VN Ren'Py The Copycat [v0.7.0] [PiggyBackRide Productions]

[MrCrazeeMan]

I Usually don't write this amateur writing but this game really pissed me of.
I should've checked it before playing this game.
NTR games is like a moodkill and you also took of my top milf.
You made that milf miserable. You could've wrote a better writiing.
I'll never forgive this game and also the dev.
Hope your game gets success only to those cucks.

My man… this is a porn GAME not real life. It’s not that deep

 

[Vexx120]

You can't that why there are bug fixes in the final version

Lol

 

[ApocalypseSurvivor]

My man… this is a porn GAME not real life. It’s not that deep

As I told it's just MY amateur writing.
I just want to take my anger out in this game.

 

[RX-9/C]

Well hope you feel better man, wish you good luck on finding something to make you more satisfied.

 

[John Doe Jr.]

As I told it's a amateur writing.
That was just to take out my anger and that's it.

What makes the writing amateur in terms of porn games? There's a clear and defined plot. The characters for the most part are all fleshed out and you understand their motivations and fears and what they want. It's engaging where you're interested in where the plot is going, what's going to happen to all the characters, and how will they respond to things happening. Most porn games barely have any of that with just sex scene after sex scene with no characterization or plot to build the sex scenes up and make them interesting

 

[ApocalypseSurvivor]

What makes the writing amateur in terms of porn games? There's a clear and defined plot. The characters for the most part are all fleshed out and you understand their motivations and fears and what they want. It's engaging where you're interested in where the plot is going, what's going to happen to all the characters, and how will they respond to things happening. Most porn games barely have any of that with just sex scene after sex scene with no characterization or plot to build the sex scenes up and make them interesting

I wasn't talking about the game's amateur writing, it's MY amateur writing.
As of my opinion about this game, a reviewer Consistently_1nconsistent wrote perfectly about this game.

The story alone is for anyone how loves getting fucked over and wants to see women get railed by big black cock. I would be amazed if anyone can get passed the fact that the MC is competing against a gigantic cocked piece of shit who apparently is running trains on some popular blonde every weekend and raping the school principle (? can't remember sorry) who evidently enjoys it. All while flirting with the MCs mom who quite literally wants to take every dick she can find. The MC gets into some scenarios where he can get laid, but one is questionably date rape and the other is a pity fuck. Overall, the MC is a future cuck specialist waiting in the wings. I'm not a fan of these stories unless the MC does just as much fucking as the characters who try to fuck with him. This would have more promise if the piece of shit were killed in the first 30 minutes rather than having a bullshit premise around a copycat that clearly has nothing to do with the MC or the other characters. If this was a murder mystery where the MC starts to suspect his own mother, that would make for a more compelling story. Like let's say the night she went to threaten the big gorilla (not a reference to his race - he's just big and dumb) he ended up dead. That would cast doubt on the her. Having her be in places where suspiciously other killings keep taking place. Have victim be a girl the MC was recently with. Have the dumb blonde go missing after she had that three-way with big idiot and his friend. Casting some suspicion on him before he gets ganked. The current story feels like a bunch of random shit thrown together and calling it a plot. It's just:

Here's a scene where the MC gets bullied

Here's a scene where two guys practically rape a girl and she evidently loved it?

Here's a scene where the mom gets involved and hit on by the same guy who beat her son, rapes women, and she's somehow attracted to this gruff gangster attitude

Now a scene where for no reason the MC's mom is holding a knife in a panic

Oh the mom talked to the principle about her son's bully and instead of actually doing something about it, the principle willingly gets raped.

And the "plot" just gets more and more convoluted with no actual premise. In the end this story does nothing for me. The sex is just there and if that's the only reason to go through this nonsense I'll go to the dozens of other VNs that do it better. This just isn't my cup of tea. Hope everyone else who enjoys this gets something out of it and I wish the Dev all the luck in the world getting support.

 

[crisbr]

I usually don't write this amateur writing but this game really pissed me of.
I should've checked it before playing this game.
NTR games are moodkill and you also took one of my top MILF.
You made that MILF miserable & destroyed. You could've wrote a better writing.
I'll never forgive this game and also the dev.
Hope your game gets success only to those cucks.

This is a porn game, if you like it, play it, if not, don't play it, the problem is that some people can't differentiate between things, if you don't like it, it has to be destroyed and fought, man, I don't like it, move on, fuck, they just want to live a lie that he is the MC and catch everyone perfect harem the mother sister even the daughter and that's what people like you like and you come and talk shit here go and catch your little sister in these games first mature the world is not made around you and your tastes

 

[crisbr]

What makes the writing amateur in terms of porn games? There's a clear and defined plot. The characters for the most part are all fleshed out and you understand their motivations and fears and what they want. It's engaging where you're interested in where the plot is going, what's going to happen to all the characters, and how will they respond to things happening. Most porn games barely have any of that with just sex scene after sex scene with no characterization or plot to build the sex scenes up and make them interesting

you said it all congratulations on the wise words I completely agree with you

 

[Sahady]

I usually don't write this amateur writing but this game really pissed me of.
I should've checked it before playing this game.
NTR games are moodkill and you also took one of my top MILF.
You made that MILF miserable & destroyed. You could've wrote a better writing.
I'll never forgive this game and also the dev.
Hope your game gets success only to those cucks.

