randombanana
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That soldier boy character makes no sense at all wth. I get that he might not know a lot about sex but the guy acts like a cavemen hes that stupid.
introvtx
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fr fr. I was actually impressed with the first release as a whole, except for Luca as a character. I hate Julian BECAUSE his role make sense but not Luca, and it seems my dislike for him is justified especially after that CPR line. If I can voice my thoughts, my first reaction for every scene after the first release was mostly 'huh?', 'wait what?', 'WHAT JUST HAPPENED?!'Slow pace or not, the progression of the game it's so weird. The robotic guy is accused by the daughter of being a peeping creep, the milf want to teach him how to approach women to avoid this, and the best she can pull is "touching is important"
I get that you want to portrait the soldier boy as a completely naïf man in terms of sexuality, but he thinking that when two women are kissing, they're doing CPR. Come on! Even a kid know what a kiss is. Furthermore we have of course the inevitable mature women acting like teenager girls.
And then the characters thinking like idiots. The blonde being kidnapped at the bar but still working at it after being rescued. A male job opportunity opens up at the bar? What a great idea to suggest to the rescuer, whom humiliated the manager (an apparently important guy), to apply. Sure! He was wearing a tiny face mask while half naked so no one will identify him. No problem.
IHATESlowburnBluBallgames
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He wasn’t raised around girls or women, from all boy schools to military life, he lives with them cause he saved the husbands life, so ghe husband knows he can trust him to protect his family while he’s out.
You’ve never seen a shy guy before that gets awkward and nervous around girls or women?
The CPR line is representative of the incoherent progression of the game. When he sees the 2 girls kissing, he thinks: "oh, doing CPR, bla bla bla...."; then the milf explain to him they are kissing, he gets this, but some time later he goes back to the CPR thing.
One thing is to be awkward with women. In this case it's a guy that either lived all his life inside a tupperware or he's not a human being at all. 21th century, even in the military you can access to some porn and be aware of what two girls kissing is about. I will say is even instinctive.
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This update was kind of a let down; I don't know why developers destroy their own good ideas all the time.
The "bad boy" Julian was appealing in the first update because he had this brazen, unhinged "The world is mine" attitude, a youthful overconfidence that could have been the foundation of an interesting relationship / story line. And in the first parts of this new update, he did quite well with his threats and demeanor. But then came the White Knight and, as usual, ruined everything: the boring gentleman mafiosi who is all about respect blabla. Even soldier boy came and defended Julian (two deus ex machinae in one scene). And now bad boy has to treat the women with respect, has to defend them, make sure nothing happens, begins to get emotional and pushes some mother instinct buttons in MC- we already have such a character with soldier boy, and people like me, who liked Julian, did so because he was exactly not like that.
It would have been nice to see the story develop between two characters who represent protection vs. danger, care vs. selfishness and shyness vs. overconfidence. But alas, now we have the same dynamic twice, what a shame.
The "bad boy" Julian was appealing in the first update because he had this brazen, unhinged "The world is mine" attitude, a youthful overconfidence that could have been the foundation of an interesting relationship / story line. And in the first parts of this new update, he did quite well with his threats and demeanor. But then came the White Knight and, as usual, ruined everything: the boring gentleman mafiosi who is all about respect blabla. Even soldier boy came and defended Julian (two deus ex machinae in one scene). And now bad boy has to treat the women with respect, has to defend them, make sure nothing happens, begins to get emotional and pushes some mother instinct buttons in MC- we already have such a character with soldier boy, and people like me, who liked Julian, did so because he was exactly not like that.
It would have been nice to see the story develop between two characters who represent protection vs. danger, care vs. selfishness and shyness vs. overconfidence. But alas, now we have the same dynamic twice, what a shame.
Maybe you're lucky enough and depending on your choices, if you let the father kick his son ass without reacting, it will increase "bad boy" resentfulness and will want a revenge with the milf, daughter and father. Seeing that the robotic soldier is part of the family, he will be a target as well, even if he defended him. I'm being too optimistic seeing where the story is heading, though.
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I really like the game so far. Yeah, the CPR thing was a bit cringe, but that can be improved.
I worked on the script a bit to clean up the grammar. Feel free to use it, and let me know what you think.
Right-click the file, click "Save Link As," and then click "Save" in the Downloads window. Then put that file into the "game" folder. Overwrite when asked.
I worked on the script a bit to clean up the grammar. Feel free to use it, and let me know what you think.
Right-click the file, click "Save Link As," and then click "Save" in the Downloads window. Then put that file into the "game" folder. Overwrite when asked.
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Not every VN can have AAA writers. Sometime we forget that this is a pirate site for porn games, Let the dev cook and somtimes a little porn logic is ok! I bet the next update is gunna be great!
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damn she looks hot in that bikini, hope he gets to oil her up
Visuals look nice, atm not enough lewd for me but if its the kind with good pay off in the end , could be interesting, only future will tell
If oral sex is the pinnacle of lewd however count me out sadly.
If oral sex is the pinnacle of lewd however count me out sadly.
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It should have male protagonist tag too, cause you do make some choices for Luka as well as the wife
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It's odd, she doesn't even have to stay overnight. She lives nearby and can go home every evening.
...and certainly not sharing a room with Luca – more than strange! As if the dev couldn't come up with a better story.
For example, MC's or Marco's sister would have been better here: she lives in another city and urgently needs a job.
IHATESlowburnBluBallgames
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Porn logic, have a feeling Greg and wife are in open relationship or are swingers, so Greg is ok with wife out of the house now he can try to find some more pussy, he’s already got Mrs Moreno modeling for him too
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Won't let me download your walkthrough says it is a virus, any idea what could be causing the flag?
Won't let me download your walkthrough says it is a virus, any idea what could be causing the flag?
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