I really like the story and most quests are really nice made.
But:
No visual sex scenes only text.
I do not play such RPGM games, because of the sex scenes. It would be cool if there are nice animated scenes, but I can live without it. So I do not count it in my rating!!!
My worst problem is that this game is not written from the players point of view.
- The player has not enough informations to decide what he should choose to invest in.
- Or during Yarra's path it is not clear if you are succesful or not.
- there are so many different hidden stats the player do not know about and how they change: good or bad.
- when travel back to Stineford for example the MC says: "There is no overriding deadline. " But this is wrong. you have only <16 days. And 15 from these days are automatically gone through travelling. So you can't reach the best result . Next best result is 24 days, which is the absolute minimum. So you need to ignore some stuff. Those are mostly worthless for you, but this information you do not have.
But event worst, you can rest in a bed unlimited days which do not count.
How should the player find out how to get a good or best result.
So you need a Walkthrough! There is a wiki with a walkthrough, but if you want to know what to do, you need to have 5-10 pages open and check even more to find your informations.
Normally I have open:
- Walkthrough,
- Quests,
- Relationships,
- different character pages
- Secret Stats,
- Secrets and collectibles,
- Shopping,
- Investment Walkthrough
- Ch2 travel timer (or others depending on what you are doing)
- maybe a playthrough page, hoping to get the right information on it...
Very hard fights
For example in Stinford you get problems in some areas. Those are no fun. But you can't do some stuff later or do not get some items or even worst if you do them later.
Flow of time
It is hard to understand why sometimes why are few days are gone.
Especially later on Simon's path, no explanation why it jumps from 6-8 and after it to 26.
Or why after few fights suddenly are 5 days gone.
Qum D'umpe
It is made clear several times that the party succubi want as much sex as possible. Qum want it even more. But most of the time if there could be a scene for her, she do not want it and it is bad for you if she does it.
As I said I really like the story and the characters. But please start to write the story from the players point of view. Let the player see what he is doing and give options to find out how he can proceed. Show if the player is unsuccessful so it is possible to try it again.
But:
No visual sex scenes only text.
I do not play such RPGM games, because of the sex scenes. It would be cool if there are nice animated scenes, but I can live without it. So I do not count it in my rating!!!
My worst problem is that this game is not written from the players point of view.
- The player has not enough informations to decide what he should choose to invest in.
- Or during Yarra's path it is not clear if you are succesful or not.
- there are so many different hidden stats the player do not know about and how they change: good or bad.
- when travel back to Stineford for example the MC says: "There is no overriding deadline. " But this is wrong. you have only <16 days. And 15 from these days are automatically gone through travelling. So you can't reach the best result . Next best result is 24 days, which is the absolute minimum. So you need to ignore some stuff. Those are mostly worthless for you, but this information you do not have.
But event worst, you can rest in a bed unlimited days which do not count.
How should the player find out how to get a good or best result.
So you need a Walkthrough! There is a wiki with a walkthrough, but if you want to know what to do, you need to have 5-10 pages open and check even more to find your informations.
Normally I have open:
- Walkthrough,
- Quests,
- Relationships,
- different character pages
- Secret Stats,
- Secrets and collectibles,
- Shopping,
- Investment Walkthrough
- Ch2 travel timer (or others depending on what you are doing)
- maybe a playthrough page, hoping to get the right information on it...
Very hard fights
For example in Stinford you get problems in some areas. Those are no fun. But you can't do some stuff later or do not get some items or even worst if you do them later.
Flow of time
It is hard to understand why sometimes why are few days are gone.
Especially later on Simon's path, no explanation why it jumps from 6-8 and after it to 26.
Or why after few fights suddenly are 5 days gone.
Qum D'umpe
It is made clear several times that the party succubi want as much sex as possible. Qum want it even more. But most of the time if there could be a scene for her, she do not want it and it is bad for you if she does it.
As I said I really like the story and the characters. But please start to write the story from the players point of view. Let the player see what he is doing and give options to find out how he can proceed. Show if the player is unsuccessful so it is possible to try it again.