By the way, the fight scene I think you can save and make Mary seem less bitchy and just remove the whole beginning with Kendo making Kendo want to flirt with Mary but holding back because of Satoshi keep the drinking and advice scenes but postpone the flirting by doing the M points only with Erina's events in the beginning and only keeping the first scene in the bathroom with kendo to wake up Mary but that's it and then making the events all erotic with Satoshi doing the fight and making Mary try imitate Natisuki because she saw that the roleplay made Sotoshi excited and say that his old boyfriends would have no problem with that but Satoshi is intimidated and actually calls her a bitch but before he has time to apologize Mary runs out and bumps into his uncle again crying, the uncle, who knows what his nephew is like, realizes that he is intimidated and jealous and only speaks out of anger, but at the same time he decides to stop holding back so much, he tells Mary that he can solve things, she tells the uncle that she would thank him, he's just less perverted and then you take the events you cut out and start using them, that would be much better, but it starts with drinking with your uncle, groping her breasts and ass with her half drunk, the second from the shower for her to see Kendo's dick for the first time at the same time it plays all the events of the cut playing normally until the blowjob but without the fight because satoshi has already done the shit and plays to the scene of satoshi sleeping in mary's bed beach the same way he is now and everything goes as it goes from now on, I think this would make the uncle's character become a giga chad and Mary's character wouldn't just be a bitch just a disappointed girl who doesn't want to see her boyfriend at the moment and Satoshi can use the reason of guilt and he doesn't know how to talk to her even after making up Since he is a bit of a coward leaving Mary with her uncle all the time this will save the uncle's character and the Mary's, well, it's only going to make Satoshi's worse, but this is better for the netorare
