VN Ren'Py The fall of Themyscira [v0.1] [_dit]

[_dit]

Also, you might to do more to advertise the other non-amazonian characters. I wasn't expecting Disney Princesses, among others.

I thought it would be a fun surprise, but maybe I should include a few screenshots?
Edit: Ive added a three more screenshots.

 

[Mark17]

There is a lot of WW characters and non-DC/WW characters too. But honestly I recommend you, just use WW characters or even just DC characters. Or use your own OC for this universe, but I'm gonna let you cook in this one. Bc this looks good.

 

[Romenjack]

I'll admit I was giving this a side eye when I first saw it. But as someone who also got so fed up with SU that I decided to make my own game, I certainly understand the sentiment. But this still seemed a little blatant.

That being said, the shade being throne alone makes this game a 10/10. You do have your tongue planted firmly in your cheek so it's hard to criticize anything too much.

One thing I can criticize though is using the Greek font for everything. Using it for the menu fine, names fine, regular dialogue though makes it really hard to read.

 

[xMendoza]

Congratulations on your first release, I wish you the best of luck with your project.

 

[_dit]

Congratulations on your first release, I wish you the best of luck with your project.

Thanks man! I couldn't have done it without you! I wish you the best of luck with your project as well!

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

One thing I can criticize though is using the Greek font for everything. Using it for the menu fine, names fine, regular dialogue though makes it really hard to read.

Ill look into if its possible to have alternative fonts, like a menu where you can customize it to your own preference. I personally like it for my immersion and I dont have trouble reading it, then again I already know what it says so I understand if it might be annoying.

All you have to do is hit Shift-A and change to DejaVu Sans.



I'm enjoying the game.
I'm a proofreader. Contact me; I can help.
https://f95zone.to/threads/experienced-proofreader-i-can-help-you-with-your-game.155643/

 

[doccop63]

I understand! The game is in its early stages but it has a decent amount of content. It has over 120 images (excluding background shots and sprites), a few sexscenes for mc and also a few lesbian scenes between other amazons. The 'intro cinematic' has over 45 images and there are also a few 'secrets' scattered around the island, including 4 'waterfall' scenes (waterfall location is in the bottom left). I'd estimate 2-3 hours of play depending on how fast you read. Oh, and it also has music which you can turn off if you dont like.

Thanks for the info. I'm going to dl now.

 

[elmicho]

"Great Hera!"
awesome art, good luck Dev

 

[werewolfking65]

Like I ain’t gonna snitch, but come on brother

 

[That other person]

This artstyle... I've-- hmm... I've seen it. Damn I can't remember the name though... Whatever, I'm sure someone here will eventually point it out. I know it's AI but... amazon women though.

 

[LewdStrix]

I understand! The game is in its early stages but it has a decent amount of content. It has over 120 images (excluding background shots and sprites), a few sexscenes for mc and also a few lesbian scenes between other amazons. The 'intro cinematic' has over 45 images and there are also a few 'secrets' scattered around the island, including 4 'waterfall' scenes (waterfall location is in the bottom left). I'd estimate 2-3 hours of play depending on how fast you read. Oh, and it also has music which you can turn off if you dont like.

That's pretty incredible for an initial release. I'm definitely looking forward to this game's future!

 

[johnydep123]

Is there going to be a MAC version of this game look promising.

 

[Mylinn]

NGL this game's version's of Luthor looks like a twink.

 

[labbu]

is it possible to play as an small dick mc

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[_dit]

Is there going to be a MAC version of this game look promising.

Ill upload a Mac-version later today!

 

[_dit]

is it possible to play as an small dick mc

Sorry there are no such plans

 

[alceste007]

The art looks really good so far. I am interested in seeing how this one develops.

 

[Look-see]

seems weird to add characters from other franchises to this game instead of just making original characters. something about seeing the girl from goblin slayer drains my interest in this game. i dont know seems lazy to me.

also asking because of the map. is this gonna be sandbox?

 

[_dit]

seems weird to add characters from other franchises to this game instead of just making original characters. something about seeing the girl from goblin slayer drains my interest in this game. i dont know seems lazy to me.

also asking because of the map. is this gonna be sandbox?

I understand that. Its not the character from goblin slayer. I wanted a blonde and blindfolded character for the Oracle. The Oracle is written as her own character and I already have a nice story arc planned for her.

Im not 100% sure on the definitions but I want the player to be able to explore the island and progress the story as they want. There will be a main story and optional sidestories. The focus will be on the plot.