wall lecture very early on that made me gnash my teeth a bit. I couldn't tell if it was tongue-in-cheek, just there for Teh Rulez, or what but anything that can even vaguely be interpreted as preachy or kinkshaming in a porn game is doubleplus ungood. Also the prologue still existing as a separate entity needing player confirmation is jarring.
I didn't run into any porn content that squicked me, and enjoyed what I found. Some of the secret bonus pictures are very intriguing and the hints at NTR are encouraging (as an NTR fan; reader results may vary).
Lots of potential, hope ya keep up the great work.