Joshy92

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Alright, I'll try to be more constructive.

It seems to me that the author didn't have a clear idea of the story from the beginning and is improvising a bit. My advice is to write all the narrative archs before developing the AVN.

There are also several problems with how the adult scenes are built.

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There are too many characters that interfere with the stories of potential LIs. You don't see a character for half an hour then suddenly you meet them again and the relationship move ahead so quickly that you tell yourself "wow, that's a quick progression!".

Also, I like the casual sex but it lacks pathos and eroticism.
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Man I know it's casual but this is just shallow.

My advice to improve a litte: try to focus on the most important characters, describe their feelings, write some dialogues with the MC where we can get an insight of what are they feeling.
In my opinion, the story isn't a progression of things the MC must do but a narration of how the relationships are built and progress then you build the story around this.

I hope this gives the developer some things to think about because I like this project and I don't want to see it descend into mediocrity. It's a 4 star rating on here which is already below the good quality treshold, let's hope it doesn't go below 4 stars.
I really hope that sex scene isn't forced.
 

SonsOfLiberty

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are you compressed for ep 5? i don't find any compressed for this game from search feature (i setting with Relevance).
Don't search by relevance, search by "most recent". Go to your profile settings, then set your search settings to most recent.

Searching with version/chapter number will bring it up easier. Example, compressed 5, compressed ep. 5
 

Donnie Brasco

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In quite unusual way I discovered this game, and at the moment I enjoy playing it. All praises to the author. Just amazing. But there is one tiny thing which crossed my mind. Can tell for sure, but MC knows Helen from before so I guess he should know her last name. And he has meeting with Mr. Grey about job. Those last name must across his mind and make him wonder. It's tiny detail and let's say irrelevant. No big deal.
 

Bad Wolf

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In quite unusual way I discovered this game, and at the moment I enjoy playing it. All praises to the author. Just amazing. But there is one tiny thing which crossed my mind. Can tell for sure, but MC knows Helen from before so I guess he should know her last name. And he has meeting with Mr. Grey about job. Those last name must across his mind and make him wonder. It's tiny detail and let's say irrelevant. No big deal.
It's clear you haven't gotten very far into the game. We know about it at the very start.
 

ItsNotUs

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Forgive me if this has already been asked, but i just started playing and went through the first act at the end of which Helen, comes into the office where you are interviewing Mr. Grey and then the flashback with a sex scene. Can i somehow slow down this flashback, so that i can control thit mouse myself by clicking processes, or is it designed so that everything flashes too quickly before the player’s eyes?
 

Donnie Brasco

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That she's the daughter of Mr. Grey.
I know that she is the daughter of Mr. Grey. It's about the fact that MC (me along with him) found out that Helen was the daughter of his future employer only when he came for a job interview. It's about the fact that MC, and not only him, know Helen from before, so it can be assumed that MC also knows Helen's last name. In the very introduction of the game we know that he has a job interview with Mr. Grey. So if he knows Helena's last name, it didn't occur to him to maybe connect the last names. There are certainly a lot of people with that last name, and it doesn't have to mean anything, but it's enough to intrigue you.
 

Bad Wolf

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I know that she is the daughter of Mr. Grey. It's about the fact that MC (me along with him) found out that Helen was the daughter of his future employer only when he came for a job interview. It's about the fact that MC, and not only him, know Helen from before, so it can be assumed that MC also knows Helen's last name. In the very introduction of the game we know that he has a job interview with Mr. Grey. So if he knows Helena's last name, it didn't occur to him to maybe connect the last names. There are certainly a lot of people with that last name, and it doesn't have to mean anything, but it's enough to intrigue you.
He already knew. It wasn't a surprise to him. As you can clearly see by his words to her.
 

Donnie Brasco

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He already knew. It wasn't a surprise to him. As you can clearly see by his words to her.
After the job interview later that evening he had a phone call from Kelly. It turns out that they both know her from college. See, he asks her if she knows Helen, and then tells her that she is the boss's daughter. From what I understand so far, Kelly is his best friend. If he knew, I think he would have hinted. But never mind.
I really like the game and that's all that matters, at least to me.
 
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Bad Wolf

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After the job interview later that evening he had a phone call from Kelly. It turns out that they both know her from college. See, he asks her if she knows Helen, and then tells her that she is the boss's daughter. From what I understand so far, Kelly is his best friend. If he knew, I think he would have hinted. But never mind.
I really like the game and that's all that matters, at least to me.
There's Kelly, Lily and the MC. They were best friends in college. He asked her if she remembered Helen. Helen was bad for him or maybe they were bad for each other in college the way I understood all of this.

Anyway, as you said, I also really like the game and it's good to hear other people's thoughts on how they understand the game and maybe compare notes.
 

rannmiumec

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Forgive me if this has already been asked, but i just started playing and went through the first act at the end of which Helen, comes into the office where you are interviewing Mr. Grey and then the flashback with a sex scene. Can i somehow slow down this flashback, so that i can control thit mouse myself by clicking processes, or is it designed so that everything flashes too quickly before the player’s eyes?
It's a cinematic, so no, you can't make it slower. You can replay it from the extras sections as many times as you want it though.

Does anyone know when chapter five will release on steam?
According to the dev, whenever translations are ready.
 
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