Nice start. Pretty much kinetic/on rails fantasy/magical story with a few minor choices but was interesting enough to keep me reading for the hour or so it took to get through it. Ellie is cute enough to want to see more and the other girls/women are all different enough to add a bit of variety.
Probably too many "single choices" where you have to click to progress (ask about school... read reply, Ask about grandma... read reply... Hug Ellie.... None of this is optional, you simply have to select the single option to move to the next line/scene. Not really sure these add anything and removing 90% of them would probably make it less of an annoyance.
Now for those 3 letters that have seen most of the thread removed(more than once) There are unavoidable scenes of other male characters having sex with one of the girls seen from her pov, Guessing this is likely to happen again in future as an additional two sessions were agreed upon and part of the story magical mechanic requires sexual energy to enable characters to travel so if this sort of stuff triggers you it would probably be best to avoid the game.