Just had a go of this and I really enjoyed it. Well written and I really felt I wanted more so kudos. To be fair I expected it to be short for a 0.1 version but its a decent length for what it is. Deffo keeping an eye on this one 
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I really enjoyed this one. The story is not complex but still hooked me, mostly because of the characters who are really well built with personnalities (that you can even shift a little through dialogues) and the art is very nice.
Some grammar mistakes and typos here and there, I'm not a native speaker so I can't really complain but a proofreader would be appreciated (your/you're being a regular in this game and it's HUGE how it can cringe people out of the immersion)
Will keep an eye on the development
Some grammar mistakes and typos here and there, I'm not a native speaker so I can't really complain but a proofreader would be appreciated (your/you're being a regular in this game and it's HUGE how it can cringe people out of the immersion)
Will keep an eye on the development
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I was pleasantly surprised by this game. Glad to see there's no stat grind or anything annoying, and all the girls are great so far.
Simple concept, fun play. Sandbox wasn’t atrocious, nice models. Nothing revolutionary with story but at least it’s done right and put together well. Guy doesn’t seem to understand the difference between your and you’re but we’ll get there.
So it's like this game and Heritage that I feel are too vulnerable to burnout that need support the most. And thankfully, it's the kind of work that's made with care and a clear understanding of the material.
Holy shit that was a solid first release.
Some extremely minor grammar/spelling errors. (Your/you're, draw/drawer)
Pretty sure the characters are supposed to be half siblings, Sophie/Grace share mother with MC, while Beth/MC share a father.
Also yea, where tf did the Mom go after the prologue lmao. She's there for a phone call and that's it.
Game says slow burn but has a full H scene in the first release. Seen games go 6 years without having that.
It's free roam, not sandbox. The anti-sandbox brigade will riot if you keep that tag. Game might also ruffle the feathers of the harem purists. Seems there's at least one character you can share LI's with (Sophie). Some consider lesbianism between harem members cheating/ntr and that's a whole other can of worms you don't want to open. These might all be optional, but just having the option puts people up in arms about their self insert character's importance.
Clean up the grammar/spelling, figure out where the mom ran off to, maybe make the characters relation to each other a little less up in the air and get a better banner picture, because damn this game deserves it. Solid AF.
Some extremely minor grammar/spelling errors. (Your/you're, draw/drawer)
Pretty sure the characters are supposed to be half siblings, Sophie/Grace share mother with MC, while Beth/MC share a father.
Also yea, where tf did the Mom go after the prologue lmao. She's there for a phone call and that's it.
Game says slow burn but has a full H scene in the first release. Seen games go 6 years without having that.
It's free roam, not sandbox. The anti-sandbox brigade will riot if you keep that tag. Game might also ruffle the feathers of the harem purists. Seems there's at least one character you can share LI's with (Sophie). Some consider lesbianism between harem members cheating/ntr and that's a whole other can of worms you don't want to open. These might all be optional, but just having the option puts people up in arms about their self insert character's importance.
Clean up the grammar/spelling, figure out where the mom ran off to, maybe make the characters relation to each other a little less up in the air and get a better banner picture, because damn this game deserves it. Solid AF.
Good first release, I liked it well enough to go and find all of the gallery rewards. If you are missing any make sure to do a run where you don't share with Sophie and one where you do / letting Sophie date Lilith, choose both dream sequences so the one with Beth/Bo and the one of Sophie.
The hardest one to find imo was number 3, during the first house free roam, you need to go straight to Sophie's room without cleaning anything up.
Edit: I still got Sophie's route on both runs but on the first run, I told her; I wanted Bo to myself and to not date Lilith.
The hardest one to find imo was number 3, during the first house free roam, you need to go straight to Sophie's room without cleaning anything up.
Edit: I still got Sophie's route on both runs but on the first run, I told her; I wanted Bo to myself and to not date Lilith.
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longjohngold
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Really solid for a first release. Decent length and does a good job setting things up. Kind of a shame that Lilith, the self proclaimed lesbian, is by far my favourite. But I'm seeing clear signs she might come around so that's promising. Sophie is a decent consolation prize, comes with that incest goodness, and I think it'll be fun sharing girls with her as things develop. I guess third place would be the token blonde, even if she's not really dainty.
Might be worth adding a replay gallery sooner rather than later, so folks don't have to go back through re-unlocking scenes and stuff. It's always nice to have one of them, also help you notice if you've missed stuff.
There's gotta be some way to run it through a spell checker, and it'd be worth it as there's tons of minor spelling/typing errors... stuff like cusions, seperate, unfotunate, suprising, inapropriate, intersted, tomrrow, dispaly, interupted, improtance, absoloutley, etc.
But yeah, I'd definitely look forward to playing some more of this in the future.
Might be worth adding a replay gallery sooner rather than later, so folks don't have to go back through re-unlocking scenes and stuff. It's always nice to have one of them, also help you notice if you've missed stuff.
There's gotta be some way to run it through a spell checker, and it'd be worth it as there's tons of minor spelling/typing errors... stuff like cusions, seperate, unfotunate, suprising, inapropriate, intersted, tomrrow, dispaly, interupted, improtance, absoloutley, etc.
But yeah, I'd definitely look forward to playing some more of this in the future.
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Typos:
playfull - playful
you're - your
you're - your
strees - stress
unfotunate - unfortunate
intersted - interested
tomrrow - tomorrow
your = possessive (yours, ours)
you're = you are
Code error: Twist game - if MC kisses Bo, the kissing sound never has a STOP tag. It continues playing nonstop.
playfull - playful
you're - your
you're - your
strees - stress
unfotunate - unfortunate
intersted - interested
tomrrow - tomorrow
your = possessive (yours, ours)
you're = you are
Code error: Twist game - if MC kisses Bo, the kissing sound never has a STOP tag. It continues playing nonstop.
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Vortex@
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New update patch the vn is even better now. Lesbian path is even more separated. Good job dev. And for those commenting on relationships, Beth shares the variable with grace and sophie. If you make them sisters, beth will be sister, etc. If you make them cousin's then beth will be called cousin, but then you'd have to make your dad her uncle because mc will call her cousin
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Dessolos
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how is it changed. I never saw an issue with it before since it did seem easy to avoid if I recall by saying no.
Vortex@
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A lot of people were complaining about all the lesbian conversations even if you chose no lesbian. Now we get asked at the beginning if we want lesbian, and the dev has done a awesome job at separating the paths. Now if you choose no, not 1 lesbian comment or backstory is mentioned
Dessolos
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ah yeah that was kind of annoying it felt like the sister was gonna steal any girl you aren't going after lol I didn't mind but I can see that.
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