Version reviewed: 0.5.6
Mods used: 'Grammar Fix' by Fattrapper
Overall Impression: I'm sorry, I don't do impressions... my training is in psychiatry. No, really. Play this game. Now.
Art: Sets are well done without being over-done. Or under-done. Or over-under. OK, I'll stop now.
The models: They fit their story. That might sound strange or contrived, but the MC is better than a lot that I have seen. He is packing serious heat, but at least he doesn't look like he was cross-bred with a horse.
-Alice is bordering on FBI-involvement territory, but it fits her backstory.
-As a MILF-lover Maria is a personal favorite, but I could never see myself turning down any girl from this game...except Alice...maybe. Excuse me while I look for any unmarked vans parked outside...
Story: I love a good story, and this is a great one. When I play a VN like this, I write a diary-type summary (from the MC's point of view) in a Notepad file. It helps me keep characters, story, and plot points straight. And that helped me a lot here.
-I will try to play this again without the mod to see why it was needed in the first place. There were occasional missing words, and places where changing a few words around would have made a sentence much more clear. However given the sheer volume of exposition and dialogue in this story it was bound to happen.
Save often in this game, especially when given a choice. (good advice in any VN)
Humble suggestions(i.e. things I'm arrogant enough to think I could do better):
1) Have a way to show the love/fetish points each character has. (in the upper corner of the screen or maybe show them at the end of each chapter)
2) I almost want to say better/different sex scenes, but that would mean a major overhaul or much bigger downloads. These scenes are already better than most I have seen.