- Thread starter Crazygamer43
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- Jun 28, 2018
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If he wanted "slow burn"/open relationships ( with male MC), there were better ways to handle it. The game now kind of falls into some kind of awkward middle of "not really full blown NTR", and "not really romance ( or Harem) VN".I think the idea of the dev is to do a slow burn with the MC's relationships (Ellie doesn't mind the kisses anymore, Lucy obviously is attracted to him but struggles with that, and the only reason Rose hasn't jumped his bones already is Lucy's lie) and use Lucy to keep the players happy with sex scenes in the meantime. Works for me, but not for those with that weird only-the-MC-should-have-sex hang-up
Story would be better off if starting with MC/Ellie living with their grandmother together. Then she passes away, leaves artifact to him, then Mallory and soon after Lucy ( also a stranger to MC at the time) are introduced. With Lucy, she would be instantly attracted to MC and jump to sex ( along with others, given her nature), then possibly later romance route ( with Ellie reverse).
And it would be better off without all the "internal thoughts"/monologue: this is probably the worst example of "Tell, don't show", and removes any subtlety/natural relationship development.
- Jan 9, 2021
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As it now the male protagonist's relations get burned quickly, either with or without sex....I think the idea of the dev is to do a slow burn with the MC's relationships (Ellie doesn't mind the kisses anymore, Lucy obviously is attracted to him but struggles with that, and the only reason Rose hasn't jumped his bones already is Lucy's lie) and use Lucy to keep the players happy with sex scenes in the meantime. Works for me, but not for those with that weird only-the-MC-should-have-sex hang-up
The main problem in the story is Lucy acts out of character, we have Lucy, part fairy, Rose, full fairy, Mallory, big shot magician, that all perform magic fuelled by sex, the fairy girls can only travel the worlds that way but Mallory can travel without but even then she is still dependent on it...
For the MC and his sisters the magic world is unknown or didn't even exist so there will be a clash of values, the magic world is like the peak of the sexual revolution during the sixties and MC and his sister are like they get thrown into the woodstock festival straight from their small strict christian values community with not even tv to have some impressions of flowerpower....
At the start of the story it's evident Lucy has a somewhat hidden agenda, she can't be telling about the magic world to MC, but after he gets the stone it's clear he has a part to play in this magic realm and there no longer is a reason to keep him from that information, it is even more important then ever to get MC adjusted to this new world as fast as possible....
Sure her personal struggle considering her feelings for MC will still be there but for her sex is just a basic need to perform magic so why would she even think it's a problem he has sex with another or even decide to sabotage his relations with other characters? I can accept there's a reason she doesn't take the step to have sex with MC despite she is attracted and has some feelings for him but it makes no sense telling Rose that lie, it just contradicts her whole being part fairy way of life...
It would make perfect sense for a fairy to help MC and his sisters accept their way of life in the magic realm, it would make sense there is a slowburn in some relations since MC and his sisters need time to adjust, to embrace the new world and give their values from their known world time to evolve or be freed from...
Clearly some taboo's would justify this slowburn and the fairies may need to do some convincing there but the more acceptable relations can evolve faster since hey, no matter if that guy is from a strict christian small community, he's still raging hormones and he gets alot impressions to help him there....
Lucy's struggles also justify a slowburn in her relation with MC, it would make perfect sense sex between them can be very late in the story without any trouble, but there should be enough good non-sexual interactions between them to pull it off that long and just acting like an antagonist would hurt that relation more then it will give reasons to want it afterall they are friends, they are attracted to eachother, there's some feelings, work with that, even with the internal struggles of Lucy that really shouldn't be a problem....
Reducing comments to this game to wether people want only MC to have sex does not do justice to serious people taking time to comment here, same as just blatantly bashing the dev is a no go...
Facepalm if you just want to bash but have no serious intention to give a meaningfull opinion
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There's a blue furry character in it, Rose has sex with him in part 2 of the story...
For furry fans it may be a bit disappointing if you expected mainly furries but it's there and it's not even gay furry
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Ok, this piece of Work is not good.
You can't immerse yourself with the Ladies too. Because a lot of them are unlikable. We don't talk about that they have Sex lives too. NO! They are sluts in a slut world.
At least you gave out a warning. But this is IMO nothing more as a Test run to check the Sea level.
Dear dev, maybe you should ask you the question. Why should people play my game instead of watching porn. The answer right now is there is no reason.
Do what you want, but I doubt that this will work out.
- You have choices to watch a sex scene or not, but I can't remember a meaningful choice. This is a Picture Story not a game.
- You have an MC which you play in First Person. But you play other Characters, too. In third Person. Which is a break in the artistic style of this picture story.
- You're trying to tickle as many niches as possible. Lesbians, Futas Furrys. Boring and in no way arousing. Your story tries to be a "Jack of all trades", but it is a "Master of None".
You can't immerse yourself with the Ladies too. Because a lot of them are unlikable. We don't talk about that they have Sex lives too. NO! They are sluts in a slut world.
At least you gave out a warning. But this is IMO nothing more as a Test run to check the Sea level.
Dear dev, maybe you should ask you the question. Why should people play my game instead of watching porn. The answer right now is there is no reason.
Do what you want, but I doubt that this will work out.
- Apr 25, 2018
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What's more irritating is, the game has a point system for each female
and if I want to avoid certain females, meaning I give answers that give no points, their behavior to the MC is not changing.
It might be because the game is not advanced enough but I would expect if I'm being an ass to people, the people are an ass back. ^^
and if I want to avoid certain females, meaning I give answers that give no points, their behavior to the MC is not changing.
It might be because the game is not advanced enough but I would expect if I'm being an ass to people, the people are an ass back. ^^
- Nov 24, 2019
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I legit think you might be expecting too much from this Dev.
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It already has one that cock block the mc at every turn and is trying to take the girls from him.
- Apr 25, 2018
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Oh come on, let me dream a bit. ^^
Sadly enough, this Dev is not the only one with that problem.
It's just avoiding sex, f*cking through a game, no progression in a game or game over.
I understand that creating the opposite route is way more work but then,
don't create choices in the game that can direct the player to such a route or make it more believable.
Sorry, I'm ranting.
- Dec 9, 2017
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I am just hoping that at least 1 love interest stays faithfull to the male mc
So far none of the girls fit that criteria
So far none of the girls fit that criteria
- Jun 21, 2018
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You know this equality sex thing
Dreaming must be one of the best things in this world sadly not all dreams come trueI am just hoping that at least 1 love interest stays faithfull to the male mc
So far none of the girls fit that criteria
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Meh they say equality sex
But thats just a cover up for Love interests getting all banged by others
So u as the male mc either let ureself be cucked by ur future Love interests
Or u stay single as the male mc for the entire game
- Nov 24, 2019
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Meh they say equality sex
But thats just a cover up for Love interests getting all banged by others
So u as the male mc either let ureself be cucked by ur future Love interests
Or u stay single as the male mc for the entire game
Or you try to stay single,and the game still forces you to have sex with them. Because equality and shiz
LOL evidently the M/C in "Naughty Magic" and the M/C in this one live in the same neighborhood and go to the same college! The sister Ellie and the M/C jogged right past "Indi's" house from "Naughty Magic".