zegamez

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This game is great, but can MC pursue multiple routes at the same time?
It seems like many options disrupt each other
Yes, some routes disrupt each other, but some others do not. By a certain point, you can pursue multiple routes. However, dating several people simultaneously is usually a bad idea.
 

JNev

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Thanks!!! I just want MC become a slut and fuck around

too bad it is not like Beauty and the Thug where you can choose to have pubes
Some people in the game will like that slutty behavior from the MC while others will look ashamed to her if she acts like that. I don't expect the game will be big enough to match everyones taste, but I think Beauty and the Thug have potential for doing that, because it's a sandbox game with a lot of fetishes.
 
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There are some rare choices here and there, but this is a Kinetic novel.
Depending on the choices you have already made by this point, you are:
1) can filter mature content you are not interested in
2) choose if Riley is a virgin - it affects sex scenes and will lead to different endings
3) pick up your love interest(s) that will lead to different endings

Some choices let you see some H scenes, while other choices lead to another H content. So, no - it's not a kinetic novel.
 

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Depending on the choices you have already made by this point, you are:
1) can filter mature content you are not interested in
2) choose if Riley is a virgin - it affects sex scenes and will lead to different endings
3) pick up your love interest(s) that will lead to different endings

Some choices let you see some H scenes, while other choices lead to another H content. So, no - it's not a kinetic novel.
To be honest I fast-forward (enabled unseen text and hold ctrl) when I notice the lack of choices, I fast-forward until reach where you search a girl's cavity and fast-forward again (a lot) and find not a single choice, and I just quit =(
Now Beauty and the Thug it's just perfect. Visual novel, free-roaming, multiple choices, management... Please finish that game ;)
 

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To be honest I fast-forward (enabled unseen text and hold ctrl) when I notice the lack of choices, I fast-forward until reach where you search a girl's cavity and fast-forward again (a lot) and find not a single choice, and I just quit =(
Now Beauty and the Thug it's just perfect. Visual novel, free-roaming, multiple choices, management... Please finish that game ;)
Did you play version 0.5? It seems like you played v. 0.2, which has just a few choices.
 
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Did you play version 0.5? It seems like you played v. 0.2, which has just a few choices.
I played yesterday the 0.5 before finding the Beauty and the Thug thanks to the link in your signature. But I will give it another chance, well the graphics and animations are beautiful and you're a great writer.
 
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NEED HELP from Spanish-speaking players!

Could you please estimate the quality of translation:


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Hey I just played this recently and have to congratulate you on another hit. Hoping to see more of this one. I can help you with the spanish translation (I've got a native level). I believe you're using deepL, which will get the job done almost always. Next level would be to change the sentences to sound more natural in spanish but that would be for OCD levels of localisation.

Keep in mind that there are a lot of distinctions between the spanish-speaking countries so a good castilian may sound weird for people from the Americas (Mexico has the largest population of native speakers and most americans learn mexican/dominican spanish).

This is how I'd translate your examples:
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Also for dirty talk in spanish "follar" is mainly castilian but there are multiple words in south america ("coger", "chingar", "tirar(se)", "culear") so I'd say stick to "follar". A similar situation occurs with "puta"(whore) but again, the translations are correct. It'd be more of a localization thing and I wanted to give a bit of an explanation.

Cheers and hope this helps!
 
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Hey I just played this recently and have to congratulate you on another hit. Hoping to see more of this one. I can help you with the spanish translation (I've got a native level). I believe you're using deepL, which will get the job done almost always. Next level would be to change the sentences to sound more natural in spanish but that would be for OCD levels of localisation.

Keep in mind that there are a lot of distinctions between the spanish-speaking countries so a good castilian may sound weird for people from the Americas (Mexico has the largest population of native speakers and most americans learn mexican/dominican spanish).

This is how I'd translate your examples:
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Also for dirty talk in spanish "follar" is mainly castilian but there are multiple words in south america ("coger", "chingar", "tirar(se)", "culear") so I'd say stick to "follar". A similar situation occurs with "puta"(whore) but again, the translations are correct. It'd be more of a localization thing and I wanted to give a bit of an explanation.

Cheers and hope this helps!
Thank you! In fact, I translated it with ChatGPT 4o. I think it's the best option if I don't have a native speaker and is much better than any machine translation. Of course, it was quite a butthurt taking into account constant complaints about violating their policies, but I think it was worth it.
With ChatGPT, I translated the game into neutral Spanish. But Steam doesn't have an option, just "Spanish", so I checked both Spanish Spain and Latin American. I think you understand that I'd rather add one more absolutely different translation rather than both options of Spanish. In the same way, I added Simplified Chinese and not going to add Traditional Chinese.

Are you a professional translator?
 
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zegamez No I'm not. I've "translated" some text for both personal use and to help some colleagues. I asked about deepL because some of your translations where really similar to the ones deepL gave. GPT 4o seems like a good choice then, good quality. Just make sure to have the whip nearby when he becomes unruly.
 
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zegamez No I'm not. I've "translated" some text for both personal use and to help some colleagues. I asked about deepL because some of your translations where really similar to the ones deepL gave. GPT 4o seems like a good choice then, good quality. Just make sure to have the whip nearby when he becomes unruly.
That’s true. I wanted to kick it so many times! Sometimes I even wanted it to have a neck so I could strangle it ))
 

JNev

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I would like to know if people like translations or if they rather want to play in English.
 
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