I'll say what I said in the survey:
The bill of goods shown by the OP and what we got in the demo was drastically different.
If you wanted to have sex in the demo, and show Gry was easy, you could of easily had Gry lose the bet and have to fuck MC in the bathroom instead. Having the mascot of the game (she is shown in the intro and outtro) fuck the antagonist sets a VERY specific tone. Definitely not the "MC impregnates a town of women" tone, either. It ruins Gry for a large portion of the audience, which, as your mascot, not a smart thing.
The whole Carla situation is weird.
She kept MC as a backup for years, he's not thrilled to see her again and when MC acts less then enthused to see her she tells him, "Quit playing the martyr" Uhhh... how are we the audience suppose to feel any sort of sympathy or love for this character when you set her up as such a shitty person? If you want her to be redeemable, the dialog needs to be reworked to make her come off as less shitty and more conflicted.
Overall, you make the main character come off as someone who not only suffered a major break up, but really spinless.
He took a vow of celibacy to get over Carla. He admits, even after she's SUPER shitty to him, he still loves her and they have a "Special connection." He just seems like a complete fool when he needs to seem like an underdog you want to root for, not a spinless wimp while Paul is fucking everyone in site.
My suggestion:
Take out the sex scenes with Paul and Gry.
Rewrite the dialog for the interactions with Carla, make her more conflicted and less manipulative bitch.
If you plan to make this a "MC impregnates a town of hotties" game, take out sex scenes involving other men.
Those who will want to play that type of game, probably wont want to see other people fucking the love interests.
The models are good, and I love the idea of a MC getting to impregnate as town of stocking clad hotties.
If you course correct now, this could be fun as hell, just keep the other dicks away from the love interests.
But that's just like, my opinion, Man.