Hey I just played this recently and have to congratulate you on another hit. Hoping to see more of this one. I can help you with the spanish translation (I've got a native level). I believe you're using deepL, which will get the job done almost always. Next level would be to change the sentences to sound more natural in spanish but that would be for OCD levels of localisation.
Keep in mind that there are a lot of distinctions between the spanish-speaking countries so a good castilian may sound weird for people from the Americas (Mexico has the largest population of native speakers and most americans learn mexican/dominican spanish).
This is how I'd translate your examples:
Also for dirty talk in spanish "follar" is mainly castilian but there are multiple words in south america ("coger", "chingar", "tirar(se)", "culear") so I'd say stick to "follar". A similar situation occurs with "puta"(whore) but again, the translations are correct. It'd be more of a localization thing and I wanted to give a bit of an explanation.
Cheers and hope this helps!
Thank you! In fact, I translated it with ChatGPT 4o. I think it's the best option if I don't have a native speaker and is much better than any machine translation. Of course, it was quite a butthurt taking into account constant complaints about violating their policies, but I think it was worth it.
With ChatGPT, I translated the game into neutral Spanish. But Steam doesn't have an option, just "Spanish", so I checked both Spanish Spain and Latin American. I think you understand that I'd rather add one more absolutely different translation rather than both options of Spanish. In the same way, I added Simplified Chinese and not going to add Traditional Chinese.
Are you a professional translator?