found some missing image errors.
I assume they are all 3 related to the ponytail.
Another minor thing I had is during a school event Dani mentioned how after she fell asleep in a bush she got raped. Ana recommends she should take a test which is kinda nonsensical considering she was already pregnant at the time.
another thing is during the scene with Simon and it was raining so they moved to the pub storeroom however during some of the dialogue they still mention being in the alley.
during the first day at school, the teacher still says that Fridays is swim class.
General feedback wise I mostly like the update with lots of great additions

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however, I few things that I find suboptimal like no direct connection between the changing room and the outdoor field. and the removal or movement of some of the character customisation options like the more exotic hair colours and heart-shaped nipples.
also at the beginning of the game Sammy and Emily visit the mall despite its removal. and when can you buy new clothes? I tried wandering the market but got no options.
what was used to make the characters
if I remember correctly they were first rendered in Koikatsu and then painted over by hand.