Go cry somewhere else, if this is not your genre of games, why come and write about it

 

[Sahady]

Game is top, i’m usually not a fan of family NTR, but this game hooked me, i’m waiting for the next updates, it would be interesting if in one of the path the MC starts to like the fact that Jamal fucked his mother

 

[Mammal186]

The scene in the van is the hottest I’ve ever seen in one of these games. The look in Gags eyes is fucking incredible

 

[crisbr]

The scene in the van is the hottest I’ve ever seen in one of these games. The look in Gags eyes is fucking incredible

True I love that scene too

 

[John Doe Jr.]

The game is top, i’m usually not a fan of family NTR, but this game hooked me, i’m waiting for the next updates, it would be interesting if in one of the path the MC starts to like the fact that Jamal fucked his mother

That's a route I'm curious to see if it'll be implemented. I feel like there's hints of the setup. Otherwise why would there be an option to watch the videos or not and if I remember right there's one scene where MC is watching the mom video, though he doesn't know it's her, and starts jerking off fantasizing about it being her

 

[Sahady]

Oh no, another cuck got triggered.
Jokes aside, as I said I should've read that disclaimer.
Man, cucks sure do protect their cuck games lol.

It seems to me that you have problems, that you come here and cry like a little offended girl, contact a psychologist, only he will be interested in your whining

 

[ApocalypseSurvivor]

It seems to me that you have problems, that you come here and cry like a little offended girl, contact a psychologist, only he will be interested in your whining

hahahah damm boy
Your savage af

 

[Blurpee69]

Leave him alone guys, ApocalypseSurvivor is clearly trying to trigger you all, and he's been successful so far . Either block or don't engage.

 

[ApocalypseSurvivor]

Leave him alone guys, ApocalypseSurvivor is clearly trying to trigger you all, and he's been successful so far . Either block or don't engage.

Don't block me, I'm a very good negotiator. I can engage.
This is a very good game. That MILF is top-tier. I hope it gets a huge success.

 

[Mammal186]

ok small plot concern about next update. i think gangbang is rushed . id love to see GG go out to find a bbc all on her own to make Jamal jealous and deeper her corruption, oh and how about a threesome with a dp before a whole gang?

 

[Blurpee69]

ok small plot concern about next update. i think gangbang is rushed . id love to see GG go out to find a bbc all on her own to make Jamal jealous and deeper her corruption, oh and how about a threesome with a dp before a whole gang?

I mean, and this is my opinion, I think the whole drawing a gun on Jamal no matter what kind of ruins her corruption to a large degree. GG was very much falling in love with Jamal and deeper into the gangbanger lifestyle. What was already dubious consent at best, with mild degredation, is now certainly full on rape and much more extreme degredation.

The BBC gangbang could have happened with the prior themes of GG not particularly wanting to go through with it, but not really putting up strong opposition either. Pulling the gun on Jamal elminates any such notion that she might have been a willing participant. The gun recontextualizes every one of her decisions moving forward into one of complete reluctance rather than semi-relectance. There either should have been a third option to confront Jamal without the gun, or have a choice just before to pull the gun out from hiding or not.

Even better, have a choice later on if GG leaves the gun hidden to shoot Jamal's friend that's trying to kill him to cement her corruption.

 

[Ueywuwudu]

I mean, and this is my opinion, I think the whole drawing a gun on Jamal no matter what kind of ruins her corruption to a large degree. GG was very much falling in love with Jamal and deeper into the gangbanger lifestyle. What was already dubious consent at best, with mild degredation, is now certainly full on rape and much more extreme degredation.

The BBC gangbang could have happened with the prior themes of GG not particularly wanting to go through with it, but not really putting up strong opposition either. Pulling the gun on Jamal elminates any such notion that she might have been a willing participant. The gun recontextualizes every one of her decisions moving forward into one of complete reluctance rather than semi-relectance. There either should have been a third option to confront Jamal without the gun, or have a choice just before to pull the gun out from hiding or not.

Even better, have a choice later on if GG leaves the gun hidden to shoot Jamal's friend that's trying to kill him to cement her corruption.

While I agree, I wish we had the option not to pull the gun out it feels like the fact that GG could not shoot him, made it officially clear for both of them that she has clearly fallen for jamal.