VN - Ren'Py - The Big Step [v0.7] [Partedes]

[v0.2] It got a lot of constellation ideas yet fluctuates between good ones and stupid porn logic – it isn't composed. MC's starting point is the angel trope, therefore you can stretch the corruption and create a high contrast, however, just about every character turns out to be a pervert ... so that was that.

+ funny moments, especially with Emma and how she lost her V-card
+ Vic - the pussy "collector"
+ small MMF scene, better than nothing!
+ future BBC content looks promising
+ glory hole!
+ simple corruption story without walls of boring text and unnecessary drama
+ 4 different POVs. I would say we have 4 FMCs
+ generally game is not boring. I didn't feel the urge to hit alt +f4 and move on

- cocblocking
- music appears randomly only few times during the game, also doesn't suit most of the scenes
- no gallery
- a bit disappointing teasing/seduction

Not a lof of content yet, but game has potential for amazing gangbang scenarios. Waiting for Sam and other girls to become really slutty.. 4 stars

Starts good enough but soon evolves into old, fat and ugly perverts after young girls. F95 seriously needs Ugly Bastards tag so I can avoid it. Still a good effort, nice renders, good verity of boob sizes and different types of beauty. Humor is bit over the top and gets tireing after a while. Here's hoping for less ugly pervs. I'll give it 3* for now.

Ok... It is pretty good so far. Interesting desighns. Characters are pretty hot, but not conventional. Story not super good and kinda all over the place, but it is ok. Looking to the next updates.

But to summarize
Good Character desighn.
Not super cringy humor.
A lot of Incest potential.
Okeish story.

So it is pretty good start in my book.

I liked the game so far. This time the protagonist is not naive despite being inexperienced, like in the part where she enters that old man's house and he offers her something to sleep in, but she doesn't drink. That was a very smart thing to do, especially with a stranger who offers her something. Another thing I noticed is that now the game has more choices compared to the other game, which only reinforces what I thought, that the first game that was created was just an experiment in terms of story, scene, and programming. I just hope that this time this game doesn't have many of those group scenes that the first game had, those with just one girl and several guys, since I never liked that kind of scene and besides finding it strange, I think it makes it difficult for us to enjoy the angles of the scenes better. Anyway, so far I liked what I saw and it's a game that's worth it.

[Updated for v0.6]

60% gross, 30% sexy, 10% funny

This could’ve easily been a 5-star innocent young girl sex romp.

Good points:

* If the game were more popular, the female MC could've been the source of an epic fan art thread. Rare gem as a young hottie/cutie/beauty.

* Some other females are reasonably attractive.

* Unapologetic about sex and humor. No pretense here. No boring story to justify lewd scenes. No boring tasks, no gaming.

* A soundtrack of hit songs.

Bad points:

* While it’s true that naughty-to-bad behavior can be great for adult fiction, the amount of sleaze-upon-sleaze-upon-sleaze in this game detracts from both the sexiness and the humor. It’s that over-the-top rapey + dumb + ugly + fat + grimy + homeless + bitchy + slutty + cum-covered kind of vibe.

* There’s a trashy bitch who plays this weird sort of theoretical nemesis. In reality, she’s just a girl with her own life almost completely unrelated to the protagonist.

* FMC is one of the most incoherent characters imaginable. One moment, she has all the blissful innocence and naivety of a six-year-old (which is amusing since she always has her big, beautiful melons on display.) In the next moment, she’s hyper-adult, savvy, manipulative, and super trashy, sucking off anything that comes through a glory hole. Makes absolutely no sense whatsoever. This is what prevents her from becoming the classic character she easily could’ve been.

A lot of content for v0.2.
Regarding the models, it was clear that Samantha had a stunning figure hidden beneath her sloppy clothing—and we weren't disappointed.
The girls' characters conform to the usual clichés and are reminiscent of the Heathers movie or any other college teen movie. Likewise, the male characters haven't offered any real surprises so far. So, you could say we've seen it all before. Isabelle, however, seems overdone to me. A little less skin would be more.

Personally, I'd like to see Alexandra's wardrobe reworked a bit. She doesn't have the figure for the initial crop top. The Crown shirt, on the other hand, looks absolutely convincing.

Regarding the writing, I'm holding back on grading it a bit, as my English skills are limited. However, I can follow the text without any problems.
I'm not quite finished with this version yet (beginning of the third day of school), but I'm already giving it a well-deserved 5 stars.

Edit v0.5
I'm lowering my rating from 5 to 4 stars due to an incorrect description. You'd expect a different game if you read the one sentence in the game description and the chosen tags.

• Follow Samantha's adventures at college, at work, and at home...

Two or three more tags definitely need to be added.
Multiple protagonists, as well as male dominance, and actually female dominance, if the Savannah-Rose storyline continues as it is. Well, and then it's actually forced or unavoidable, but unfortunately these tags aren't available on F95 yet.
You don't just play, you also experience scenes with other female characters, and you can't always influence the plot.

This game develops actually interesting characters alongside great visuals. On top of this, the body shapes are much more grounded with a little more diversity in size than most other VNs include, and as someone who prefers a more chubby body type in women, I'm a huge fan of this. Certainly one of the better VNs I've played so far.

corruption is the name, very nice, cant wait for next update, and the girls are really nice dont bother with the haters. real girls are not all super models like in every other game out there, keep it beliavble and just have one ask ,just make the fat long hair and a little less tummy please.

v0.1

Very good start for a product from which I expect a lot.
I know the creator for his previous work "It's not a world for Alyssa", which is one of my favorites and I recommend lovers of the genre to absolutely try it.

A good start to a corruption story. If this is anything like "It's not a world of alyssa", it'll be a slow burn as samantha and friends get corrupted. Currently there are scant sex scenes and little corrupting being done, but thats to be expected on a 0.1 release.

Previous game was a banger. I am sure this one will be the same. 1 update every month with a lot of content. Beautiful and various girls. Big anaconda. Funny Story. Vanilla intercourse to omg this is too much. This is all a game should be. 5/5

A simple, yet well done story about the sexual awakening of Samantha. The game starts on her 18th Birthday and we learn she's virgin and struggles with her looks. Unaware of the fact she's got marvelous boobs, as she wears ugly sweaters all the time.

However, when Samantha is given a new sexy uniform for the Pizza delivery she works for, the way how men percieve her changes drastically.

As the story progresses, Samantha will eventually become more like her mother. Her innocence will vanish. And the player will be in charge to enjoy her change step by step.

This is seriously being overlooked. This is the same Dev who did It's Not a World for Allysa - which was epic.

*Good renders
*Decent animation
*Variety of models, some on the petite side
*Corruption/virgins/blackmail/milfs/inzest...

In depth story discussing the meaning of life or how technology and humanity intersect? Nope. Fappable set ups with old/young/ugly/any dudes getting access to yum yums? Yep.

It is in the early stages, but you can see how this is going to unfold. If the tags appeal to you then give it a download. Based on his previous work - this won't disappoint if looking for just a few moments of relaxation...