Fuck me, that is one excellent prologue. I can't justify rating something, at this stage, but I very much hope to see more of this VN. Genuinely impressive.
Can someone please tell me who posted the OP? It must be someone I Ignored at some point because I don't see the OP at all, but I can't unIgnore without knowing the poster's username. Thanks. 
This hops in my watclist hope this only gets better. The summary seems promising.
THX
THX
lerd0Can someone please tell me who posted the OP? It must be someone I Ignored at some point because I don't see the OP at all, but I can't unIgnore without knowing the poster's username. Thanks.
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Uuuuuhmmmm... This is pretty fekking dope!
Introduction that makes sense..
Leaves enough questions unanswered, ready to get untangled.
Strong start! - But this can easily backfire. (give too much at start, and too little later)
Story's "stage" is set, and given an idea to the viewer.
Hopefully it won't run off the rails going too fast onwards..
I honestly hope this one will focus on the "power story" instead of the "adult" one.
(Obviously, don't wait 15 years before first tit plops on screen)
I can't wait to see more!
Good luck to the developer!
Also.. Happy New Year!
Introduction that makes sense..
Leaves enough questions unanswered, ready to get untangled.
Strong start! - But this can easily backfire. (give too much at start, and too little later)
Story's "stage" is set, and given an idea to the viewer.
Hopefully it won't run off the rails going too fast onwards..
I honestly hope this one will focus on the "power story" instead of the "adult" one.
(Obviously, don't wait 15 years before first tit plops on screen)
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I can't wait to see more!
Good luck to the developer!
Also.. Happy New Year!