No offense intended, but you would think that if you were going to release a translation this awful that you would just not do it at all. You may as well play it in the original language, because as it is currently you can still barely comprehend anything. If it was at least translated so that sentences made more logical sense I could at least be satisfied that there was something worthwhile here, as from just getting off to the scenes.
Also, yeah, why break the game? I have no idea what the book does, because every time you touch it the game hard freezes and you have to alt+f4 or close it via task manager.